Seize the Opportunity at the Beginning, the Strongest Path to Immortality

Super powerful heroine, no CP, cool writing. The disadvantage is that there are too few female characters. The female protagonist is very lucky and has a lot of resources. She gives away resources lavishly to masters, apprentices, ancestors, senior brothers, clan leaders, and sect elders, all of whom are men. There are only two supporting female characters, a mother and a cousin who are always under the care of the heroine. The other supporting female characters are basically love brains. I hope the author will write more supporting female characters next time so that more supporting female characters can benefit.

Very good, the writing on immortality is relatively good, especially this kind of time-traveling novel, which is not familiar.

The book has a wonderful and novel beginning, the writing is delicate yet humorous, the story is exciting and ups and downs, and the character descriptions are not superficial and superficial (the so-called decent, handsome, beautiful and wise, the villain is crooked, ugly, stupid). One suggestion is that I hope that the fighting style will be more fantasy and majestic (not the fight between mortal martial arts masters), and that the fighting style of high-level monks will show the power of the rules of heaven and earth. Come on, author! ! "The way of heaven is to make up for the deficiency with excess; the way of man is to make up for the deficiency with excess." "Heaven has the virtue of good life, and the earth has the depth to carry things."

I enjoyed reading this book, and there were basically no major flaws. Among them, one of the highlights in my opinion is Xue Qing. Xue Qing is a rare monster who didn't make me unhappy even for a moment in the whole book. Compared to many contracted beasts in books that are proud, stupid, useless and whose owners bother their owners, Xue Qing is a breath of fresh air. It is the heroine's most effective assistant on her journey of cultivation. She is powerful and considerate, which is really good. It is also rare for the heroine's apprentice to not be annoying because the heroine has to pay too much. The important characters are well portrayed and well worth watching [Blowing Kisses] Thank you to the author for writing this work and bringing me a happy time [heartfelt]

This novel about cultivating immortals by the author is really wonderful. I don't understand why the rating is not high. It may be because there are not many updates. But from my perspective, as long as the author continues to maintain this level and has one or two million words, this novel will definitely become popular. Although the timing is a bit too good, this is a female channel. Girls still prefer to read novels that are a little refreshing and not too exaggerated. It's just right. After all, if there is no opportunity for a novel about cultivating immortals, I feel that I have no motivation to read it. If the opportunity is too exaggerated from the beginning, I will have no motivation to continue reading. The author is particularly good at this article. Opportunities are obtained through experience. People can't help but indulge in the heroine's vision and follow the heroine to experience those dangerous and interesting experiences. Please keep updating [Like][Like][Like]

It's quite good-looking, but the rating is on the low side, maybe because the heroine is too independent, and maybe she's too lucky. Although the heroine also works hard, too many opportunities make it appear that the heroine relies on external forces. Overall, it's okay. I hope that after I ascend to the upper world, I can write about an experience of reaching great power by myself without relying on good luck. Just leave this world, there is no need to save the world, your good luck will be gone, and you need to fight on your own. I have read more than 600 chapters, so I will come back to review. Generally it's pretty good looking. It's just that the heroine is a little too sentimental, which doesn't mean it's bad to be sentimental. The Yun family is like a three-year-old child holding gold. The heroine can be supportive, but it feels overdone. Especially after ascension, you have to go back and bring things from the fairy world to your parents and teachers. Whatever realm you are in, prepare the best things for them. This is the best. It's a bit speechless to come back to deliver things after going to the fairy world. It's good to know that each of you is okay. After all, this is a fairy tale, and it's a bit unaccustomed to describe family relationships excessively.

It is a very attractive novel about cultivating immortals. It is enjoyable all the way and does not feel aggrieved.

After reading so many novels, the character of this heroine is my favorite. This heroine's character and outlook are just right, I like her very much. No matter how long you have been cultivating immortality, you still retain the warmth of family affection in your heart. Unlike many immortal cultivators who lose all family ties and friendships as they practice cultivation, they only practice cultivation, and their memories will be blank until the end. This heroine is different. She still loves her parents no matter how long it takes, and she also supports and supports the family. But don't worry too much. No, Holy Mother, you will be as ruthless as you need to be. But it's not like those heroines in other novels who become arrogant and domineering when they have the ability. This heroine doesn't have that, and I like her very much. Not cowardly either. It's not like some novels where the heroine likes to make noises. This heroine won't be like that, this heroine's character is just right. The three views are also very correct.

Suitable for my taste. Like! Don't collapse later! Publish more chapters to gain popularity! The name is too bad and not attractive enough!

