Daming: Lao Zhu Peeked at My Diary and Couldn't Stand It Anymore

The pace is slow, and overall it's okay. I personally recommend that the protagonist be given a supernatural role. At least he can really save his life and be free. With a foundation of his own life, it is much more comfortable to be a leisurely person who writes a diary. The other plots are also good. And you can set diary evaluations, such as average, ordinary, good, excellent, etc., To reward based on the content written. Otherwise, by chance, what the protagonist lacks most is strength.

This is the first historical novel that I have read and followed in the past three years [crying], and it may also be the only one. It's really suitable for readers who like novels without heroines and Ming Dynasty novels [crying] Recommended! Author, if you dare to have a female protagonist, you will lose many readers.

Very nice. I still hope that Zhu Di will take over in accordance with history. Zhu Yunzhen is really in trouble... He can't control the vassal king at the top, and he can't settle all the officials at the bottom... Alas, in the final analysis, he still understands the moonlight thing. If Lao Zhu can't let it go, other people won't be able to take their turn. If the protagonist assists Zhu Yunwen, it is difficult to say whether Zhu Yunwen will seize power, even if the protagonist is a pure minister... A thousand readers will have a thousand Hamlets

The writing is good. Will Lao Zhu inadvertently reveal that he can see Lin Hao's diary in the future?

I personally like this book. This is my first time reading this type of book. I like Zhu Di, but I don't like Zhu Yunwen. I hope it doesn't end badly [Love]

[Thinking] It's not bad. I've read too many novels about fighting and killing. I can adjust it a bit if I look at this fictional history. The writing style of this article is not very outstanding, but it is plain and organized, and it flaps the wings of "if" from another dimension of time and space. Have a look.

In fact, the book is quite good. I recommend giving it 8.5 Points, but Lao Zhu is actually a bit too soft and does not fit the character. In fact, Lao Zhu will only trust himself. After the deaths of Queen Ma and Zhu Fat, he has no way out.

It's good to watch, but the pace is a bit slow and not exciting enough. It made me anxious to death.

It's very good. The protagonist's diary allowed Zhu Yuanzhang to bypass several hurdles. The author must have checked the information when writing the book. The writing is very good. It is a good book [Learned]

The protagonist Lin Hao is a flexible and flexible person with flesh and blood. He is a righteous man towards soldiers and women, and implements the thoughts of modern people. This humorous book is based on the history of the Ming Dynasty and talks in the form of a diary to change the direction of history. It is quite novel, and the ending speeds up and is a bit sudden. The description of the heroine is very unnecessary. I really feel that the forced insertion of the heroine's plot is a bit too strong. Although there is not much space, every time it appears, it is disgusting.

Very nice, this is one of the best historical male videos I have ever read. Other men's videos inexplicably start a harem halfway through writing, but this one so far is particularly interesting and interesting, and it doesn't include any biased personal opinions. Like it very much.

The writing is quite good, but it makes Lao Zhu look a little white. Who is Lao Zhu? Cold, cruel, selfish, and the most white-eyed wolf in history. Cross the river and tear down the bridge, hide the bird with its bow, scold the monk after reciting sutras, pick up the bowl to eat, and curse the mother when putting down the bowl. He didn't kill the heroes because they committed crimes, nor because they exploited the people and oppressed the good. He just killed the heroes for his own dominance for his descendants. He belongs to what I can do but you can't do, I can set fire but you can't light the lamp.

The topic selection is relatively new. This is my first time reading a book like this, and I have read many books.

The score of 8.5 Is roughly due to the repetition between Zhu Yunwen and Diary. For articles, it can be scored above 9 points. I'll give it 5 stars. It's pretty good writing on similar topics. It's a bad ending and there's nothing to win points about, just give it up after a while.

The writing is very good. In fact, I still hope that the protagonist does not have CP, because once he has CP, he will feel intimidated.

It's a good read. I stayed up late to read it and the author updated it quickly. There's no big problem in reading the whole story. It's just that every time I have an inner monologue, it's all in the first person. If it's just one or two sentences, it's fine. But a large section is in the first person. It's really uncomfortable to watch. I hope that the author will unify the person in the future and replace the words "I", "we", "me" and "gu" in those long inner monologues with him. This will make it much more comfortable to watch.

I finally found a historical novel that doesn't insult women. The protagonist has upright views, doesn't lick Lao Zhu, and the writing style is relaxed. There is a CP, I jumped to the finale and saw the CP, it was Xu Miaojin

At first, I thought that the protagonist should not affect Zhu Di's ascension to the throne. Now that the situation is somewhat clear, I hope that Zhu Di can ascend the throne justifiably. I wonder if this copy of the diary will be inherited like the throne?

