Urban Elf: the Road to the King of Heaven

There are no old routines (fat guy's best friend, school beauty involvement), and there is no template-like quest line (Baby Cup competition, high school competition, college competition, national competition, King of Heaven Competition [laughing awkwardly] I vomited after watching it). It's not overly childish and under-age anime. There are no vomiting Pokémon (Charizard, Gardevoir, Lucario). There is no excessive anthropomorphism of Pokémon (all are female Pokémon, and the wife monster Gardevoir makes the reader think of a slut). The major poisonous points have been basically avoided, and my own characteristics have been written. Then I feel that the protagonist is a bit too independent. He can make some appropriate friends, accept some, and invest in some talented people. After all, a person's spirit is limited, but he can still increase his voice and interests. For example, the two latest quasi-kings, although they are weak to the protagonist, are basically big bosses in the protagonist's hometown province and city, and can better increase the protagonist's voice in his hometown. Then the most important thing is the update. I read it in two or three days. I started writing it quite early, but the number of words was not many, and I realized that it had been updated before. I hope the author will work hard. It's a rare review, and it's really written to my liking.

Shennong After reading the front and middle parts, I feel that the author wants to write about Pokémon with dark interests. However, the characters written by the author earlier are a bit twitchy, and the enemies such as the dark interest stream should be more rational and not as brainless as previously written. It has a strong novice feel, but this is also the author's first book, and it is worthy of support. I hope I can learn from or learn from the Guzheng people in the middle and late stages (no enemy is a fool). Of course, if it is to advance the plot quickly, it is understandable, but if this is the case, it will be too slow.

The writing is very good. When I first read it, it was a bit of a fun read, and I was worried that it would be mindless. After reading it in one night, I felt relieved. After all, there are relatively few Pokémon novels now, and there are even fewer good-looking ones like this. The character creation is also okay. When I encounter that annoying old lady, I handle it very well. It is very enjoyable to watch. I hope the author can maintain his level in the future and create greater glory. Come on [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ]

In terms of plot and character, as a new book, I think it is very worthy of five stars. I should finish this book. The protagonist does not pursue perfection but pursues interests. This is a qualified dark novel. To be honest, this novel is either dead or alive. Everyone is so supportive of you. If you are short of money, everyone will give you free small gifts and disappear all day long. If I hadn't clicked on it suddenly, I wouldn't have known you had updated it again [smile]

Personally I think it's very beautiful! For lightning protection, look here: 1. The author sets that powerful trainers have their own aura, which can be used to suppress other people and elves. When the level is high, it can even cause material oppression. For example: the pressure of the quasi-king trainer is as heavy as a thousand pounds. 2. The protagonist cannot be regarded as a good person in the traditional sense. He can kill elves. His tenderness will only be reserved for the people and elves he recognizes. He will conquer tool pets in the early stage.

The writing is very good, and it describes the real version of Pokémon and the social relationship between Pokémon and people in the real world. The plot doesn't drag on. Unlike some Pokémon protagonists who are draggy and pretentious. Worth a look. It satisfies my desire for the darkness and reality of the relationship between Pokémon and people in the real world.

The author's writing is very real, and the writing and plot are very good, but I would like to give the author a small suggestion. Gou Daowen is most taboo about drifting in the later stage, so he starts to be cautious and reasonable. Everyone seems to be pretty good. In the later stage, the protagonist becomes stronger, which is labor and capital. What is the logic, what is unreasonable, and the non-existent labor and capital are happy. The author's writing is good. I hope this book will have good results. I will give you five stars.

I hope that the author can adjust his status and regain the style of the first half. He can try to improve the quality every week, and not only focus on the number of chapters but also the number of words, and become like the Magikarp next door. A small incident can be told for more than ten chapters. Take your time and don't be anxious. Someone will eventually read a good work. Besides, as long as it is finished, the group of book lovers will definitely come back. Come on! [Love]

This is my first review of a book I've read. I've been reading urban elf literature for a few years, and I've read some books that are more in line with my appetite. If I read too many books that have some fixed formulas, I'll feel bored and lose the desire to continue reading. This book has a novel approach, and the fact of not going to school is really eye-catching. I have read too many books about making baby cups, and now I have no desire to read the catalogs of some books. Judging from the author's degree of updating, although I know that this book may be a mess or a eunuch, I still have to thank the author for saving the book from the book shortage. I give it a five-star review. Judging from the author's writing style, it is quite good. Even if you don't write books, you can still have a job to support yourself in the future. I also hope that the author will be successful in his studies, work, and life in the future. Blessings from a five-page reader.

The plot of this novel is so exciting! It's full of suspense, twists and unexpected surprises, making it hard to put down. The author depicts vivid characters and fascinating story scenes with his unique writing style, making every reader feel like they are in this wonderful world. In addition, the theme of this novel is profound and philosophical, allowing people to think about life and social issues while enjoying reading. All in all, this is a classic that is worth reading again and again!

A very real elf novel. The protagonist is decisive and realistic in killing and selfish. There are currently no big surprises.

