The Iaijutsu Slash in a World on the Brink of Collapse

Generally speaking, it's okay. It's just that Chi You's Honkai Energy value was filled in incorrectly by one million hw. It's not that high in the end.

This article mainly tells the story of the protagonist Chen Wang playing with the sword module in the Honkai world, acting as Him's younger brother, and fighting against Honkai at the same time. This story is really sweet. (Inside information) ~ Saitama from One Punch Man will appear in the later stage, (the final boss is the god and Star Wolf in the comic)

The protagonist has always been obsessed with drawing his sword and slashing. Why not brush up his attributes if he can? 5000 Is not enough for me to brush up to 5W, 50W, 500W. What kind of little Karami can't be killed with one sword? System tasks, source stone acquisition, only 2 tasks or more than a dozen achievements in a few months, I can't even afford the Breathing Technique, the time in the Time House does not flow, I can master all the martial arts, but to draw a sword to kill, you have to suppress the protagonist's strength, and you still have such a big attack? Swing the sword to increase attributes, what moves are you looking for? Just brush it, and there is no big change in the plot.

It's great to see my ancestor experience it himself.

The protagonist seems to be very strong, but there are various restrictions that overwhelm the protagonist. He often gets scratched during battles.

I have also read your chapter descriptions, but I still have the same point of view, that is, the first element of a novel is to make people feel comfortable. There are also many novels that are not invincible. Some are very comfortable and smooth to read, while others are not so good and have a very poor look and feel. You obviously belong to the latter, and it may be your description. The method and control of the plot are not enough, but what I want to praise is that you did not make the protagonist have a tragic past or something. It is good to watch this kind of thing once in a while, but it is embarrassing to watch too much. To be honest, your protagonist has too many flaws, and there is not much to say. Work hard.

I really like the author's way of writing this kind of fanfic, because the author does not deliberately give the protagonist some sad and painful past or a very unique character, such as being very cold or crazy, but very close to us in reality, which gives me a better sense of immersion. The fanfics I read always have the protagonist with memory loss, emotional loss, and a strange appearance. Although the ratings of those are very high, I still prefer this kind of author. As long as the writing is good, this book will definitely not be bad. Hope to keep loving this book

Negative reviews are obviously putting pressure on the company.

Yes, but I hope you don't use failure to grow. People are never stupid, and growth is not always caused by failure. I don't know what the picture was about, but it showed so many original plots, so it was withdrawn.

The protagonist is super awesome. He is as awesome as the traveler next door. He can fight with gods at first, but he can be hammered by ordinary people at worst.