An Ordinary Konoha Genin

Unlike other crumb authors. Take the original work to get the word count. It is explained entirely from the protagonist's first perspective. I hope it can keep updating

The plot is okay so far, but some characters appear early, but that doesn't matter, as long as the plot is okay, these are minor problems.

Among the Naruto fanfics, the civilian series, this is the best one. I have seen too many time travels by Uchiha or Hinata, and they all end up heading for the Six Paths. It is very refreshing, and the power is not just for boasting, but it feels too samey. To be able to defeat Otsutsuki, he must be a six-path master? Can't win without Liu Dao? Can't we develop the secret technique of restraint based on intelligence? Even if Xiao Li's physical skills explode, it's good...

The plot is bland, but not plain water. The protagonist's hiding here and there is quite interesting. I look forward to it breaking out in the mid-term.

I hope Orochimaru can become Hokage

I give Tomato Naruto a 9.0. There are no cheats, no harem, and the story is smooth. It is a relatively separate story, without any unnecessary unnecessary content. It seemed to end very quickly, but it was also very reasonable.

It's good to watch. Currently, the main character has no big plot, Naruto's original character design has not collapsed, and the plot advancement is not rigid. The timeline is just a bit messy. I'll leave it as my own for now. I hope Orochimaru will be the Hokage. Good luck to you, the author.

Although the time is confusing. However, the writing is pretty good. The main character is like a little sun like Minato. It's another style Not bad

The content is not expressive, just some encouragement.

The two problems are the timeline and the introduction of the characters. If you can keep reading, it will be a good book. If you can't stand it, I didn't say it, but I think it is worth reading. At least it is one of the few Naruto movies that I think is good.

It's a rare masterpiece, master-level writing, and there are no routines in the story. It's all original. Except for the author's unfamiliarity with the Naruto timeline, there really aren't any shortcomings. When I saw the end, I felt a sense of regret as I had when I watched the finale of Naruto where Naruto got married.

It's great to watch, but the timeline is a bit messy, but it's very relaxing to watch and less confusing.

The timelines of some of the characters don't match up a bit, but that doesn't stop this book from being quite enjoyable.

Generally speaking, it's okay. The disadvantage is that the appearance time of some characters has been adjusted too much. For example, Xiangling appeared during World War II.

Yes, it's already outstanding without describing Gou as a coward.

I have a small question, why was Anko born so early? Isn't she from Kakashi's class?

Harem? Why are you interested in the protagonist?

The writing is good. The ages of Xiang Ling and Kimimaro should not match the original work.

Author, what is the timing of Xiang Xi's appearance here? About ten years too early

This is one of the dozens of good novels that I think can be found anywhere else.

No? Is this timeline a little too active?

It's quite interesting. I hope Orochimaru can be portrayed in the future as someone who is on the right path but takes the wrong approach. I recently watched the movie Infernal Affairs and I liked the feeling of Yang Jinrong played by Li Ming.

Although the timeline is a bit messy, it does not affect the overall look and feel. The writing style is still very good and the characters are well portrayed.

It is indeed a good work, but the ending is a bit rushed and the portrayal of the characters is relatively full, but the pace is still a bit rushed at the end. I hope the next work will be better.

Except for some people's timelines being wrong, everything else is pretty good.

What about the evaluation of a book friend who has read this book for so long? The pace of this book is very enjoyable. If I have to say, if you don't like the reckless style of fighting every day, you will definitely like this. Of course, I like the character of Orochimaru very much, so if you can't accept the character of Orochimaru, you still don't accept this book very well.

Come on, author. I am raising books. When did I become Hokage? I read it in one sitting

It was only when I read the latest chapter that I realized I didn't give it 5 stars. Big cheers for the author!

Wasn't Hongdou during the Third World War? Why did it appear during the Second World War?

I gave it 4 stars. The one star I am missing is due to the timeline issue. After all, the best timeline for fan fiction should be similar to the original work. If you ignore the timeline, it is a good book.