Shock! After Passing Through the Book, the Male Protagonists Actually

The author's character settings are very good, and the writing style is also within a very good range for foreign persimmons. The first world is very eye-catching for readers, and not surprisingly, the reader retention rate will be very high. As for why I only gave the author four stars, it was because after watching The Second World halfway through, I realized that the protagonist was a bit abusive. I really like the protagonist created by the author, but I have a tendency to dislike a character when I like him, so I don't like the protagonist to be deflated. But the author's writing is very good and the characters are very interesting. I hope many people will like the author's articles in the future.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! ! ! The character design is so interesting! ! ! ! It's a contest between the protagonist and the system. The protagonist is really smart! ! ! Tattoos are also very interesting! ! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Love][Love][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Is the character design of the second world broken?

The description of the protagonist's character is particularly enjoyable. I especially like the first small world. The sense of oppression and excitement from the big boss made me want to stop. Although the later senses were a little worse, it was generally good. There are also some settings that are quite novel! What attracts me is that the protagonist is powerful and emotional. He is not the kind of person who only stays for one person. I like the true sense of two strong characters! ! ! The two strong men I am talking about are not the two strong men in terms of force. The two strong men in many tweets are just the two strong men in force. They will deliberately portray the protagonist as delicate and white. This makes me confused? But the main character in this book perfectly fits the strong character I had in mind! That kind of physical and mental strength left me deeply impressed! ! ! I hope this book is a hit! ! ❤️🎉🎉🎉The author must update frequently! It's not enough to read at all 😭, I only read it for a few hours and finished it. It's really too little. I'm especially looking forward to the plot at the end~ I also hope that more people will be attracted by this book 😃 Come on! Great author! I support you! ! ! (*^ω^*)

It's okay, especially the first world, the characters are amazing. Halfway through The Second World, the plot gave me the illusion of being at the end of my rope [face covering]. There were a few chapters where I wondered if it was stuck, but as I watched it, I suddenly felt that it was as bland as water and tasteless. The main plot of the book is also very unclear, and it feels like a little daily story-telling. Sometimes some details feel like the author wants to write a big story. I guess they will be revealed in the next century, but the second world is really bland when you look at it. The second world is really long and not very interesting. Compared with the first world, it has a main storyline. At present, the second world seems to be a dispute between a few men, and the tasks are not clear. The main system thinks and comes up one by one. So the main plot feels very vague and has nothing to do. It's not the plot that drives the characters to have emotions, but the emotions that drive the dispensable plot [laughing and crying] In addition, the characters and other images have also undergone some changes with the changes in the world based on the original basis (it is understandable that I feel that there is no big problem in the character design, but I feel that I have changed from a big boss to a middle child, and the sense of strategy is gone, and it has developed a bit towards pure recklessness, but it is also in line with the background of the character who does whatever he wants). The difference from the previous world is not small, and it seems that he has really become a group of stupid high school students. The overall plot is pretty good. From the first and middle of the second world, various character descriptions have appeared many times in the style of ancient romance novels. For example, if the male protagonist just leans in and doesn't move, others will think of his character, which is out of touch with the world, slightly world-weary, and so on. Sometimes I feel like I almost caught up with the fan chart eyes [laughing and crying] (not a shortcoming). The main reason is that there are some weird supporting characters and bizarre plot designs that are embarrassing, such as the secretary of the third male fan, and the teacher Ye who reads the love letter, not to mention that she snatches the love letter and even reads it. After reading it, I realized something was wrong. Is it possible? I still didn't recognize the handwriting. It's completely inconsistent with reality and the character's personality. While watching, for a sudden moment, the reader may have an emotion - boring.

🍅Upper-middle level writing. It's so spiritual and the writing style is also very sophisticated. The writing style of The Third World is simply unparalleled and explosive. The literature and art are not pretentious and are very touching. The plot of the first world is very exciting, but the second world starts to provide foreshadowing and foreshadowing. Looking at it as a whole, it is hard to imagine that this is the author's first article. It is very complete and complete. Moreover, the one who receives the treasure is the strongest. It feels so good to save oneself. Qi Bao is the best in the world. The ending about the system is a bit hasty, but regardless, the little couple 99 Qibao will be happy hahh

I really like how Qi Ye is careless yet in control of the situation, and feels at ease. He unconsciously and deliberately shows off his sexiness and charm. It's amazing.

