Two Lifetimes of Being Forcibly Controlled by the Concubine's Legitimate Daughter

Good-looking [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] There must have been a misunderstanding in the previous life [laughing evilly]

After reading the content and reading the book reviews, I can tell you that the author suppresses his ambition first, which some readers may think is too much, so it reads like "bullying". I personally feel that if a person grows up in a doted environment, it is not impossible to grow into the character of Li Youning. In fact, there is no shortage of such examples in our modern times. If you feel that you can't accept it, you can skip to the first part. After about 50 chapters, it will be normal sweet content, and Li Youning's character is gradually getting on the right track. I often read the comments before reading a book, and I can feel the impact of the comments on a reader, but in fact this is unfair to the author and the work, so I publish this review in the hope of helping readers and authors. I cannot make a completely objective evaluation, so I just express my feelings.

It's okay, but there is a hole that the author forgot to fill in. It seems that the male protagonist still doesn't know that the female protagonist buried him.

Very nice! I just love watching sour and sweet love!

I like this setting [shy]

It's very interesting to watch, but the change in the male protagonist's feelings for the female protagonist is a bit sudden and a bit stiff, but the sweetness afterwards is so sweet that it's still very good.

Very beautiful. I feel sorry for the heroine in her previous life.

I haven't read it for a few days, and suddenly I found it was finished [Thinking] It's a very good book

Look good, look good, give me a look [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

It looks okay so far, right?

Good book, support the author

The writing style can be, not a cookie-cutter routine.

Although I'm not used to the author's style and can't stand it, I still give you some encouragement.

The interaction between the male and female protagonists is very interesting

It's quite interesting, fast-paced, but full of content. It's great to see a good ending to this life.

Generally speaking, it's okay, but the details and plot foreshadowing need to be improved.

If this book is poisonous, there is no tomato romance that is not poisonous. I think it's okay, but when the emotions change, there can be more conflicts and contradictions. It's a bit stiff. It was a bit arrogant before, but it becomes coquettish later. It still needs to be watched by both to feel comfortable. Come on and write [please update]

It looks good, but can the author make it longer? The previous book was too short.