I'm a Villainous NPC, and I'll Become the Strongest

The writing is okay and the character creation is pretty good, but there are a few things that aren't great. 1. There are too many adjectives, and it feels like a forced pile of words. It is very boring to read a long description. Fortunately, the author listened to the advice and simplified it a lot later. 2. The transition is abrupt, and in some places the connection between the context and the context is unnatural, and the sense of separation is a bit strong. I hope we can pay attention to this aspect in the future. 3. Personality change. In the early days, Pig's Knuckle had a normal and ordinary personality. In recent days, he suddenly became like a real villain [scheming]. I hope he can stabilize his character in the future and not make sudden changes. Overall it's pretty good, you can take a look

The content is okay, but the characters' personalities are not distinct. There are too many scenes and character descriptions that are unnecessary. There are also too many panel attributes that no one will read. The communication style within the family is too official, especially the communication with the Duke, which is not like the eighteen-year-old father-son relationship at all. The protagonist's external performance is too majestic and upright, and there is no sense of a big boss behind the scenes. There is no manipulation of the current situation and no plans for the future. The author may be writing a novel for the first time, and it can be seen that he tried his best to use more rhetorical techniques to beautify the text, but forgot the core issue. The essence of the novel is to tell a story to the readers, and the plot is the key. In other words, the content is a bit watery, and you can feel the lack of writing power after reading it. I hope the author can work hard and don't write too tangledly, otherwise readers will read more incoherently.

It's not bad but not bad. There are no poisonous points at present. The writing is smooth and slippery, but the word count is a bit watery. Hope this can be finished, looking forward to it. Where is the book? Why can't I see it here?

It's okay so far, but I want to say that the title of this multi-female protagonist can be changed to multi-female supporting roles. There are quite a few women coming out of the factory, but none of them have won, not even kissed, and even the male protagonist doesn't have this idea.

You are a dog licker, you want to catch a contracted beast for yourself and give it to a woman

Where have you read this book?

It is indeed slow to heat up. I estimate that after a few days of chasing, it will take a few days to keep up. Fortunately, there's nothing too poisonous about it, so I finished reading it in one go. After reading it, I didn't feel particularly comfortable. The male protagonist is a good person, and he gives away items that are useful to him. It doesn't matter if he gives it away, but there is no corresponding reward. It's a waste, and I don't like it very much. And the heroine? Let's just say they are all female supporting characters, they are all tsundere, right? The male protagonist is lucky, there are still hundreds of chapters of fighting plots waiting for him. Xiaoxiao is looking forward to the plot after the first-hand players arrive.

For me, it's a good Western fantasy novel. I support it. The panel introduction can be a little briefer.

Why was it suddenly taken off the shelves? The author is 🥺🥺🥺

It's good to read. If you can read my comment, please take a look at it first. The character of the protagonist is quite good, although he is a little bit poisonous. In fact, if you think about it carefully, everyone will have what they once said are "poisonous points" in their real life. I'm only halfway through it now. As the plot develops, it still suits my appetite. It's the ultimate book waste. I found this book quite interesting. If you are particularly hungry for books, I suggest you read it. Basically, I am still more influenced by that book review. If I find a certain paragraph is a little bit toxic, I will comment on it. If the reviews are all the same as mine, I will basically abandon it. The atmosphere of this book is still very good, and it is more popular among readers [get it] [get it] Nothing else, just to see how long I've been watching