Very nice, highly recommended for upgrades In the first 30 chapters or so, the heroine's portrayal is a bit strange. She may want to express caution, but she is described as being afraid of this and that, timid and frustrated. But the plot description was okay, so I skipped reading. Fortunately, the heroine's character became stable after about 40 chapters. Fortunately I persevered. It is not easy to cultivate immortal literature. It has been several years since there has been a cultivator who can read the entire book. The character design of this book is very good in every aspect, and the plot is not long-winded or watery. It is very compact and logical. I highly recommend it.

It is a cool novel without any ambiguous emotional scenes. The heroine is dedicated to the Tao, her luck is against the heavens, her cultivation is smooth, and she can collect all kinds of natural and earthly treasures. Although he started to fight against the original male protagonist, he soon realized that he should focus on hitting the other person occasionally instead of just staring at the other person and repeatedly slapping him in the face. The writing of upgrading and various treasure hunts is quite appropriate. I read this book before and it was also a chance to grab Long Aotian. Just staring at Long Aotian, I saw 40% of the story. I just broke through the Qi training, and the secret treasure hunt competition and other plots were written over and over during the Qi training period. In the Panshi Realm, there is a villain consciousness that needs to be fought. It's quite exciting to watch. But when you go to the Immortal Realm, it feels a bit ordinary. You don't need many things and you can practice it all day long. Overall, it's not bad.

Finally, it's just that the male protagonist is so handsome, the female protagonist is so beautiful, and the male and female protagonists look at each other in a daze and act like a nymphomaniac! It's cool to write without CP. Family unity never lasts. No matter whether it is the lower world or the upper world, the sects protect harmony and harmony. Only when the world is awake can the heroine practice without any worries! [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

It is an orthodox novel about cultivating immortals. It is better than most of the novels about cultivating immortals. Moreover, the family and sect atmosphere in which the heroine lives has always been very good. The heroine ascended and her parents also changed their fate and ascended. The master, senior brothers and apprentices also ascended one after another. It is also a bit regretful that the contract beasts Yaori and Bingbai that the heroine raised since childhood did not play a role from the beginning to the end. In the end, the heroine ascended without taking them with her, and they did not follow up later. It was really the heroine who raised them little by little when she was young...

This book is good, the plot development is reasonable, and there are no surprises. As long as the author maintains this level of quality. The rating is definitely not low

It's very good-looking, the female protagonist is very strong, but the original male protagonist is so good at jumping around, and his opportunities are so good. I'm really afraid that the female protagonist will be seduced by him at some point. He's sinister and vicious.

It's good to watch. I love watching the heroine hunt for treasures. The characters and animals created by the author are also very interesting, and the pitfalls are basically filled in. The story is coherent and the writing is good. The heroine is relatively weak in the early stage, so she is more stubborn. Later, she becomes invincible in the world. Moreover, the heroine does not indulge in love and concentrates on training. I hope the author can maintain this and not drop the male protagonist in the later stage.

3.5+, The inheritance of the Immortal Master, the Yin-Yang Body, and the Qiankun Pagoda that I obtained at the beginning basically solved 90% of the plot. The Tai Chi patterns moved from Qi training to the Immortal Master, and the Kung Fu and spiritual plants were all top-notch. There is a small tower in case of trouble... The villain Pan Si'an Wu Xiangshui is a bit verbose and repetitive, appearing to be mysterious. Relax and watch it all, give it a 4

It's very interesting. I read the reviews from Palace Master-level fans when Tomato was born. You don't need to read other people's reviews. Just read mine. Currently (there is no male protagonist, it should be a single female protagonist. I have read more than 600 chapters)

I watched it early in the morning and switched from Changying to write a review for the first time. The author's imagination and the logic of the development of the story are very good. It is the process of the protagonist practicing step by step, ascending through hard work and perseverance, and finally becoming a god. The details of getting along with the contracted beasts during the period are quite attractive, but at first I didn't think the introduction was that attractive. Although Goldfinger is relatively big and the villain is a bit brainless, it is fun to watch. However, if ordinary people have traveled through time, they may also have the feeling that the villain is the son of destiny, so it is still not a drama. It is worth watching. The writing is more solid than many fairy tales on Tomato. Recommend (*≧∪≦)👍🏻.

It's beautiful and very fantasy. The heroine has been helping the poor, the sect, and the family. People around the heroine get things too easily. Also, the heroine's first two contracted beasts didn't ascend with the heroine. The heroine left them in the lower world without explanation.