Personally, I think the writing is quite good. On the realistic side, there is no cerebral palsy plot. Most of the time, it is quite good to know that adults only talk about interests. In terms of dealing with family members, I think the current rhythm is also very good. I know that my parents are unreliable and I ignore them. Moreover, many of the decisions made are very consistent with the decisions I would make if I put myself in my own shoes. The only downside might be that his character at the beginning is a little too cold. The quality is quite good. I deduct one point mainly because the protagonist is a waste of time. He actually has time to squat for cyan garbage. If you are blue, it doesn't matter. Little cyan wastes so much time and puts the cart before the horse. Cyan is only at the level of the second team. There is also no need to find a spokesperson for the super evolution stone. In According to the estimated time, wouldn't it be better to stop it one year in advance? The last bit of time will be used to sprint to the championship level with all members, so what if it is released. However, I still think it is good for an owner to raise one, and it is good to bite the land shark. I will use this time to promote the biting land shark to the peak of the championship. It can be pushed at the beginning, so that other elves can use it to protect themselves.

The writing is very good, very realistic, and the world you wrote is more realistic. Overall, it is very good, very good.

I highly recommend this book, which has a strong story and is a dark fanfic. The protagonist kills decisively and focuses on profit. It is really good to read, but the layout of the article is a bit poor, which slightly affects reading.

Chapter 171, five-star praise! The author stopped updating for a few months, but after resuming the update, he actually had some romantic animated movie plots. I thought the author was getting old and starting to be sentimental, but in the end, he killed Yotsuba directly in Chapter 171. It seems that the author is still young, and the dark demeanor of the protagonist is still the same.

It has brains and strategies, but its only shortcoming is that it is better at forbearing, unlike the previous Pokémon novels. Prices have not risen exponentially, and it does not cost tens of billions to cultivate a master-level elf. The high-end resources of this book will reach hundreds of millions until the quasi-king level. Champion-level and above are national-level strategic materials, which is very reasonable.

This is called Pokémon. The Pokémon quasi-gods and fantasy beasts on the market are like free money, and the mythical beasts are not very valuable. The author made me feel the scarcity of quasi-gods. I have opened so many Pokémon eggs, not to mention quasi-gods, even Yu Sanjia has never seen them. Even the qualifications are F-level, E-level is the best, C-level is king, B-level and A-level are unthinkable [face covering]

This is really good. I used to read it for a long time, but this one gave me a feeling of decisiveness. I read it all in one breath. The author should give a super update. No author in the production team would dare to write so little.

This is an impressive novel that shows the complexity of human nature and the diversity of life from a unique perspective. The author's writing style is smooth and beautiful, and his emotions are sincere and moving, allowing readers to constantly reflect and introspect during the reading process. The plot of the story is ups and downs, exciting, and every turn is a surprise. Overall, this is a masterpiece worth reading again and again. I highly recommend it to you who love life and pursue your dreams!

Very good, dark flow, not that dark

The writing is good, but there are still many flaws. There are many mistakes in the description of the elf's character. Kati Dog is a very smart elf with a full sense of justice. Even his characteristics have a righteous heart, and he is specifically targeted at evil elves. Otherwise, how could he become Junsha's royal elf? Generally, elves like Kati Dog are unlikely to appear in the hands of bad people.

Well written and true. The disadvantage is that it may be a bit frustrating at times. The 560,000 words only have quasi-King power. The Mega Land Shark Mega has the power of a King, but it cannot be exposed. It is estimated that 900,000 words will allow it to be a normal King, and it cannot be too ostentatious, even at the championship level. I hope to arrange a Reshiram or Zigold.

It is a masterpiece that can be read, but in recent chapters, it is obvious that the author is speeding up the progress bar. The point of the past content is that there is no need to force the connection with a certain Japanese manga. The gain outweighs the loss. The writing style is not bad, and the protagonist is also a type who has the brains to calculate the gains and losses. I hope the author will not make it unfinished.

Yes, it's a rare Pokémon article. It's rare to find it on Tomato.

It's good-looking and very unique, without the cliche plot of other books. Have your own way of doing things. The protagonist will be forbearing. When he knows that he does not have absolute strength, he will choose interests and give up the competition when participating in the conference.

If nothing else, the plot is pretty good. Come on, author! At least make others want to read. In this regard, you are better than most people.

As good as "Darkness Rises"

Yes, keep up the good work. This novel is a dark novel, but the protagonist makes a decision and then takes action. Unlike some dark novels (just like the protagonist is punished by God, all kinds of abuse, all kinds of depression, this kind of dark novel that makes readers abused and depressed, the score will probably not be high)

I read this book all night, and it was generally good. Although some settings were not particularly reasonable, the flaws were not concealed, especially the refreshing points at each stage, which were crisp and clear without any sloppiness. Good review!

Time travel and rebirth, advanced very quickly in the early stage, um. Later, I intercepted all kinds of opportunities for children of luck, took off directly, knew how to hide, and there were also people who came forward to show their sages, avenged hatred on the spot, and killed decisively. The pace is very fast and very compact. It is the ultimate dark Pokémon novel. It is one of the darkest Pokémon novels I have read on Tomato. Keep Out the Virgin. I accidentally discovered the Pokémon novel. I enjoyed reading it so much that I read it in one sitting. There may be a lot of narration in the early stage, which makes it uncomfortable to watch, but it will get better and better in the end, and the update is too slow. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes, and don't give up.