The Fourth Disaster: Star Ocean Frenzy

It's pretty cool. I like both the protagonist and the players. The only flaw I feel is that there are too few players in the early stage and the game rises too slowly. I feel that the advantage of the large number of people in the fourth natural disaster does not exist. Players have always fought with less to fight more, unlike natural disasters with human sea tactics. But the flaws are not outweighed, I think the plot and writing are very good, the protagonist is handsome and the players are awesome.

Yes, I have read a lot of The Fourth Scourge, and many of them failed to survive the novice stage, because most of the "games" are packaged in such a way that people have no desire to play them. Apart from the gimmicks of 100% realism, it makes people feel that the players are the villains. But as soon as I read the novice phase of this book, I felt that it took great care of the player's initial experience. Whether it is novice equipment, resurrection points, or task assignments, it has the appearance of a mature game. This is what really retains people besides the so-called 100%. The barrage has rarely been used for a while. If you say they really want to play with this sense of participation, I believe it.

Five-star praise. There are very few Star Wars fanfics, let alone interesting ones. I hope the author can keep writing! In addition, most people complained about the slow progress of the main plot, the small number of players, and the excessive barrage. This must be a step-by-step process. Don't be so impatient. There are only a few of this type. If the author doesn't write it, where can you read it... Originally, the background story of Star Wars Armor is lengthy, and most readers may not even know it. If the author wants to take care of this part of the readers, he must clearly explain the background story to them through various aspects, so as not to affect the viewing. At present, it seems that even those who have little knowledge of Star Warframe will not be hindered from eating it. It is a good food for Star Warframe fans!

Among all the player summoning streams I have watched, the character connection at the beginning is the most natural. The barrage is a bit watered down, but the communication of the battle situation at critical moments is still quite useful. Overall, it is pretty good. Come on.

This is the first time I have read a book on the theme of interstellar armor, and it feels very familiar to me as a Tenno bandit. The plot of the novice guide written earlier is the same as the first-hand guide of Star Wars Armor. You feel confused when you are groping for it [cover your face][cover your face][cover your face][cover your face]

The writing style is not like most newbie novels on Tomato that don't even have an outline. Instead, it gives me a work that is step-by-step and knows what I want to write and how to write it. According to the starting point, this should be a fine work. I can give it a rating of 8.9, So don't think it is low. The Super Mechanic is only 9.2-9.5 For me. The plot of the protagonist's overall plan is quite good, but it's a pity that it is not very exciting. It's a pity that it was posted on Tomato. The readers of Tomato are mainly students and they may not necessarily buy it. The summary is very good. Although the best among the fan works are not up to the level of Ultraden, they are not far behind. I hope the author will continue to work hard [get it]

Group portraits with flesh and blood. Every player has his own thoughts. I personally think it's a lot of fun, and the plot doesn't drag on. One bad thing is [the player has not yet fully developed, and then an NPC protects the player and dies]. I skipped three chapters and started reading again. Because I was too involved in this novel and felt that the NPC was gone. I was so heartbroken. But,,, the poisonous point is not too big. After all, the players at that time were too stupid and their abilities were too poor. All in all, this is a novel with a score of about 8-8.3, Which is quite good.

Personally, I think it's very good. It's the first time I've read a book on the theme of Star Wars. The early transition seems very smooth. I don't know why the score is only 7.6. I hope it can maintain this quality. In addition, the author will update it very soon [Chigua]

Star Warframe is a standalone novel, and the overall level of writing is good about group portraits of players. It is worth recommending. Just when I think about how many settings have to be based on the game, I really can't imagine how many chapters I have to write to reach the level of a ten-level player in the game hahhh

A relatively new interstellar disaster article, I read in the comments section that it contains content about interstellar battle armor. Some special words at the beginning were difficult to understand (the author will explain it later) + I really couldn't stand the previous plot because I didn't understand it, but the subsequent plot was still very interesting. The plot is slow and focused on the development and improvement of the Fourth Scourge. Then I finished reading it accidentally because I liked the various settings, all kinds of weird side plots, and the interesting experiences and stories of each character. Finally, I still hope the author will update soon🧐

The idea of ​​the novel is good, but writing about interstellar hamsters is a bit niche. I feel like I can directly write out the good points like Tianno and Copus without using homophones or homonyms. I always have to break it down when reading. Even if you haven't played Interstellar Hamster before, you can read the novel without any hindrance. Anyway, good luck to the author! [Like][Like][Like][Please update]

Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 When the soul comes back... When the soul comes back, the flaw will be revealed, and the ridicule will be like a tide; At the second watch, the expression of anger faded slightly, and the spectators began to turn their ears; At the third watch, a slight reputation sprouts, and an alliance is formed in the future; At the fifth watch, righteous men and women gather together and argue; At the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars and the nobles are revitalized, and the sound of praise fills the thoroughfare; At the twenty-first watch, the name of the green slip will remain fragrant for thousands of years. Sigh! Nine times out of a hundred, the disadvantage lies in the delay; only by waving the keys like rain can the crowd's beaks be stopped. May your ink be as long as a long river, so that the starry night will be flawless and readers will forget to eat.

I have just read nearly 200 chapters, and I feel pretty good. Although I have never played this game, the writing is quite good, and I can imagine some fragmentary scenes. I just don't know how big the gap is, and I don't see any poisonous points. The players are also quite happy, and there are some jokes that I can understand. Xia Shang, the fourth natural disaster summoner, is not too harsh on the players, which I like. But the power of the void, I saw some comments saying that it might have an impact on reality. I don't know if the author would write such a drama. I feel like it's not good to write about reality. It's easy to write about official stuff. It's better to write about games.

