Heavenly Realms Merge: I Fight for Blue Star's Heavenly Dao

I saw it on the recommendation, author come on (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧ At present, it is more about the combat part, the pace is very fast, and it is on an upward trend. It is recommended to adjust some small extensions and flat periods appropriately, such as some background introduction, a scene of other scattered humans, Blue Star situation, team member management summary, etc. It always gives readers a feeling of upward rush. It will be great in the early stage, but it will feel tired and boring after a long time, which will easily affect the reading experience. It is best to have a tone of priority, one by one, to better retain readers! My humble opinion, I hope the author can be better👍

It's well written, with rich characters and a compact plot that doesn't drag on.

The writing is very good (✪▽✪), but I hope that the protagonists can be more coordinated in different places in the future. I also hope that each human group has different life-saving abilities.

Come on, this kind of subject matter is still relatively rare, I hope I can stick to it 👍

The theme of this novel is suitable for those whose protagonists are not invincible, but are much more powerful than their peers.

Also tell me what level the others are at.

Okay, maybe not to my personal taste

Race war is good to watch

It looks good, cheers author^0^~

Come on, it's not enough