The Diversity of Cultivating Immortals and Being Traitors

The plot is smooth, and the relationship between the heroine and the master is super interesting [Love] There are too many descriptions of the original protagonist, but the description of the scene that actually teaches them a lesson is too light [Crying] After all, the original characters suffered from cerebral thrombosis. As a result, even after being taught a lesson, their emotions were not strong enough. The usual plot is mostly contempt and complaints about their behavior, so at least I felt very aggrieved watching it. But apart from that, the heroine is very happy getting along with her peers and elders, and the author is so funny! The story is very smooth, there are very few bugs, and the characters in it all have brains (except for the original protagonist).

It deserves five stars. I hate master-disciple relationships, especially those who were raised since childhood. They are like parents and children.

Specializing in those mind-boggling stories. A group of villains, especially those in TV series, if two people fall in love, they will destroy the common people.

It's super good-looking, but the original female lead and the male lead are really super good-looking, but the original female lead and the male lead really make people have cerebral thrombosis. I'm really looking forward to seeing how the female lead and the master will deal with those idiots. The recommendation index is super high and the plot will open up later [shy][shy][admiration]

It's hard to understand that such a good book has such a low score, it's really good! (The book review contains spoilers, so read with caution) At first I thought it was the kind of cliché that pits the protagonist against the law of heaven, but after reading it I realized that it was very different. Author, you are really great! The Immortal Sect in the book is just like Shushan in Sword and Fairy III. It takes slaying demons and demons as its own duty and protecting the people of the world. There is no sectarian strife, no intrigue, warmth and strength. Everyone in Yunhengshan is very nice. The same goes for other immortal sects, except for a few idiots. In this book, human life is the most precious and the most heart-warming. The author's character creation is really strong. Xingwan is the child of Dadi, Dadi is her mother, and Master is her father. She was raised by Master as an independent person, not a rose or an object, but a person, a real person. Their master-disciple relationship and the friendship between them and their sect make people cry. Fortunately, they were all fine in the end.

It was very interesting. I cried when I saw the ending. In the end, Master and Xingwan were both unable to ascend, which made me a little regretful. However, I can still accept that I can accompany you on Yunxian Mountain for thousands of years. I wish everyone in Yunxian Mountain a happy life in the future [crying] It is a normal book about cultivating immortals. The right way is the right way, and the heart is for the world. The ratio of women to men in this book is normal. The author has created many female characters. It is a bit frustrating in the early stage, but it is normal to feel a little aggrieved because you cannot resist the way of heaven. It will get better in the middle and later stages. Please don't stop reading this book about cultivating immortals because of the early plot. This book is really good! Highly recommended to everyone [shy]

