[Shuangwen + Not the Holy Mother + System + Villain + Monster + Decisive Killing]
Qiu Jin stayed up late at night reading novels under the covers. When he opened his eyes, he found that he was in a strange place.
In the quiet room, a white-haired loli suddenly appeared out of thin air.
This loli has no good intentions and dares to covet her own beauty.
Qiu Jin's mind went blank, and his only thought was...
I haven't woken up from my dream yet...
It wasn't until the system appeared that Qiu Jin realized that he had traveled through time!
Travel through time and become a supporting role as a brainless villain, rich second-generation cannon fodder!
Fortunately, the system awakened early. In order to survive, Qiu Jin had to strike hard at the Daughter of Luck.
Don't ask why he is not the son of luck, the question is: the aura of luck is too heaven-defying, you can't beat him!
…
Qingmei, the son of luck: "You are a good person, but I like brother Qiu Jin."
Sister of the Son of Luck: "You don't know him at all, why do you want to break us up? He is the best person in the world."
With a somewhat crazy smile, the white-haired loli leaned close to Qiu Jin's ear and whispered, "Brother, are you having fun?"
…
Steal opportunities, snatch secret treasures, and dig out the heroine.
Qiu Jin reached the pinnacle of his life by robbing his lucky son.
Tens of thousands of years later, Qiu Jin killed countless children of destiny.
[Ding~ A new son of destiny has been born.
Qiu Jin: "Finally come to life!"
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This is my first attempt at writing a novel, and I am self-taught. There must be many shortcomings, and I hope everyone can give me some pointers. If you mention the bad parts, I will take suggestions for improvement. (If you use bad words to hurt others, please be gentle)
Although I haven't watched it much, I still want to evaluate it. Do you know why you can't retain people? It's not that the writing is bad, it's that it's not fascinating, it's not essential, interesting, funny, etc. It's already amazing that it's successful for the first time. Come on
It looks okay, give me some encouragement [laughing evilly]
There should be no one who has watched it longer than me, so I'll just tell you a few points.
1. The author's writing is sometimes good and sometimes bad. He is indeed a novice.
2. I feel that the author has amnesia. Did he stay up late and update too much? Either he has forgotten what he has done before, or he is on the way to forgetting.
3. The plot is quite novel, but the writing is not very good.
4. It would be better if some laughter is incorporated into the
Coding is not easy, reward a five-star review This is my first attempt at writing a novel, and I am self-taught. There must be many shortcomings, and I hope everyone can give me some pointers. If you mention the bad parts, I will take suggestions for improvement. (If you use bad words to hurt others, please be gentle)
Although I haven't watched it much, I still want to evaluate it. Do you know why you can't retain people? It's not that the writing is bad, it's that it's not fascinating, it's not essential, interesting, funny, etc. It's already amazing that it's successful for the first time. Come on
It looks okay, give me some encouragement [laughing evilly] There should be no one who has watched it longer than me, so I'll just tell you a few points. 1. The author's writing is sometimes good and sometimes bad. He is indeed a novice. 2. I feel that the author has amnesia. Did he stay up late and update too much? Either he has forgotten what he has done before, or he is on the way to forgetting. 3. The plot is quite novel, but the writing is not very good. 4. It would be better if some laughter is incorporated into the