New Writers Come In.
It's really uncomfortable every time I look at the data that hasn't changed at all. The number of people hasn't increased at all. There aren't a single comment. Very few readers have read the entire book. By the last chapter, almost no one has read it. New writers should help each other.
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Since my own reply was swallowed by the system. I will use the trumpet book review to reply to Sister Lily. Also explain it for future readers who may see it. Don't worry, I won't deliberately give full stars... Well, four stars is not too much [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying] Cough (clear throat) … Why can't there be more tolerance between people? I really didn't understand that Lily said that all the powerful people were men. What does this sentence mean? Which boy in the book is better than the main character? How many people don't look at Yu Xi like a big boss? Xiao Wuyu is even more unparalleled. Let's look at that strange thing you said again. I'll write down the original words. —————————— "There are serious stereotypes between men and women. Even though this game is popular all over the world, female players are still not as good as male players." I... When I saw this sentence. I really don't know if I can truly say these words sincerely if I put all my effort into saying them. Please, this is just fiction and based on the real world. This is neither another world nor a background where women are strong and men are weak, and women are inferior to men. Can anyone find a competitive game that is popular around the world, where girls are better than boys? Is it awesome? When passers-by don't know Yu Xi's identity, is it wrong to say that she is a girl who is so powerful? Can this also touch my sister's point of view? It's already outrageous for me to give baby Yu Xi such strength! (But I am willing to give!) Isn't it enough that professional players can't beat Yu Xi in a duel? Does it have to be like you said, besides the protagonist, the other female supporting characters are even passers-by. Do I want to give them extraordinary strength? As I said above, this is not a world where women are strong and men are weak. Although there are some Daoxuan elements, it is still a normal world based on a realistic background. I will not focus on the story of the protagonists Yu Xi and Wu Yu. Shall I write a supporting role? I still have to worry about what contains male content and female content? It is not at all what you call a normal male-to-female ratio with a very high male content. In addition, it is not enough for the protagonist to be powerful, and it is not enough for the female supporting characters to be normal people. Do I have to be labeled as a humiliator? Let's talk about the topic of degrading words for women. I was really panicked and helpless. Where exactly did you touch your reverse scale? There are so many degrading words you said, which really touches on my blind spot. Can you provide it? I am really sincere and absolutely willing to change it. As for the swear words, there are a lot of them... How many? How dirty? This book I wrote in high school is also some years old. Although a lot of things were changed when uploading. But it goes back and forth, scattered here and there, and I have to watch it 10 times in total. I admit that some words are swear words, and they have been used in some jokes and complaints. But I really can't bear the word "more". And while we're on the subject of swearing, I'd like to ask. Yu Xi is a country boy who grew up eating hundreds of meals. Being considered ominous, how many things has she experienced since she was a child? How much have you experienced the glare and malice she encountered? How much do you understand the abuse and despair she experienced? You don't understand and you don't care. You read it for an hour. I am very grateful to you and thank you for reading my book. But when I was about to get 200,000 words, you read it for an hour. Then I came to the book review, which seemed to be quite righteous in "clearing mines" for everyone and giving me a high hat. After scolding Fang Qiu, you left without caring. Give me, give the character I created with all my heart, a resounding, extremely aggrieved slap in the face. Then let me ask, me, and Yu Xi, can we do it! You are not allowed to say a dirty word! I don't care, I have been aggrieved and cowardly. But what about her? Do I want her to go on like that? Everyone has broken their teeth and swallowed it in their stomach. But when someone throws mud at her, she has to use the mud to grow lotus flowers? You may be such a saint. But I am not a saint, and Yu Xi is neither. A miserable child struggling to survive in the countryside. When experiencing cynicism, insults and slander. Can't even use curse words to resist? What's more, where are the vulgar swear words in the book? Or maybe it was the casual words of a supporting character. Touched your radar? So it "seriously affects the perception"? She grew up living alone until today. To have the independent, strong and stubborn character now. Have a tiger's heart and a tough heart that smells the roses. It's not about just being submissive! And the last thing about the breasts... I also searched specifically for what the word male condensation means... "Under the male gaze, women are often seen as naturally weak, and their image needs to conform to male aesthetic standards, such as white