It's quite interesting. Many of the jokes are so silly that people who watch them laugh out loud. I have read Chapter 158 so far, and I feel a little overwhelmed. I am afraid that I will forget it later, so I am writing a book review in advance. First of all, I want to confirm the purpose of this novel. I mixed many popular dramas and novels that I have seen in the past about so-called sadomasochism to criticize the unreasonableness in them. Why is it that even though women are strong, there are always male protagonists who are stronger than the female protagonist to pamper the female protagonist? Why is there so much literature about raising wives to educate a person who should live a good life? Why is it that the male characters are always powerful, handsome and invincible, while the female protagonists can only be dodder flowers? With the rise of female consciousness in recent years, I slowly realized that I was a little regretful. I grew up watching these sadomasochistic romances, and at that time I just thought the heroine was useless. I even liked the bad images created in them. If I hadn't read a lot of books (reading everything randomly), I would have been the person who was perfectly brainwashed by the literature of The Spoiled Wife. It is undeniable that there is hope for a strong and stable person who can fully tolerate everything about myself, but people should be multi-faceted. They can go out and block everything, and they can also release their softness in a corner. I have read many articles recently about the rise of female consciousness. I used to think that I was advocating equality, but now I realize that the premise of equality is to be strong enough. On a battlefield where people are not treated as the same level, they have to be radical enough to show absolute power, and only then can they be qualified to talk about equality. We have seen a lot of bad incidents recently. Just like Xingwan's actions against the will of heaven, the essence is to fight for the safety of the entire sect. What everyone hopes for is world peace, and I hope that everyone has the strength to protect themselves and do whatever they want. Back to the topic, this article is full of nonsense, but it does not feel that satisfying. There are too many talking points. You clearly realize that the other person is an uncivilized fool and continue to make meaningless remarks. After all, you can't argue with the evil person. Since you can't kill him, it is better to hold down the opponent and beat the person with a bruised nose and face. I feel like this is a major pain point in losing readers to this book. There is also the setting of combat power. Both of them are in the Void Refining Stage, and one only knows how to cultivate one way, and the other, the heroine master, is a fully blossoming composite talent. No matter how you look at it, it seems that even if the two of them can't kill the opponent, they will still get no benefit from the opponent, but they just stop at talking. Many times when the opponent attacks, they can at best inflict some poison and then say a few words without fighting. The battle scenes are also not satisfying enough. It would be better if they could curse and hammer at the same time. I'm writing these for now, and then I'll comment after reading them. The more I watch it, the better it gets, but the ending is a little 🔪, not a completely happy ending, how can I put it? After reading every good story, there will be such a sense of loss. I was very moved by the father-daughter relationship between Xingwan and Ye Yunshi. A master is a master, a teacher for a day and a father for life. I am also very moved by the chivalry of immortal cultivators who dedicate everything to the common people. Like the Xianxia and anime I watched when I was a child, the endings are that the protagonist is willing to sacrifice himself and gather the power of the common people to fight against the villain. When I grow up, I will still be moved to tears by such descriptions and plots. Sure enough, people's tastes will not change fundamentally. Very beautiful, highly recommended! !

Current progress: Chapter 390 After reading it, I felt like I was stuck in mid-air, unable to move up or down. The author's control of the rhythm of the plot still has room for improvement. When looking at the battle scenes and climax plots, I always felt that the speed was only 75 when the speed was 100 per hour. The details and atmosphere of daily plots are also worth continuing to improve. For example, the details of meals should not just be about how much you eat, but also enrich the taste. It is best to stuff memories in this kind of place. Although it is a routine, it is easy to resonate. As I read along the way, there are fewer and fewer readers. Come on, author.

It's strange that such a beautiful article has such a low rating. The first time I saw this article, I wasn't interested at all. When I read it again, I was a little surprised. Although they are all complaints about ancient romance novels, the entry point is still very good. Now is no longer an era where love is the mainstay. We women, like men, have the will to work hard and work hard. From ancient times to the present, our innate talents have never been buried. We women will also overlook the world from a higher place, and we will never live a defined life.

It's super good-looking. Although the middle three stories gave me a feeling of being in a hurry when they all appeared, they were all sorted out later. However, the descriptions of Yan Ningning and Ji Lingwei are less than the last, and there are too many descriptions of Yu Linling, although there is an explanation. But in the end, Ji Lingwei just said nothing and didn't mention whether anyone remembered to pay attention to her. She felt too tooly. The extra chapter is also very well written. Even if it is a parallel world, it is still not your own world. No matter how beautiful it is, you have to go back, not to mention that there are still people at home waiting for you to go back. I just pity Lin Yushu, he came a thousand years too early.

Ahhhhhhhh, I can't stand it anymore. Every time I quarrel, I feel so suffocated and uncomfortable. I spend so much time writing about the quarrel, but it's useless. I just miss the mark. I keep repeating that the quarrel is serious. I don't see it. It's superficial. But otherwise this book is good.

It's so cool, I feel like the harsh novels I used to read finally got my comeuppance [heartfelt] It feels like the master is a big sword, traveling through time, coffin, age, and looking back like an apprentice.