As a hamster, I personally feel that this book is well written, and the player aspect incorporates the aspects of confusion and gradual exploration when we first started playing. But for the protagonist, people who set it in the Orojin Byles era feel that the protagonist is a bit weak. It would be better if the story of the wall-hanging hamster in Legend 7 was written and players traveled to the Orojin era to start the plot later. If the relay station is destroyed, it can be written that the protagonist is fighting the void. It is more reasonable to observe that the relay station was distracted and was seriously injured by the void. Please don't comment on my personal opinions. The author, as a single person, wrote very well. I read more than 600 pieces in one go. For those who have played the game, this looks very exciting. For those who have not played the game, you may see the battle in the front and Quinn and the others starting to mow the grass at the end. For those who have not played the game, it may be the climax.

As a hamster with 2000 hours, the settings inside are familiar and novel, and are relatively in line with the game content. The development is step-by-step, from nothing to making a armor and going to the universe step by step. The process is smooth and not abrupt. I like this very much and hope to finish it.

Very nice! I feel like a super mechanic! I like this book as much as I like The Super Mechanic! I hope everyone will support the author and don't let him become a eunuch. There are so few people reading it that I'm afraid the author will stop updating it. . . . . .

It is an extremely rare fan of Star Wars. It is almost impossible to find plot summary content of Star Wars in China. Those who want to write about this kind of subject can only be experienced story players for many years. It is even rarer to combine interstellar battle armor with the summoning flow of the fourth natural disaster. It is just written too slowly. So far, the clones have not been allowed to get out of low-Earth orbit.

It's great. The most rare thing is that the protagonist doesn't have the capitalist flavor in other Fourth Natural Disaster novels. It's very comfortable to watch. So will the author have Wukong and Nezha [smile] [smile] I wonder how players will react After re-reading it several times, I feel that the author's greatest advantage is its smoothness. The flow of daily life and climax scenes feels very comfortable. I feel like if the author had written about other themes or originality, the Fourth Natural Disaster might have been written long ago. However, it is true that at the author's speed, players have not seen many armors now. It is a pity that it is so far away to see the scene where a hundred flowers of armors bloom [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying] I still hope the author won't stop updating it, it's really good-looking. By the way, I still hope that the early characters can return to write branch plots [smile][smile], such as the initial control module team, the little girl from the Wind Spirit Tribe, the little doctor from the Snow Mountain, these NPCs seem to be out of the game because the players have become stronger and can no longer keep up with the intensity. However, there seems to be a little less appearance of life-related players. The worst thing is Fishball. Even if they don't appear, even the character of the rich woman has been robbed [laughing] [laughing]

Maybe this is a game or some other plot. But I've never seen it before, and it feels like it's quite new. So far, it's okay, and there are more than 400 pictures. Why is the rating so low and no one is watching it?

This is the first time I've seen a warframe fan fiction, and it's pretty good.

Give you the heat that an interstellar armor should have [laughing evilly]

Overall, it's good. It's very friendly to readers who have never played Warframe. The game content is explained one by one, but for me, the plot is a bit slow. According to the author's pace, not to mention the plot, it will take 5 million words to keep up with the version.

It's pretty good. Although I don't play and don't understand the game, I feel like it's pretty good to reveal unknown settings and weapons and mechas a little bit [laughs], but it's a bit confusing sometimes.

The development speed and process so far are very consistent with my reading preferences. Watching the players of The Fourth Natural Disaster slowly develop, I didn't do anything official in the early stage. I wanted to see if the author had other books, but when I opened the details, it was only 7.7? I guess it's because there are not many people watching, and the pace is pretty steady, but now I guess some people can't watch it and think it's too slow, but that kind of flying technology, the solar system in one second, the galaxy in the next, is not interesting. To put it bluntly, it's the routine of the previous chapter being invincible, the next chapter being invincible from the sky ( Oh? I took a look at the comments and it turns out they are from a fan of Warframe? I had wanted to get into this game before. Firstly, I couldn't decide which platform to play on, and secondly, I didn't have much time to worry about it [face covering]

Yes, the plot design is very interesting. This is the first time I have seen this type of novel describe the background in such detail. While the player is doing tasks, he cleverly integrates the background story little by little. He not only tells the player what is going on but also tells the reader what is going on. He gives a rough introduction in the introduction and then slowly fills it in the plot. This is very powerful. It is not a bit better than those authors who only write exciting content in the cover introduction and then only have this background.

It's really well written. This is the first time I've seen a Warframe fanfic in China. However, I'm an international server player, so when I look at the names of guys G, C, and some other names, it's weird [face covering]

Very good novel about the fourth natural disaster of War Armor, it makes me spin, love comes from the origin galaxy

It's a good read. It's a rare masterpiece of the Fourth Natural Disaster. The logic is very rigorous and there are no poisonous points. It's more than 200 chapters and only written for a few players. It may be a bit boring, but it feels like a long story, so the impression is good so far. I hope the author will keep writing.

It's good to read. After reading this book, I've been addicted to warframe. It's now 7 paragraphs.

Creation is not easy, five stars are given! The writing is fluent, the characters are distinct; the logic is clear and self-consistent, the plot is compact and smooth; it is not brainless and has no flaws! (For appetite)