Original Honkai: Star Rail Shorts: The World of the Tree Sea Is Completely Shattered

I like the rhythm of this book. It's not like other books that only describe the content of the video without writing the character's reaction. It's normal to know that the rhythm of the future will be disrupted and other forces will speculate or take measures. Can't you guess the plot after watching the video and playing the game? Moreover, the character dialogue does not appear to be obviously OOC. I praise the author. He is really good at writing character reactions that are not OOC. I hope the author will continue to maintain it. This book is the top 1 in my heart 😳

I have read Chapter 198 so far, and there are no major poisonous points for the time being, so it's okay. But that is to say, can you not suddenly cut off and put down a video when the plot is at its most exciting? (For example, the prophecy of Genshin Impact Fontane suddenly disappeared when fast forwarding to the climax, and the subsequent Genshin Impact videos also broadcast other content. It is really uncomfortable to make people unable to get up and down! As a result, I am saving chapters now, just waiting for the day when the main plot of Fontaine is finished before continuing to watch.) Also, this is the short video of "Yuan Beng Tie", right? But I personally feel that Genshin Impact and Beng San's videos don't account for much, and most of them are Ben Tie's. That's not to say it's not good, but since it's the three movies, it's better to distribute them evenly, right? This is unfair to people who prefer the other two games. (And if you want to pursue the shock of the plot, then Honkai Impact is the best one. Although the final defeat of Kevin is a little bit sloppy, the overall plot is still resistant and the settings are comprehensive. I am not saying that I am partial to Honkai Impact, because I don't play much with Honkai Impact, I just save a UID, and the plot is slowly made up by watching various fans) It's not Gomen. The plot of your original god Fontaine is only five acts. It has been written from about 100 chapters to 300 and nearly 400 chapters. It's not finished yet? Yes, there will definitely be some storylines mixed in, so I can understand the slow progress, but you have some time to write the second Genshin Impact video (you are still writing chapters, see the table of contents), so you don't have any time to write the main plot? Really, brother, if it doesn't work, let's just pass it off. Even this is better than ending the plot! The most important thing is that this is just a plot of Fontaine. If you write so many chapters, the plot of Nata 5.1 Will be released. Plus the previous main plot, I really don't know how you can finish it. And in fact, this cliff-like writing method has an obvious drawback: the plot is too protracted. That is to say, you have written a large article with about 300 chapters. It seems to have a lot of content, but if you think about it carefully, the information conveyed in each section does not seem to be much. Really, whether it's Genshin Impact or Beng Tie, its main storyline is always stuck. Genshin Impact is stuck in Fontaine and Bent Tie is stuck in Pinoconi. There are only three small versions of the main quests that have never been completed (from this look, Beng San is actually the one with the faster progress). The readers who watch this type of movie viewing system should also be players of one or more games, so what they really want to see are mostly the reactions of the characters (but the reactions should not be too much, after all, the main content of the movie viewing system is "watching movies", and the characters' reactions are too much. If it is too much, it will give people a bad viewing experience, and it is easy to OOC) and regretfully make up for it later. The good writing of the movie viewing content is just the icing on the cake. If I really want to watch the plot, I can just search the Internet for a pure plot experience. Why do I still watch the movie viewing body? Pictures are much more powerful than mere words. Furthermore, people's ability to read online articles, especially second-generation novels with little novelty, depends either on the author's excellent writing and exciting plot trends, or on excitement. The plot is the most critical, but it is obvious that this type of second-generation novels basically do not have this, so they can only rely on the excitement and freshness of the readers. To achieve this, the only way is to immerse the readers in the plot and bring them in. There is no way, this is what moviegoers rely on. However, the cliff-like writing style of the author of this book is obviously contrary to this. Just imagine, you spent five or six chapters reading, and finally got into it. You are eager to see the next video, the story, and the final outcome of the characters involved. But at this moment, it breaks with a "pop" and moves to the next section. Are you in a hurry? This kind of thing is essentially harmless to people, and it can be considered a good thing to stimulate readers' interest in reading. But! When this happens too many times, it's a different story. Just like what Funina said in her voice, the easier it is for interest to appear, the easier it is to dissipate (I can't recite the original words completely, that's probably what it means). It's okay to interrupt the video once or twice, but if it happens more often, readers will inevitably get bored, and their interest in the article will continue to be diluted. In the end, it is only a matter of time before they abandon the book completely, and maybe they will have to leave a negative review before leaving (for example, if you are impatient like me). Overall, this is very detrimental to the author. The main problem is probably here. After I finished writing Fontaine, I will read it and then read it. I wrote it for nearly half an hour. I still hope that the author can read it. I don't want everything, and I will try to change a little bit later. (The terminology in the first part may be a bit biased, but I am too lazy to change it. The second half has calmed down and is better) I couldn't bear it after seeing the follow-up... What's the purpose of Shenjinba to write the sinner's dance steps separately? It's still many chapters apart. Aren't you going to make Fufu suffer a mental breakdown? The secret that had been hidden for 500 years in order to save the people of Fontaine was revealed all at once, and before the follow-up revelations were completed, I even felt that this light curtain was not here to save Funing Fuka and the others, but to stab others! Carrying the entire Fontaine on their backs, a variable light curtain was added to the original plan. Neither of them even knew whether the light curtain would give out the rewards they were looking forward to, or whether Fontaine would be able to survive until the time to receive the reward. You directly exposed an important part of the plan. Facing the doubts of people from all over the world, I can't even imagine how much psychological pressure Fufu was feeling, okay? I finally found a fanfic that didn't break down the characters and I wanted to support it, but now it seems that it will be finished sooner or later (after all, the movie-watching genre is already in deep water). All I can say is to avoid lightning as much as possible.