The protagonist is well-characterized and the plot is interesting (the protagonist has to dress up as a woman, so please avoid lightning by yourself) It's a rare potential in a new article, but the plot still needs polishing, and there are a lot of confusions in character names. Please be careful to review it after finishing the article (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

The character design of the protagonist is very cool, and the content is also very good. It's just that the protagonist is sometimes too controlled by others, which is not very pleasant. Also, a warning to all the teachers who want to watch Pure Love, because it is sliced, each story has different characters and multiple people. But it should all be sliced, if teachers mind, eat it with caution. (Because the author hasn't finished the update yet, maybe I will come back and add stars later. Anyway, this article is really enjoyable so far) Thank you for your hard work [Sending heartfelt messages] [Blowing kisses] So far it's pretty good, but the rating is too low. What's going on? Although it has some minor flaws, it is still a very good book. Some mediocre articles have higher ratings than this one. This low rating makes me feel a little abnormal [face covering]

Very cool. . Goddess. . It's just super cool. . The main system is such a bad thing, I hope my wife will discipline him in the future.

It's very good-looking. Each character is very three-dimensional and diverse. The characters and emotions are also well depicted. The world view is also huge. There are many pitfalls. It's very good-looking, especially the protagonist. The little girl who is at the master level [admiration] is so happy to watch.

It's very interesting. Some people say that the second world is frustrating, but I think it's okay. Maybe it's because the second world is about campus, and the protagonist is not as arrogant and unruly as the first world (?) Anyway, it's a little restrained, but it's still good.

Overall, it's okay. The protagonist has a good personality, is independent and courageous, and doesn't rely on others. However, some settings feel a bit lacking and not clearly written. However, the interaction between the protagonists is quite interesting and is still worth watching.

It's very beautiful😭The characters are not broken at all👍🏻The plot is not as rich as the characters, but it's really very beautiful [Sending my heart]

It's very, very beautiful. Every character in it is full of sexual tension, and the emotions are very touching. [Adoration][Adoration] Simply put, this is a book with great potential, and it will definitely reach high marks. Come on, author! 🥰（づ￣3￣）づ╭❤～

Super, super, super, super, super, super recommendation. It's very, very beautiful. I don't know what words to use to describe it, but this is the only book that I can't find fault with. It's really 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 After looking at the back, there is something special. Yeah, it looks good. This unexpected development [crazy][crazy][crazy], very good-looking.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, I can appreciate the charm of the protagonist of "Happy Crime" He's going to become Qi Ye's poisonous Wei! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's really good. In fact, the ending was something I didn't expect. When the clues were connected one by one in the last world, all the doubts were really clear. The writing was better than I thought. I thought it was a gimmick when I first read it.

I'm quite picky and will give up if I don't like anything. This one is really beautiful. The reversal of the ending really shocked me. The foreshadowing is very good. I didn't expect it when I watched it, but I suddenly realized it when I saw it. The author's writing is very good, and there are many ambiguous moments that made me unable to resist the character. The character of the supporting character is also very good, and the setting of the system is something I didn't expect when I read it [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

It's so cool for me, it's so cool for me, it's so cool for me, it's so cool for me [Adoration]

The first world is so cool, so handsome, so indifferent, a cool guy, the second world is weakened into a spoiled wife [what], the first world is the best, with that sense of freedom, the neatness and ruthlessness of the shots [Punch out] [Punch out] [Punch out] [Punch out] It's so good that I peed

It's still delicious so far

WTF, WTF, WTF, WTF. It feels so damn good. The goddess makes me so happy. Evil people will be punished by evil people. It feels so good.

Good-looking, just one word - cool

Refreshing, energetic [admiration]

I go, this novel is so good, it's really special, special, special. I've already finished reading the first plane. I can't calm down after reading it because it's so enjoyable. Ahhhhhhhhhh it's so beautiful, the second world is so beautiful, even more beautiful than the first world, it's really beautiful. !

Damn, it's a really good book with great potential. It's a good read. Hurry, rush.

This is really good. I don't know why the rating is so low. The characters and plot are great. I love this kind of dog training.

This book is so beautiful. Qi Ye really forced me to read it. I felt really good reading it.

It's so cool😌, but the exhaust fumes🚗 are a bit rare😤[laugh][laugh][laugh]