HP: the Heartthrob Was Surrounded by Crazy Critics After Having Fun

Looks good! The writing is very good! Very sweet very sweet I'm so sorry for the praise... I really feel sorry for the heroine's baby. A free time traveler was left by a group of people as a doll. After the heroine tried her best to complete the strategy, it was all in vain. In the end, a group of people still acted as her. The heroine thought she could escape, but in the end they just coaxed her to drink something similar to a love potion. Anyway, she was brainwashed into thinking that she loved them... Is this the heroine's baby herself? Did a heartthrob buy this? ? Where did you do it for me? ? Don't look at the heroine. The writing in the front is really sweet, and the heroine's design is also very good and exciting. It's because of this that I feel more sorry for the heroine in the back. The text also mentions the thoughts of the heroine. She thought she was not a canary and fought back against Voldemort. She is a person with self-awareness, a free and sober person, so I felt disgusted when I read the later part [Petrified] In the end, the author did not explain in the text, but the heroine controls! Be careful! !

Nice! You won't lose money by investing~ Baby Eve's appearance matches my xp perfectly! (I feel like you look like a little angel) Baby Eve, you are just a little cream cake. The cream melts in your mouth. I am a little curious about what Baby Eve's animagus is. Anyway, when I saw the description of Baby Eve's appearance, I thought of the little white rabbit~ super cute, okay? I like every male protagonist~ Hee hee. I feel that the characters described by the author are very vivid and the emotions are very natural. I also like Lily very much. I would like to ask, are Baby Eve and Lily the same as Lily [Sending Hearts]

It looks good. I feel that Lupine's character is a bit similar to Cedric's. I think that in the later stages, Lupine's character will definitely be more crazy [smile][smile][smile][smile]

It's so beautiful... It's the first time I've seen a book that suits my taste so much. I must continue to read more! ! I'm your forever fan! ! ! So pretty! This writing is really good, the teacher is so good at writing and I love it so much! ! !

What can I say about this book... It's like a very empty body wrapped in gorgeous words. There is no reason to be so charming, I don't see any charm in the heroine, Super Mario Sue hahahaha. But! The author's writing style is very good, so although I personally felt uncomfortable reading it, I still gave it five stars. If you like this kind of unreasonable Mary Sue, feel free to watch it. I see there are two more books by the author. I will take another look and wonder if the subsequent books are better. It's such a pity that such a good writing style doesn't create a meaningful and grand core, hey. The book is not the person, I wish the author better and better.

The writing style is really good, there are few authors with such good writing style in Tomato! And if you don't abuse women, you abuse men! The female protagonist is coming soon. The male protagonists include Regulus, James, Lucius, Severus, Barty Jr. And many, many more male protagonists. I hope there will be ten chapters in one day and I am looking forward to the following chapters.

Ah, ah, Lin Ling's book is very beautiful, and here is this one. It's so exciting that it's so beautiful. I say everyone, hurry up and silently ask the author if he can update it three times a day. Readers are hungry and want to eat!

It looks good, I love watching it, please update more [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss] I am a die-hard fan, so I will give you a five-star review first! Hey hey hey! It's a pity that we don't have enough Regulus stories to watch, and there's also Snape, , hungry, hungry, rice.

Eve, Yiwen, Jian Yu, and Luo Ya, these are my four favorite heroines in Tomato HP. Little Eve is really super good. Although everyone is very easy to beat, I stand by Mo Qieer! ! !

It's very beautiful [love] More updates, dear Yuan Shanda [admiration] [admiration] [admiration]

After looking at it for so long, I realized that there was no rating, five stars out of five! White cuts black, yandere really pokes me, Eve's character is not silly and sweet, she also has ambitions, she can also pretend. I'm really happy that Lily and Petunia are back together. To sum up, the whole book has no flaws! [Sending Hearts] The writing is very good, highly recommended! The low rating is just because there are few people [I almost cried]

It's really good-looking. Little Eve's character is a little clever, but it just hit my mark. The "male guests" around her also have their own merits. This book is one of my favorite HP books. All big books are very good-looking. I hope more people can discover this book~[Sending heartfelt wishes]

Absolutely. I really like this book. It feels like reading the best essays in Tomato. Every aspect is amazing. The heroine is not a delicate little white flower, but it feels like white and black. The other protagonists are all good-looking, but they are not finished yet. Just wait for the finale.

The author's writing style is really great, very delicate, and the descriptions of various characters are superb. The charming setting is super exciting, and Shura fields can be seen everywhere. In short, if anyone has not read this book, I will be sad, okay?