Five-star recommendation. This book is very interesting. After reading more than fifty chapters, I am not satisfied, not satisfied.

I don't reject historical novels with female protagonists, but it's uncomfortable to write them poorly and forcefully.

A very strange angle allowed me to see that serious people do not keep diaries and travel through the shadow of being read! The background of the historical story is complete and the character settings are consistent. At least it is roughly the same as what I feel! So, even though there are flaws, it doesn't stop me from watching it! The ending is both abrupt and reasonable! The ending of history is like someone's cat... I guess, maybe Lao Zhu can still live, maybe Lao Zhu's life span is over. Later, the grandson may have succeeded to the throne, the third and fourth sons may have founded the country, and the protagonist may have kept some of them, but many of them were not taken out or lost! The Ming Dynasty should be dead! After all, whoever's family and country is not destroyed will have to dig up their ancestors' graves!

Squat, squat, when will the Yongle Dynasty come? The emperor's grandson Zhu Yunwen is much stupider than Zhu Di. When will Zhu Di come to power?

After reading the entire book, the rating of this book is completely underestimated, only 8.5. I would rate it above 9.2. Let's talk about the shortcomings first. The first thing happened during the day. I wrote it once at night and read it again. The word count is very low, but for an old bookworm, it is still acceptable. The second thing is that this book is unfinished. In fact, it can be ended, but I don't know the author's mentality to end it hastily. Let's talk about the advantages. This book is very cleverly conceived. It has a time-travel system and a system. The system is a diary. You can get rewards by writing a diary. What happened to the protagonist during the day will be written down in Spring and Autumn style at night. The reward will be money. Occasionally, skills and modern technology will be rewarded. Most of it is the protagonist's daily life. The system does not steal the limelight. The most ingenious thing is at the back. The diary written by the protagonist can be seen by Zhu Yuanzhang, which satisfies the perverted desire of readers to peek. Reason, Zhu Yuanzhang also changed many regrets of the Ming Dynasty based on the protagonist's diary information. At the same time, he continued to reuse the protagonist to make the Ming Dynasty better and better. As a time traveler, the protagonist knew that Zhu Yuanzhang was very suspicious in history and liked to kill heroes. He tried every means to get back on his feet and stay away from the emperor. However, things went against his wishes. He complained about Lao Zhu in his diary every day, which led to a series of stories. It looked relaxed and enjoyable. I personally think this book is worth 9.2 Points.

Under the author's settings, the score can be above 9. When I started reading, I was thinking that because of Lin Hao's fishing character, he would not contribute various techniques to Lao Zhu. If you really want to develop the Ming Dynasty step by step, it is better to read the book "Everyone Travels Through Time, Let Hundreds of Officials Win Billions of Points", so this book is logical. For the heroine? Personally, I like the character design of Xu Erya. After reading more than 300 chapters, I suddenly felt something. I had been thinking about what I would do if I traveled back to ancient times and changed people's lives. But seeing all kinds of people suppress you just for their own interests is really depressing and sad. The shortcomings of the book are obvious. It is one sentence per line (start with comma and hit enter), which is very uncomfortable to read. Moreover, the description of the diary flow is very short of word count. As soon as I got to "", I skipped reading.

Is there anyone who quit Chapter 141 like me? I didn't say that the author's writing was not good. I had enjoyed reading it before, but when I saw this, I really, um... How should I put it, blame me, I'm sorry, I found the wrong channel [I almost cried] Sorry, sorry I really think the author's description of men is quite realistic.

Chuanwu is a big poison. Now Chuanwu can still deceive people. In fact, online authors have also contributed a lot. It is said that it has become a god [covers face], like the story of Dragon and Snake. You talk to it about fighting, it talks to you about philosophy, you talk to it about philosophy, it talks about theology to you, you talk about theology to it, it talks about fists and kicks with you, you talk to it about fists and kicks, it talks to you about traditional kung fu [laughs]

The male protagonist has traveled through his soul to become a ninth-grade official in the Ming Dynasty, and is bound to a diary system. As long as he writes a diary every day, he will be rewarded. The Yellow Emperor Zhu Yuanzhang accidentally saw the male protagonist's diary and learned the news in advance, and reduced a lot of killings based on the methods in the diary. The content is a light comedy, watching how the male protagonist competes directly from a ninth-grade official to become a second-class earl (why can't he go directly to the first-class, thinking that the first-class earls are all founding fathers, hahahaha)

Fellow Taoist, you have written about the chill of Hongwu, the loneliness of the early Ming Dynasty, the desperate hope of the common people for rebirth, the desolation of the ashes of troubled times, the depression and coldness under the iron law of imperial power. At the same time, you have also written about the ambition that is hard to break under the cruel law, and the soul that cannot be trapped by the network of power. My heart surged when I first read it, and I couldn't help but shed tears after reading it again! It not only describes the determination and aloofness of the commoner emperors to recreate China, but also the persistence of commoner scholars to survive and find their way in the light of swords. It also writes about the confusion and profound sadness of Hongwu people towards the impermanence of destiny when their family and country are being restructured.