It's good to watch. It's my first time watching the movie and I found something that suits my liking. The characters' interactions and conversations are also very good. I'm really looking forward to Kakavasha, but it's a pity that it hasn't been released in the future, so author, write it quickly! "Are you going to set off?" "Well..." "Then let's put our hands together..." "May the Mother Goddess close your eyes three times" "May your blood... Be forever inspired" "The journey... Will always be calm, and the tricks... Will never be revealed..." "We will meet again under the aurora of "Kakava"" "Goodbye... Kakavasa" Damn, I really like this part [please update]

Update, update, come on!!! It's kind of interesting to watch a video together like this, but I still can't help but feel heartbroken when I see the placer gold. That photo... It's a great gift, come on~

I really want to watch "Qinglian?" On Xiaopo website. Chonglan! (The author is: Ah (Ah) Kou... [I only remember the first two words]). Of course, it is best to play it after playing Fufu's Sinner's Dance and Fufu's legendary mission. Sadness comes one after another, from taking over, to abdicating and becoming oneself, and finally integrating all the events to create something new. The gods and lovers dance alone endlessly, and their beauty will last forever! Fumen!

It's hard to comment because I didn't read it carefully, but it's very well written! But I like to watch it a second time and then find fault. I will post another review next month. I hope you can refer to it.

When reading novels about movies and sports, most of them are for the audience's reaction and interaction and the impact on reality after knowing the plot. A small part is for the content of the movie. Of course, the protagonist is changed or replaced. I think this book was mainly read as a shock. The last lesson that I have finished and Yang Chaoyue's ongoing work are both very good. I am very much looking forward to the following "Thus Spoke Apocalypse" and "The Paradise of the Past". In addition, it is also good. I'm wondering if I should write about Chen Tianwu and Anna. I personally think the tragedy of the collapse of Sanli's heterosexual relationship (only the main plot) is: Chen Tianwu and Anna > Otto and Kallen > Kevin and Mei > Siegfried and Cecilia > Yang and Tesla

My dear, this is so beautiful. Everyone's characters are consistent. If you haven't played one or two of the games, it doesn't hinder your viewing. Just skip to what you want to see. I hope there will be more Bengtie hahahaha

So far, it's generally pretty good. The characters aren't very OOC, and the pioneer/traveller is also a rare image that doesn't look like a "grandfather". It's teary-eyed. The overall selection of viewing videos is also very good, except for the just-finished Servant Legend mission, which I personally felt was too delayed. But overall, this movie viewing article is still the most suitable for everyone I have seen so far, and it is also my favorite at the moment, so I still give it 5 stars instead of 4 stars to encourage it. Come on, author!

I think this book is quite good, but the front part may be a plot that the author is not proportionate enough to write. There are more than 20 scenes in one plot, or the plot is small and there are too many barrages. Although this is to write about the changes outside, it is unlikely that there will be so many question and answer barrages in a few seconds. () However, the author has changed it now. If you feel that the previous chapters are too lengthy, you can skip to chapter 73. The author's writing gradually gets better around this point. But when reading this article, it is best not to read the comments in some places, because really, the comments posted by some people who jumped to read it will affect the perception ()