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It can be seen that the author's writing was a bit unorganized at the beginning, but the tension between the characters and the CP is very strong. It belongs to: the logic of your article is a bit loose, but your characters successfully make up for this part! Overall, it's well worth a read. I haven't seen any equivalent replacements on Tomato that are similar to the characters in this article! I really like criticizing Xiao Ming and his ambiguous love interest Xiao Guai!

Although I have read a lot of this type of novel, I still think this one is very novel and unique, with many elements. It starts with the protagonist Zhao Xiuming's romantic NPC and awakens in a hot pot restaurant. It shows Zhao Xiuming's calmness and reason, and is good at manipulating people's hearts. When you read this, you will definitely think that this is a very ordinary awakening novel. But later on, in the hospital dungeon, Xiao Ming toyed with the players, exploiting various loopholes, and was extremely bold and exciting. He doesn't hide his madness, right? It also makes people see the madness but elegance under his gentle appearance. He really wants to be indifferent to everything, but he can predict everything. He also has a performative personality and shows no mercy. It's the same in Alphabet City, but obviously there are still many secrets that have not been discovered, as well as the secrets of the system. The emotional line is also very clear and very sweet. Xiao Ming is good at flirting, Xiao Guai has super high martial arts, is diagnosed as a loyal dog, and is very possessive. All monsters are eccentric and jealous. Little boys and girls love to be clingy and jealous of each other. They love each other so much. [Full] The setting is also very unique. The combination of romance and infinite flow collides with multiple forces, which makes the identity of Xiao Ming and Tong Tong a mystery. Xiao Ming's art of language makes me surrender [flying kiss]. The world view setting is grand, partial to group portraits, and the character settings have their own characteristics and shortcomings. They are more realistic, the writing is delicate and rich, and the connection is very appropriate. There is no blunt and unnatural place. The logic is tight, the plot is compact, not procrastinating, and there is no such annoying plot, so the author will update it quickly. Editor 2: When I was reading it, it was being updated intermittently and there were not many people. I stopped reading it after I went to school. For some reason, I felt a sense of escape every time I saw this book. It just gathered dust on the bookshelf. Now that I have come back to continue reading it, I feel a bit melancholy. I can't get back the feeling I had when I stayed up late and thought about it before?

Help, it's so good, I love watching it, Zhao Xiuming's character really pokes me

It's so good to read. There are really very few books with two male protagonists that I like these days, but this one is really super good and it took my heart away right away. [God: My child, I can grant you a wish Me: I want to destroy the world God: Change it, it's too difficult Me: I want the author to translate me God: Son, let's talk about how to destroy the world]

Oh my God! This is my first time reading this type of article, and I don't know how to describe it. There are many articles of this type where the protagonist is a weird player, but the protagonist has this identity... Emm, a bit like an ordinary person, but also a bit crazy, and a bit mysterious. Anyway, these two words are beautiful! These four words are so beautiful! ! Xiao Ming is so cute! ! That feeling of being cute and honest but a little shy in front of your friends (probably) is so cute! ! Ah! I'm dead! !

The big word "Crazy" really fits my xp! When I saw the motorcycle man's "woof" sound, I was so excited! ! ! Come on! Just too little! Love you love you (ɔˆ ³(ˆ⌣ˆc)[send heart]

It's very nice to watch. The interaction between the system and Xiao Ming is also very easy to understand. The plot is also very good and the character design of Li Han (Assistant Li) is very good. I hope that the author's work will definitely get high ratings in the future. Please give it your best, author.

Looks good... The tension of Bao Bao (Zhao Xiuming) is so intense. The interaction with the motorcycle guy (does he really not deserve to have a name [thinking]) is full of sexual tension. No jokes. Good look. Update soon!!!! It's so good! I can't get enough!! So far, Bao Bao's image has been created so well that it completely suits my taste. The system is also cute hahahaha, little tsundere, and also loves to be jealous, so Is the system and the motorcycle man the same person? I'm so curious. It's a great novel. I'm not going to lie to you. You won't lose money by investing in it!!!

