Surviving the Apocalypse: So You’re an Island Lord Too

I can barely read it, but I can't think of many details, otherwise I won't be able to stand it. . . In addition, if you don't mind the heroine bringing along a lot of relatives and friends, you can just leave. I wrote more than n chapters just for the miscellaneous relatives and friends around the heroine. Secondly, the heroine is supposed to be an elite who has worked hard in society, but I'm sorry that you can't see her elite status at all in the text (things are done as she thinks of them, completely unplanned and unorganized, resources cannot be allocated reasonably, skills are used indiscriminately, she basically doesn't think before encountering things, and only reacts after encountering things)

①In the Jiang Miao incident, the heroine cried when she saw the two dead island owners and was uneasy for several days. This description felt a bit embarrassing and sad, but the reaction was too big. Maybe I am not very emotional and cannot understand this description. ② Regarding the series of shocks caused by Jiang Miao's revenge, the description of the island owner's help to Jiang Miao is a bit long-winded and difficult to understand. ③At the medical station behind, Lao Wang, Lao Li, and Lao Liu are good friends. Just because Lao Li's family is not dead, Lao Wang and Lao Liu want to kill him. They write Lao Wang and Lao Liu as crazy. So what kind of friends are they? Just to write about the evil of human nature? Don't know. ④ There are good things that you can obviously get if you work hard, but you don't write about it. For example, the beautification level of your house can be as high as 100%, but when it reaches 85%, you won't write about it. ⑤The author has too many typos, and some places are incomprehensible and cannot keep up with the author's ideas. ⑥Finally, the author's writing is okay. The above is my personal opinion and is for reference only.

Survival in the apocalypse: It turns out you are also the owner of the island Written by Yunshan Wuyuan It's a game-type post-apocalyptic plot. The overall tone is light, so it's not tiring to read. It's pretty good. If I only wrote about these, it would be considered a pretty good and refreshing article. However, after about 30 pictures, it started to involve intrigues, battles, etc., And the writing was a bit childish. In terms of characters, the characters' images are very simple and facial expressions, and it's okay to follow the plot. But some plots also seem a little dramatic. About three stars.

The writing is quite large. Not that kind of cool article. It feels like an apocalyptic natural disaster, and as for the system, there is not a complete cooperative relationship between the system and these island owners. More serious. The golden finger of the system is not very big. It mainly talks about the cooperation and help among these pirate masters, and then the relationship with the country. Well, it's not very harmonious. I feel that the author wrote it very well. Well, the logic is very clear. At the same time, it also makes some connections between countries, uh, countries and island owners very clear, and also expresses emotions. I prefer to read Shuangwen. I feel that this system is not very helpful to the heroine, just not at all. The sincere one is more depressing. But this article is still very well written.

I've been looking for a long time and haven't found anywhere where I can ask for leave. I would like to give myself a good review.

Come on, author! Just hold on and don't collapse. Just keep writing steadily.

The logic is smooth and the connection is smooth. If the protagonist is brought in, I may make the same choice. I hope the author will update it soon. It is too little and not enough to read.

It's so good to watch, I stayed up late to watch it

It's too realistic and too tragic. I don't know what to say. It's well written, but it's a bit too rough to read.

It's very interesting and the logic is very smooth. I feel like I want to see more. I hope the author will update more.