"Although this is a game, it is no joke." [Sword Art Online fan, no system]
Gabriel, the late Sword Art Online villain, is also the final boss of the UW chapter, "Dark God Vecta".
Yuuki Koichiro: "Why did my good brother become my brother-in-law?"
Kirito: "We agreed to be solo players together, how could you be kidnapped by a female player?"
Gabriel: "... I don't know anything... I'm also very helpless..."
The mysterious next-generation game "SAO Sword Art Online" is online. GAME OVER means "real death". No one can leave until it is "completely conquered"!
Reader comments
I only give you one suggestion: the author should not be confused between the big and small kings, and don't write about Kirito all the time. I feel that Kirito has more scenes than the protagonist [smile]
I just want to know in which chapter does Sugou Nobu's death occur? [Sinister smile]
Not bad, I can stick to it this afternoon.
It's okay, I just hope that the main character is still the main character, instead of writing a bunch of supporting characters every few pictures, as if they can't distinguish the priorities, and the main line is dragged out. Supporting characters can be written as side stories. Otherwise it feels too delayed.
Maybe it's because the score has just been opened so the rating is not high. I quite like it. The plot is very smooth and suitable for those who like Sword Art Online. It is a fanfic with a light novel flavor. The author is also familiar with the original Sword Art series. (The chapters where the main perspective is Kirito/Poh are also quite interesting.
Uh-huh, I thought the male protagonist would be with the beautiful sister who was his childhood sweetheart at the beginning. Now it seems that Kirito is going to be separated. How can I fix it? QAQ, Kirito in this book is also very cute! I hope the author will treat Kirito better (
I forgot to mention that this book is relatively slow to read, but it is more suitable for fans to read.
Where's Mitt? Asuna and Mitte formed a team from the very beginning. They are friends in real life. Why didn't they see Mitte? What you wrote so far is that Asuna hasn't gone out yet, but Mitte is definitely by her side at this point in time.
Yes, there is a description of Asuna's psychological growth process, but the image of her childhood sweetheart lacks characterization and the character is not three-dimensional. I hope the author can not fully develop the character in the later stage.
Don't commit suicide! Author [please update]
Asuna can be given to Kirito, but Alice must take it
The writing is good, but it describes too much about Grandpa Tong, so I deducted one point.
Well written, please keep up the good work.
Very good. Keep it up.
It's a great sword and sword fanfic. The plot description is very good and there are a lot of foreshadowing details. It can be seen that the author is a real sword and sword fan. Many of them are original and have many plot settings in the game. They are currently slow but very interesting.
Very nice! Support! Come on, author. The characterization is very detailed and the plot arrangement is relatively novel. It is the best I have seen so far. I hope the author can update more if he has time! [Laugh]
Come on, keep improving.
Swordsman, I'm waiting and watching.
There are very few sword articles. This is a pretty good book. I hope the author will continue to work hard.
It looks good, but I hope to keep the original cp
It's pretty good, at least it's obviously someone who has checked the information and has a certain understanding of the plot and characters of the original work, so it doesn't look out of place.
The author writes so detailedly, I like Asuna the most.
The content is worth reading.
Very good author, cheers up
I haven't found any poisonous points yet, so I'll keep it for now and wait until I have a heroine to watch.
The author has given you some tips. You must read them all if you read them. Also, you must keep updating [I'm about to cry]
The speed update is simply not enough. Start your life with Asuna as soon as possible [laughing]
Keep at it, author of Conscience Treasures. Come on!
If you keep it, you will die.
I feel like Asuna doesn't need to be taken down by fans.
I feel like Asuna doesn't need to be captured by Kirito.
I only give you one suggestion: the author should not be confused between the big and small kings, and don't write about Kirito all the time. I feel that Kirito has more scenes than the protagonist [smile]
I just want to know in which chapter does Sugou Nobu's death occur? [Sinister smile]
Not bad, I can stick to it this afternoon. It's okay, I just hope that the main character is still the main character, instead of writing a bunch of supporting characters every few pictures, as if they can't distinguish the priorities, and the main line is dragged out. Supporting characters can be written as side stories. Otherwise it feels too delayed.
Maybe it's because the score has just been opened so the rating is not high. I quite like it. The plot is very smooth and suitable for those who like Sword Art Online. It is a fanfic with a light novel flavor. The author is also familiar with the original Sword Art series. (The chapters where the main perspective is Kirito/Poh are also quite interesting. Uh-huh, I thought the male protagonist would be with the beautiful sister who was his childhood sweetheart at the beginning. Now it seems that Kirito is going to be separated. How can I fix it? QAQ, Kirito in this book is also very cute! I hope the author will treat Kirito better ( I forgot to mention that this book is relatively slow to read, but it is more suitable for fans to read.
Where's Mitt? Asuna and Mitte formed a team from the very beginning. They are friends in real life. Why didn't they see Mitte? What you wrote so far is that Asuna hasn't gone out yet, but Mitte is definitely by her side at this point in time.
Yes, there is a description of Asuna's psychological growth process, but the image of her childhood sweetheart lacks characterization and the character is not three-dimensional. I hope the author can not fully develop the character in the later stage. Don't commit suicide! Author [please update]
Asuna can be given to Kirito, but Alice must take it
The writing is good, but it describes too much about Grandpa Tong, so I deducted one point.
Well written, please keep up the good work.
Very good. Keep it up.
It's a great sword and sword fanfic. The plot description is very good and there are a lot of foreshadowing details. It can be seen that the author is a real sword and sword fan. Many of them are original and have many plot settings in the game. They are currently slow but very interesting.
Very nice! Support! Come on, author. The characterization is very detailed and the plot arrangement is relatively novel. It is the best I have seen so far. I hope the author can update more if he has time! [Laugh]
Come on, keep improving.
Swordsman, I'm waiting and watching.
There are very few sword articles. This is a pretty good book. I hope the author will continue to work hard.
It looks good, but I hope to keep the original cp
It's pretty good, at least it's obviously someone who has checked the information and has a certain understanding of the plot and characters of the original work, so it doesn't look out of place.
The author writes so detailedly, I like Asuna the most.
The content is worth reading.
Very good author, cheers up
I haven't found any poisonous points yet, so I'll keep it for now and wait until I have a heroine to watch.
The author has given you some tips. You must read them all if you read them. Also, you must keep updating [I'm about to cry]
The speed update is simply not enough. Start your life with Asuna as soon as possible [laughing]
Keep at it, author of Conscience Treasures. Come on!
If you keep it, you will die.
I feel like Asuna doesn't need to be taken down by fans. I feel like Asuna doesn't need to be captured by Kirito.
If Asuna is involved, I will give it 5 stars.
Very nice fanfic
The heroine won't be Asuna, right? 😅
Good luck so far