I like it very much! Xiao Ming gives me the impression that he is a rational lunatic, a pleasure criminal who obtains pleasure through performances, and a god who plays with human nature from a high position (forgive me for not being good at describing it) But in front of friends, he is the kind of person who doesn't need to be praised. He blushes easily when praised, and he is also an honest baby! Although there are elements of artistic processing and language modification, Ceramic Rabbit said he is Cheng! Reality! Of! Also, baby Xiao Ming is a voodoo beauty! Every move he makes is tempting the puppy (Xiao Guai), and he pokes me hard! Finally, the author will update quickly! [Please update][Blow kiss]

It's really good to watch. I once suspected that it was Narcissus, hahaha. Although it's not true, the two of them are so touching. I just feel that the ending is a bit confusing. Maybe it's because there is no extra story. Woohoo, I want to read their story again. This angle is very novel. It turns out that the protagonist of the Infinite Flow novel abandoned his halo as the protagonist after becoming the main god and pursued freedom. It is such a new idea. It is amazing.

Only after reading it can you understand what the hot comment saying "The logic is not enough, but the character makes up for it very well" hahahahahahahaha The characters are great, but the plot is indeed confusing and can make people dizzy. In fact, it's a bit hard to watch. But it's not completely intolerable. It's like eating something that doesn't taste good, then eating something that tastes delicious when the characters interact with it, and then enduring the bad thing for a while and eating something delicious. Is this the legendary Cun Zhi? Meow~

Nice! ! ! I like the character design very much, I love it!

The character of the main character really impressed me, I like it😍

It's good-looking and addictive, Brother Xiuming, Xiaoguai, I'm scratching my head when I can't see you two. Xiaoguai is a good dog, he only takes advantage of Brother Xiuming occasionally. Wuwuwu🥺Why can't I grow? It feels so good to see it for me ｡•.•｡₎აIt feels so good♡♡♡I like it so much♡♡Haha♡♡♡

The author is back! ! ! This article is really great. The pull between Xiao Zhao and the system is really good. Although there are some plots that need to be explained later through the characters' mouths, it didn't affect my enjoyment at all. (If you insist on smoothing out the logic, I haven't done it yet. I don't know.) But the descriptions of some scenes are very good, and there is an immersive and disgusting feeling. (Because some scenes are really disgusting) This is a refreshing article that makes people enjoy reading it. And the emotional pull is really delicious. Even if they are still on guard against each other, they are still very touching. The only thing I felt was lacking was the characterization of the supporting characters. This is a common problem with tomato novels. In addition to the likable character of the protagonist, the characters of the supporting characters are always unlikable. But for plot reasons, it must be eaten with supporting characters. It would be better if the characters of the supporting characters could be made more likeable and three-dimensional. (However, many of Tomato's infinite streams or supporting characters in apocalyptic novels are relatively useless and a pity to discard.)

Hmm... It's tied. Overall, it's still very good-looking. The character of the protagonist is very interesting. When I attack, I always feel a bit like a slice? I can accept it, I like Xiao Ming very much! I will keep chasing

Ah! ! ! ! I like it so much! ! This! Personality is... That kind of inexplicable liking! It's still my favorite double male lead. It's good-looking, really good-looking. Ah, what should I say! It's really good, I'm a bookworm! I really hope the author doesn't make it worse! Otherwise, I will fly out of the screen and take a bite of you.