I really, really like the author's writing style. From the heroine to the other protagonists, the characters are both personal and have their own crazy attributes. My feeling is that Eve is not the kind of pure mother's heart, but she is kind enough and has a hint of crazy flavor. [Shy] I hope that DaDa can publish similar articles like this in the future. [Send my heart]

It's really good-looking, and the portrayal of the male protagonists is very good! ! ! ! Really, every type of male protagonist is described very well. I really like the character and appearance of the female protagonist. The calm and aloof but gentle white hair is really irresistible. It's really good-looking, really good-looking! ! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] I beg you, the author, I really like this kind of work ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

The book is very interesting, it's my type

This book is really beautiful. It is the only book I have read in one day. My wife describes the emotions of each character very delicately, and the display of certain emotions of the characters is very touching. Ahem, I won't say more, I understand everything. Moreover, my wife thoughtfully wrote story lines for each character that belong to them and the protagonist. This alone makes me very excited. I really didn't expect that line about Melcher, it's just amazing. There is also a lot of foreshadowing in the article, the ending and the beginning complement each other, and the paragraphs are also very interesting. My suggestion is to read it for the first time without reading the paragraphs, and then read it with the paragraphs for the second time. This is the most touching (bushi) article in my mind. After a while, I will read it a second time [Sentimental]

The first HP novel I read a long time ago was by this author. I didn't finish it at that time because I lost my account. Then I stumbled across this novel and found that I had read it before and started reading it directly. For me, I think the full text is quite attractive, and the shaping of the main character also makes me very satisfied. I have read it. There are some not-so-good comments about this book. I think the forced love at the end may be quite controversial, and the main controller is asked to drink the potion. In fact, I don't like this ending. But after watching the extra chapter, it is very sweet, so I am thinking, in fact, there seems to be no better ending, so I can understand it. In fact, the end of this novel may be just a small parallel time and space. In this time and space, they did not achieve happiness, but in other time and space, maybe they are still happy. After I got into HP, I read a lot of fanfics, but very few fanfics. I will read them all, and there will always be some writers in the middle of the plot. Love, let's just abandon the description of the male protagonist. In fact, I like their love more. In fact, they restrain themselves for the female protagonist, rather than blindly asking for it. So I like some of the male protagonists and some don't, but overall, I think this is a relatively complete and good fanfic. I hope the author can write a better novel.

It's so good. This is the first time I've seen an article written about one's own generation. I'm looking forward to the darkening of the story in the later stages. The author will give me a lot of support [Blow a kiss]

It's really super, super, super good-looking! Why is it not popular and the score is so low? Playing so many HP games and watching so many HP fans, this book is really awesome [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] It's not a loss to invest in!

This is the first book I have read about the parent generation. Can I say that every couple of CPs are super awesome? I love Baby Eve's white cut and black cut! ! ! "Yuanshan" is written so well that I'd rather die [laughs]

Holy shit, it's really good to read, but it's a new book. It's hard to wait for serialization. I really think the author's idea is very good. It's much more advanced than the setting where everyone has a favorable impression. Each character has a different strategy mission. I think it's very good. Even if my favorite Lucy is removed, I still think it's good.

From July to October, I lived a life of waiting to read a chapter every day. Now that it's finished, I'm not used to it. I've been doing nothing for a few days, and I'm finally back to write a book review! The first thing I want to say is that the author's description and pacing are very beautiful! The plot is not sloppy at all, the characters and scene descriptions are both delicate and gorgeous. Baby Eve in this book is also one of my favorite heroines in many books I have read. She is gentle yet powerful and can dominate her own sky. In the past few days, the author has also finished writing all the endings. I am really happy to see them all happy. I hope they will live well in that world in the future. I will open this book again in the future and read their stories again.

This is one of the best Harry Potter fanfics I've ever read. I love it so much, love it so much, love it so much, highly recommend it, I am a fan of the group, that kind of feeling that is both irresistible and seductive. The author's literary talent is also quite good, as if he could see that kind of picture. 😍😍😍😍😍

①The writing is excellent, the writing style is delicate, and the characters are not OOC ② Almost all members have single arrows Confession to Little Angel Eve [Adoration]

It's as beautiful as ever ah ah ah ah ah I didn't recognize the author at first It wasn't until I saw in the comment section that the author had written a book about "The Generations" that was also very good, that I clicked in and found out that the other one was a super favorite HP fanfic that I had finished reading a long time ago. The author will publish the next book soon. Urgent, urgent, urgent, urgent. Just treat it like feeding the chickens, hook, hook, hook, hook, hook.

I really like this book (=^▽^=). The writing is really beautiful. This book is for everyone, but not only boys but also girls. I really like Lily. Penny and Cissy(.'▽'.)♡

It's so beautiful😋The heroine has a clear character, she is not a completely brainless dodder, she has a clear goal to pursue, and the author's writing style is also quite good. It is very enjoyable to read the whole story, and the feeling of tug and entanglement makes people scream.

Very nice! The heroine's portrayal is very three-dimensional, and the emotional scenes are full of pull! He even wrote the ending of each character very thoughtfully, including the female character. She really made me cry to death! Full five stars!