Sitting and Forgetting on the Seventh Level

In a mysterious world, the way of heaven is abnormal, ghosts are rampant, and gods have not yet appeared. Which world does Shen Duan belong to? What kind of secret is contained in it? He holds a psychic lamp in his hand, uses a sword to frighten evil spirits, talismans and seals to remove evil spirits, a bone flute to exorcise demons, a jade to attract souls, listens to deceitful words, summons a golden bell, opens the soul realm, practices the seventh level of oblivion, and angrily scolds the sky, what is the way of heaven? Is the mysterious world in the far East parallel to the modern world? Or is there a channel between the two? Shen Duan was a little confused, which side was the dream? Which side is real? I can't tell the difference between this weird Eastern world of Cthulhu!

The overall framework of Dao Wei Liu + Eastern Ke style + folk custom looks good. It is a bit novel to apply some ghosts in "Zi Buyu". In terms of details, transitions need to be improved. The author takes his time, come on, don't expect to be a god, just tell your own story, one by one, one by one, slowly.

Give me five stars to encourage the author, although no one is reading it now... The protagonist Shen Duan has been living in a dream and has many flaws in his character. Although he is suppressed by Jing Fangzi, he is cold, crazy and decisive in the early stage. In the middle and later stages, he is a bit cunning and unwilling to accept the arrangement of fate. It is not easy to survive or die in the cracks. The position of the young monk Wei Jinxi is a bit awkward. It might be better if the part about becoming a disciple is hidden. It is really an unbearable past... Zhang Qitian - a tool man, his body was taken away by Jing Fangzi, his identity was changed, and he was forcibly brainwashed. Song Yi is the second Shen Duan, and there may be countless Shen Duan behind it. The corpse chaser showed up and then disappeared. Arrange the meeting schedule as soon as possible, otherwise you will forget it later. Open a sect and establish a sect, Tianxuan sect, open a large sect and establish a major sect. The four-person group should develop in four directions, conflicts, understanding and reconciliation. There are also the sea of ​​fireworks and roses, the land of ten realms, the dragon's nest, the Jingfangzi with three flowers gathered on the top, and the ancestor Qingpu. Let's add some words to make it clear and don't let people guess in the clouds [laughing]

The story frame is pretty good, I need to think more about the details.