Transformation**********

I've finished it. Apart from some unnecessary plot points and sudden transitions, the overall story is pretty good. This book is quite recommended I also didn't expect that the protagonist would get a younger sister. Good guy, one thing after another, and the biggest winner might be Ao Yue [laughing]

It's okay to give yourself a good review. Regarding the issue of suppressing battles, I really haven't thought about it. It's just to avoid underage modifications, but it does seem a little bit. So now I have changed the age of the protagonist to fifteen, but the appearance is still nine years old. The modification is relatively slow. If there are any omissions, please remind me.

Guess Su and Ao are a pair, Lord and Spirit are a pair [laughing]

It's pretty good, it's a traditional fairy tale. I don't want to comment too much on anything else. I feel like it needs more fighting. Xp likes little dragon girl very much, after all, little green dragon, little green dragon. It's still Lily Wen, it would be nice to have more interactions with Ao. It's not a brainless cool article. The system, the starting strategy, who and who rewards who, what, what, what, what, what, what, what, what, what, what, what, what, what, what, what, what, what, what, what, what, what, what, what, what, what, what, what, what, what, what, what to get rewards based on the tasks of the system. I'm really tired of looking at this type of buff and it's very brainless. As for the one star I don't want to make you proud of, the author's work is indeed a little inferior to good traditional immortality writing. I feel like the author can feel it himself, but it's pretty good to put it on Tomatoes. It's quite satisfactory, and if it sounds bad, it's too good to be too bad. Xiaoqinglong Xiaoqinglong~Ao! ! ! ! At the bt point, make Ao look like a yandere and drive at the intersection point hehe

The transformation is a bit stiff, and the environment and characters need to be strengthened.

I read the comments. Is it because the nine-year Qi refining period is so weak? Is it because of the Qinglong bloodline? ? [Laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

Everything was fine before, but Mo Ling'er felt a little annoyed. The emotional scene suddenly happened, and then I saw that Mo Ling'er was definitely the heroine. I can only say that it was not suitable for me to say goodbye.

The female channel style is about cultivating dragon girls or Lily. The buffs are stacked. Anyway, you can watch it. It doesn't cost money and I won't leave a bad review. If you change the platform, it will be a different story.

Can you increase the number of appearances of sister Ao Yue? . . Thank you author, I also like Lu Xueqi.

The realm of this novel painted me in a mess. I originally wrote it down. I will record it for later reference. They are foundation building, qi training, elixir formation, golden elixir, Yuanying, transformation, integration, Mahayana, and transcending tribulations. This is the cultivation of immortality.

This is very well written, why is the rating so low?

The quality is really good, come on, the author [love] [love]

It's very good. The writing could be a little more delicate. It's much better than the ones I usually read. Maybe this is the real cultivation.

Come on, come on, come on

We already have Wang Teng and Xiao Yan, not to mention Emperor Huangtian [laughing evilly]

Come on come on come on.

It's okay. How do you feel about it? I've seen it before.

The book is quite good, but not many people read it.

This book is quite enlightening. Judging from its length, it should be several thousand chapters. Set an anchor point first. [Think]

It's pretty good. It doesn't have any major drawbacks so far, so it's still worth recommending. Cheer for the author

Why doesn't anyone see it?

It's okay, but I don't understand why the protagonist is stuck on the third level of Qi training without the Five Elements Spiritual Art. Another piece of trivia: Qinglong is not a dragon.

Good-looking, but too short, Ao Yue understands?

I feel like the emotional scene is a bit too sudden. 12345

This seems to be the prehistoric subordinate world [what] [what] And it feels like the prehistoric level is not very high [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

It would be great if Aoyue was the heroine's companion

Haha, ninety-nine have returned to one, Taoist Master has become [laughing evilly]

Very well written. Keep up the good work.

It's very interesting. At least I haven't seen a well-characterized protagonist in a long time.

It's very beautiful, cheers for the author [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]