A true strong woman + no cp, a traditional novel about strong women cultivating immortality. I am the female protagonist, and I can't bear to have to live and die for love. This book has nothing to do with me. Of course you have to practice hard to save the world since you are already cultivating immortals. There is not so much bickering. I feel very happy after watching it.

Look at it, look at it, there is no love, there is no love, there is no ambiguity, and there are not many senior brothers, Tuan Chong, etc., They are dedicated to cultivating immortals! I hope no men will appear later to disrupt the pace of the female protagonist's cultivation of immortality! ! I just want to see the heroine conquer the world of immortality, ascend to the world of immortality, and then conquer the world of immortality! ! ! ! There is no man in my heart who draws his sword to the God of Nature! ! ! Come on, author! ! ! Qiuqiu must not have a male protagonist! ! ! !

It's not finished, but it's still pretty interesting. Is this conspiracy happening again? After practicing hard, I finally broke through the ascension. The heroine's character is quite good. Although she has some difficulties, she still works really hard. It's just that it takes a little effort to get rid of this bad guy, so I still look forward to the master's ascension. . .

This book is a cool story about a man who travels through a book and writes about a villainous female protagonist. Later, it turns out that his opportunity is to save himself from the world and choose the heroine. The heroine has good talents and good opportunities. The content of the book is a golden finger that can be predicted in advance. The heroine has a good outlook on life and is strong in abilities. Her relatives, family, and teachers are all her backing, and later they are her fetters. She spreads her wings in a loving environment, defeats the male protagonist, saves the world, ascends to the fairy world, and then advances all the way, becoming the strongest in the world of immortality, and later achieves the status of a god. The road to immortality is smooth! All in all, the real book is much better than I expected!

There is no cp heroine article. The heroine kills decisively and does not kill innocent people indiscriminately. Her character is very good. I really like that you can see the ending after ascending. It feels good to read it in one go. After the heroine ascended, she avenged the owner of the small tower. There were very few top players. They were all busy cultivating immortals [laughing] They were basically fights over snatching opportunities. I felt that the small tower was really all-powerful, Xue Qing was a great housekeeper, the dragon was somewhat useful in the early stage, and the phoenix was a mascot. But the author seems to have forgotten the turtle Bingbai and the roc [face covering] the poor left-behind beasts

It's pretty good. There aren't any big flaws. The only thing may be that the heroine gives it a lot. But if you think about it carefully, the heroine has a lot of useful items, so it's not bad in comparison. Moreover, the direction of the story is very complete, and the hidden and bright lines are also very complete. In addition, several of my favorite characters have good endings, which is pretty good~ The character of the heroine is also quite successful, and it can be considered a good novel, because the heroine basically has not suffered any grievances, but there are some similarities in the settings. However, many of the current fairy tales have similar settings, so it is not a big problem. The similarity is the Dantian setting, which is relatively clear because I have seen this setting in several books, as well as the rules and so on. But it's still worth reading. It's much better than those articles that are useless and aggrieved.

This novel is a very complete novel. From the beginning to the end, other fairy tales usually end with the ascension. This novel is from the beginning to the end to the story after the ascension. It is very worth watching. The plot has no surprises. I think the author's literary talent is very good. Thank you to the author for letting me find such an excellent work. I like it very much.

No CP female strong cultivation text. It is recommended to read this book with book reviews closed. Personally, I think it is quite good. The heroine is indeed not decisive enough in her first time travel, and her compliments to others are not as clear as those of us readers from a third-party perspective. I think this is all understandable. But the shortcomings do not hide the good points. He is not a congenitally perfect protagonist, but he is always growing. The author's writing style is also good, there is not much talk, and the description of the experience in the secret realm is not homogeneous. If you want to avoid lightning, you don't need a book review section. A normal plot will lead to a lot of unreasonable judgments, saying this and that [laughing awkwardly]. The book review area in front of this book is almost full of complaints. I personally feel that these are normal, or a little inappropriate, but there is no need to be so critical [face covering]. After turning off the book reviews, the reading experience instantly improved a lot. All in all, it is a good book about CP female videos, but the author's characterizations in some places still make people biased. After the chase, there aren't many surprises later, so I give you a good review [blowing kiss]

Very nice! It fits the character of a genius who likes to grow from weak to strong, has clear and firm goals, makes no secret of his desires, but can control himself until his strength becomes stronger. Really like to look good! So can the author write more [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

The rating is low on Tomato, but it's really enjoyable. The heroine has good opportunities but is not complacent. She has a high level of understanding and is brave and resourceful in her early fight against the villain. She also helps those around her and never forgets where she came from. I really like Yun Youshu.