skin, big breasts, and naked clothing. " Good guy, I also learned another word from Sister Lily. But, the baby Yu Xi I created... Is she weak? Her strong heart and independent character were also mentioned above. No more details will be given. On this basis, I asked her and Xiao Wuyu to interact and give out sweets. (Note, I only give close-ups when the two of them are getting tired of each other) This physical feature of Yu Xi is described a little more in order to make readers happier. Good guy, I also hit a lightning point again. What I wrote was also very clear, Xiao Wuyu liked it. But no, Sister Lily questioned my gender. Guess I'm a man, seems I can't describe this? Otherwise I would be a male Ning? I have to change Yu Xi into an ugly monster [crying][crying] I don't want it [crying]! I'm a boy and I'm really sorry. But I really put a lot of effort into shaping them. Why do you think of me as a malicious person? Can sincerity be exchanged for sincerity? Can sincerity call for beauty? Fat Donglai's boss said this. I longed for answers, but I couldn't seem to see them. Phew~ The end of a long chapter. I apologize. To Sister Lily, but also to readers Baozi who may have the same clues. The first time I wrote a book and published it. I admit that I really have many shortcomings and mistakes. But I really can't stand such misunderstandings and high hats. So there was some excitement. If you make any mistakes, please point them out, comment in the book, and tell me hard. As long as it is true, I will definitely correct it on my knees! I hope I can think twice before writing a book review. Maybe you typed a random paragraph. It would make me, such a glass-hearted little pitiful person, think about the present from 8 hours ago. Can't sleep [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] Finished with flowers~
This is my first book as an author. The main content was written when I was in high school. There is inevitably some youthfulness in the front part [I'm about to cry]. Therefore, the beginning of the article may seem a little "literary" or even a little procrastinating, but I have worked very hard to change it. The first few chapters in the past have been sweet and exciting, and very imaginative, including a slight element of martial arts, e-sports, and some Daoxuan. And they are all for the purpose of giving out sweets [please pay attention][please pay attention]
I don't know why I didn't push it. In my opinion, this book is very well written. The plot has ups and downs and the relationship between the two is really sweet. Especially the part about punishing the evildoers. The people who have done all kinds of evil are finally done without stabbing them to death. I felt so happy watching that part. The author's writing style is also very meticulous, without the exaggerated writing style of a novice, and it is very interesting to watch. There may seem to be a knife in the plot, but there is often candy behind the knife. It is very well written, and I stayed up late to read it. The author is very powerful. The subjective score of this book should be above 9 points among the hundreds of Lily articles I have read. There are few reviews. However, I believe in the author. If recommended by Tomato, this book is definitely a potential stock. I will give this book a follow and give the author some attention. I will also follow up on the author's other books in the future! The author's book is very structured, and there are many novel and original things created by the author. It is very powerful. It is a treasure book!
What I don't like about Yu Xi after watching this is this👍🏻
I'm glad to hear it, it's straight to the point. , Shuangjie. But there is a point. Their names and personalities are a bit like Xiang Yu and Yu Ji. As a result, I always have visual hallucinations when reading. I feel that it would be weird if the Overlord was reincarnated as a woman. Of course this. Neither of the two protagonists is Yu Ji Xiang Yu
After watching this, I don't think Wu Yu is cute but this is it [Like]
. . . Forgot to rate Good-Looking and Sweet with 5 stars
So beautiful, I like it very much
I thought the protagonist's name was the reincarnation of Xiang Yu and Yu Ji. .
If you tell the truth, you look good. If you don't say anything, you're so handsome [eating melon]
The style is quite fresh, it is the latest novel among the many Lily novels I have read, and the two protagonists both open their mouths and will speak out if they have any conflicts. This is my favorite [plus one on the bookshelf]
A very good novel
It's pretty good, but there won't be a handle on the back.
Big sister, gentle sister🤤
It's very interesting, good luck to the author! [Sending Hearts]
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Very beautiful. Forgive me for being short of words.
Trust me, this book is worth reading
It's good, but the emotional line is too fast, but it's suitable for people like me who are too lazy to read the foreshadowing.
Five stars! ! ! Five stars! ! ! ! Who said Lily books are not good? This book is so good. I like it so much [laughs][laughs][laughs] It's a pity, I don't have much money, so I can only send a few free gifts [crying]
The front is really nice, and it suits my taste very well. It's very sweet, but I personally don't like some of the settings at the back, so I deducted a point. I still highly recommend it [like] [like]
I feel like I lost too much memory in the middle
Very good compared to my taste
It suits me so far