I really like this style of book! The author's writing is also very good. I was fooled in the early stage... But it didn't affect the later stage! I really love those interactions. The settings are all dancing on my XP, and the characters are also written with flesh and blood. I don't know what to say next, but I just like them. [Love] This should be the second brush of the game, right? I have a weak question, can you update it again

It's super beautiful, and this setting is super touching [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart] Dear author, don't run away [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] You have to finish writing, keep at it [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry]

There was a lot of foreshadowing in the early stage, but it started to be collected in the later stage. It can be seen that the author is very thoughtful and creative, but the early stage is still a bit slow. There are too many descriptions for the supporting characters, too much, maybe side descriptions to set off the protagonist, but in the early stage, The supporting characters in the first episode were a bit unlikable and annoying, so it was a bit uncomfortable to watch. Once you get past it, the rest of the show is really good to watch. There are more "scenes" for Zhao Xiuming and Xiao Guai. It's quite interesting to watch Xiao Ming and the others "squeeze" Li Han [laughter]. There are quite a few twists and turns (the guy I thought was annoying turns out to be in the protagonist's camp). Overall, this is a very clever novel. If you like to use your brain, you can take a look. After thinking about it, I'll give it a 5⭐. After all, the character design is really cool and the author's writing style is good. It's probably my problem that I don't like some of the supporting characters. I can't deny that the author is really thoughtful in writing, which is pretty good [Love]

It still looks good, and I can see the back intermittently. But I always feel that the cover style is very familiar. Is it the one featuring Yi Jiyuan Shu and Wen Youshu?

It's really beautiful. I was a little tired when I read it without thinking at first. It's because there was too much content at once. The connection in the middle felt a bit abrupt (without thinking, rubbing my little hands jpg), but it got better later on. The more I watched, the easier it was to get hooked [blowing kiss], and it poked me too much [blowing kiss]. Isn't this really just crazy criticism of the protagonist Shou and his obedient little boy. In fact, I really read this book for the sake of craving for sugar at the beginning, but ended up being obsessed with the world framework and plot [thinking]. Please don't be a eunuch, please update soon [smile][smile][smile], I'm sending my brains to you now, hehe(◍•ᴗ•◍).

So crazy, I really like it. I've always wanted to read this type of article, but I can't find it. This time I'm in for a treat. Not everyone is a pure good person (except Zhou Qingyan). Overall, it's crazy, sweet, good-looking, and very consistent with my personal mental state.

Very nice! ! ! The plot is not sloppy at all and the character of the main character is awesome. I really love it! ! ! ! (Heart-piercing roar) (Yelling) I like it so much (Slowly close your eyes) (Slowly fall down) (Boom) (With a smile) (Put your left hand on your chest) (Die peacefully) (Soul floats out of your head) (Put your hands together) (With a kind smile) (Slowly float to heaven) It's great. Come on, no, why is it less than 30 minutes? [I'm about to cry] I've already read 60 chapters. I'm sad [crying] It's not enough [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] Please throw 100 chapters in my face

It's beautiful and beautiful [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore] What a beautiful mental state. I like it. It's very to my liking. Just don't let the character collapse. I like it. It's such a good book. Why are so few people reading it? If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

Hahahaha, the writing is very good, but my mind is confused when I read it. It must be a personal reason. After all, it takes many days every time I read it. The author writes very well, but please update it more. The child is going to starve to death. (Big, hungry, rice)

Wow, this book is really good. I read it several times and was not interested, but because of the novel subject matter, I finished reading it without realizing it. It's really good. 😋😋😋👍🏻 Shocking and delicious And Zhou Qingyan is so cute, so cute and reassuring, hehe So Xiao Ming and Xiao Guai have such annoying extras👉🏻👈🏻

What's this? Oh, it's a book that dances on my xp Xiao Ming's character design is super interesting, and the system and Xiao Ming's desire to have sex but stop (metaphorically) successfully made me smile. And, wait for my long review after it's finished! ! (If I can persist until the end

It's so interesting. It's the first time I've seen the same dungeon used in several games, and each game's format is different. The characters who have appeared so far are well-shaped, and the plots of each dungeon are also very exciting and mind-numbing. But when will the love line be further developed? It's no longer enough for the protagonists to just stick with each other. When will there be some meat?

I really like it. It's my first time to come across this genre. It's really interesting. Xiaoguai and Xiaoming are a perfect match. They are ambiguous and pull each other. They seem to be tricked but in fact they surrender willingly. It's great to see this book in the book-weary period [Blow a kiss] [Send my heart]