Opening the book, the title alone is enough to arouse readers' curiosity about the history of the early Ming Dynasty. The perspective of the censor and the strong conflict setting of "defeating Zhu Yuanzhang at the beginning" make this historical-themed online novel have a very attractive opening. It is no wonder that many readers will feel their eyes light up after reading it for the first time. As a historical novel focusing on the Hongwu period of the Ming Dynasty, the identity of the censor he chose has its own dramatic tension - the Hongwu Dynasty's harsh officialdom, Zhu Yuanzhang's suspicious iron fist, and the censor's duty of admonishment formed a natural contradiction. The author is precisely grasping the It captures this core conflict and uses a compact plot and sharp character opposition at the beginning to quickly pull readers into the atmosphere of the court in the early Ming Dynasty. This clever use of historical background and control of the rhythm of the opening chapter are the most dazzling highlights of the work. Unfortunately, this amazingness did not last throughout. The work gradually lost its direction in the later creation. The historical framework and character settings established in the early stage gradually lost their order in the subsequent advancement of the plot. The game between the censor and the officials, which should have been the core attraction, did not delve into the details of the Hongwu Dynasty's official administration and the ecology of the court in the later period, leaving the conflict to remain a superficial confrontation, nor allowing the protagonist's image of the censor to grow in a more three-dimensional way. The logic of the characters' behavior gradually became blurred, as if conflicts were deliberately created just to advance the plot, and the sense of the weight of the times and the arc of the characters that historical novels should have been lost. The sense of reality created by fitting the historical background in the early stage also slowly dissipated in the later plot arrangement. Many details were handled slightly hastily, which greatly reduced the readability of the story. What makes readers most regretful is the hasty ending of the work. After reading the ending, I can clearly feel the collapse of the author's creative rhythm. Many clues laid out in the early stage have been hastily ended, and the final direction of the characters has no foreshadowing. It seems that the author has lost control of the story in the later stages of creation and can only hastily bring the story to an end. This haste not only turned the early surprise into a "flash in the pan", but also greatly compromised the readers' reading experience. It was like a meteor that suddenly streaked across the night sky. Although it shined for a moment, it failed to leave a lasting mark in the readers' hearts, and it also failed to live up to the highly potential historical theme setting of "The Censor of the Ming Dynasty". As a historical online novel, it has the foundation to become a masterpiece - the lovable subject matter, the gripping opening chapter, and the conflicting character settings all give the work inherent advantages. However, the creation of historical novels requires not only ingenious imagination and strong conflicting plots, but also the control of the rhythm of the story, the persistence of character logic, and the complete collection of plot clues. I hope that the author can learn from the experience of writing this work. When he writes about historical themes in the future, he can not only maintain the ingenuity and surprise of the opening chapter, but also polish every aspect of the story, so that the plot advances in an orderly manner, the character growth has a track, and the story ends with warmth, so that the weight of history can be truly integrated with the interest of the novel, giving readers a more complete and exciting reading experience. If viewed solely as an online novel, the book's creation of a sense of excitement can be said to be in line with readers' expectations. The strong conflict setting of "breaking the defense against Zhu Yuanzhang" at the beginning instantly arouses the emotional excitement of the confrontation in the court. As the plot progresses, high-energy excitement points such as the destruction of the sun are unlocked, which perfectly integrates the feelings of family and country with the pleasure of the novel, becoming the most eye-catching climax of the book. Although there are no more advanced cool points to continue in the follow-up, the author chose to finish the book. This choice was just right. It not only retained the excellent reading experience brought by the high-energy cool points in the early stage, but also avoided the content watering and logical collapse caused by piling up cool points to force the continuation of the plot. The story stopped at the node where the fun was at its peak, leaving the readers with a deep and pleasant reading memory. As a cool novel, this creative choice not only understands the core of the cool novel, but also fits the reader's reading psychology.

Not bad, not bad, really good. Although there are flaws, they do not affect the consumption. The protagonist is quite fleshed out, but there are just some things you can't force. The ending is a bit sloppy and I will deduct one star. I hope the author will write some extras.