It's very beautiful. I think the ending is more like an OE ending. What will happen to the master in another world? Will he feel lost at some point and feel that he should have had a daughter? The master and the apprentice have turned into ghosts. Will they watch the leader and the elders slowly die with their own eyes? Will they also turn into ghosts? At least I hope so. But this ending gave countless ideas, such as who will be the next leader? Will the disciples, elders and leaders of other schools discover that the great hero has just turned into a ghost and still exists in the world? Will master and apprentice become adults through cultivation? Maybe they can even ascend. If the leader and the others could turn into ghosts when they left, would a new school emerge? I had been hoping that the master and apprentice would ascend? Because they have great merit. But when I knew that they were ghosts in the end, I understood. The Lord of Heaven can turn master and disciple into ghosts, which is already a profound merit.

I urgently need to see all the days I met people in this article❤️

It always feels good, the heroine's motto: No brains to find trouble, the master Weihu makes a big move, the master and apprentice are invincible in the world, put an end to all love-mindedness

It looks good, you must see it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! To be honest, when I read this book again, I was very afraid that his ending would be that one person would be left alive and the other would die. Because I feel that this is difficult for both master and disciple to accept. It just feels like they must live together or die together. This novel did not disappoint me. The final ending really didn't disappoint me, because their ending was another kind of happy ending. Anyway, it's really, really beautiful. It was the first book with more than 400 pictures, and I read it in one sitting. ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Really good. ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's been a long time since I've seen a normal world of immortality. It's so beautiful.

It's really good-looking. It has a pure heroine with no cps, a loving father-master-disciple relationship, a strong female character and a not so strong female character. In the end, the incarnation of the way of heaven is a female image. I like it.

I'm going to cry. Why does Tomato have such a book that suits me? Everyone who is serious about cultivating immortality can be the protagonist. It's very delicate but not too cumbersome. It also has a very clear main line, and the characters are also funny. It's a book I really like [I'm about to cry]

The idea of ​​this novel is so novel. I originally thought it was fighting against a strange plot, but I didn't expect that in the end it was fake heaven trying to realize my own ambitions. It's so well written and has a good ending. It's beautiful. I don't know why the rating is so low.

It's a true group portrait story. The author's writing style is quite good. The epileptic father-in-law and mad-in-law in the early stage make people feel powerless as if they can't be slapped into the text. Fortunately, the heroine's mouth and hands are very powerful, otherwise she would be really heartbroken. It's just that the whole battle line feels a bit stretched, and there are a lot of these lunatic scenes, which basically run through the whole story. The biggest highlight of the entire article is the heroine's sect. The entire sect is full of cohesion, warmth and strength.

When you feel aggrieved, don't panic, these top smart people really died miserably and happily, five stars for sure. The writing is humorous, the plot is compact, and the pace is comfortable. The supporting characters are all very viable. Bookworms think it is worth reading.

It's good to watch, but I felt empty after reading it... Wow, oh, oh, oh, oh, Master and Xingwan are so good. The ending made me heartbroken! ! ! Although they have no soul and return to heaven and earth, they can no longer cultivate immortality. Will they be unable to ascend for the rest of their lives? No, no [crying]

Great, cheers for the author [sending heartfelt wishes]

A very, very nice book! Everyone in Yunxian Mountain is very loving, and the relationship between master and apprentice is also very interesting. Everyone is exuding warmth to each other, feeling warm and at ease [shy]

I clicked in and read 3 chapters. The well-written article was able to attract readers within 10 chapters. It made me laugh. It was not a very embarrassing joke, nor was it forced to be funny in an eavesdropping article. I just went in with a kitchen knife and chopped off the witch's head. It already made me laugh. If it doesn't look good later, I will give it another star.

It's a very good book. I was really touched when I saw the heroine and the master saving the sect together, but I didn't dare to move when I saw him going crazy. It's really sad to see the heroine recall the half-destruction of her sect and the final annihilation of her entire army. But the latest twist is a bit... Come and take a look, it's full of twists and turns and very innovative.

It's okay. The heroine and the master are very interesting to get along with, and the people in Yunxian Mountain are also very interesting. In the early stage, the boss and the mother-in-law were really crazy, and there was a feeling of powerlessness that could not hit the people on the screen, but the heroine handled it well. The ending is good and a little rushed, but overall it's worth watching.

It's not bad, but the number of words is small and I didn't get any points.

I really like reading stories that go against the will of heaven.