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I've read Chapter 63 so far, and overall it's pretty good. It's not an invincible novel, but the plot is not bad. It can be seen that the author has designed it. Advantages: First, there are no characters in the play that insult the readers' intelligence. Second, the protagonist can practice step by step, so that he will have a sense of accomplishment in his cultivation, which is not comparable to Invincible Shuangwen. Third, the names of some minor supporting characters in the play are very interesting. Disadvantages: There were some overly modern dialogues in some places, which made it awkward to watch and made me feel moderately addicted. Fortunately, I persisted. I hope to avoid it as much as possible in the future. Hope: My favorite character in Tian Long Ba Bu is Xiao Feng. I hope the author can write about Xiao Feng's style and interact more with the protagonist. We look forward to the author's future designs and wait and see.

The writing is relatively detailed, and the writing style is not completely white, but various Mu Wan Qing Dao, Lu Guang Ping Dao and the like need to be improved. In addition, if the male protagonist is not Murong Fu, is there Wang Yuyan as the female protagonist? If so, how can she be poached without licking her? If not... I guess there will be fewer people watching, right? After all, Liu Yifei in her most beautiful period

The writing is good, and the involvement in the story is also good, but the setting of martial arts makes people want to complain.

Great, I finished reading it in one sitting

The diction is wonderful, I like it very much

The writing is okay, very good

Not bad, not brainless, not invincible Is it broken? What a pity

I feel it is very well written. Why didn't the author write more?

It is also regarded as a top-notch work among Tianlong fanfics.