Quick Wear: the Male Partner Just Wants to Become an Immortal

Beautiful and well written! Very nice looking now. It's good to not have a female protagonist now. If I have to write a female protagonist in the future, I hope that the small world will not have a fixed female protagonist. I don't like to watch two people falling in love in a small world.

The time-travel nodes are particularly good. They were all taken before being taken advantage of, and the golden finger was not taken away by others. This is my favorite beginning of the time-travel novel. The male protagonist is a fairy king, and there is no complaint in the comment area. At least the male protagonist has not been taken advantage of since he came in time. He will fight back directly if anything happens. , I have never been wronged. In the ordinary world, I can only use ordinary moves, but they are enough. There are basically no situations that cannot be solved. Moreover, with the standard space for time travel, the male protagonist is still very capable. Except for revenge, he never pays attention to the affairs of the original female protagonist. I am quite satisfied. I am very satisfied with the length. I like short fast-travel stories. The first two worlds in the article don't feel that mature as a whole. The plots are relatively simple. In fact, they can be written more concisely and irrelevant plots can be removed. The third world is much better. The plot is basically online from the beginning to the end. If the overall plot is exciting, I will give it 4 stars. Many of the settings in this article are my favorites. I will add 5 stars when the plot is released.

At first, I said that the protagonist was an Immortal King. I thought he looked so awesome. He must be omnipotent in everything. But in the end, he didn't have the space to make elixirs, refine weapons, or draw talismans. He couldn't even bring up any cultivation skills. I have to say that Pogela was too advanced. I've seen a few small worlds. It's better to just say that the protagonist is a mortal who can see endless things. What's the difference?

It's good, but I finished it in too little time. There is no CP in traveling through the small world. I hope it will be like this in the future.

It's pretty good-looking. With such a low rating, it's much better than many books with scores above 9. Many high-scoring books are annoying because they're brainless and illogical. Although this book also has a bunch of unreasonable plots, they are just minor flaws. Overall, it's not sluggish and the protagonist's IQ is online. It's also quite enjoyable. There's nothing wrong with it. A fast-food novel like this is fine! Come on!

Yes, he is an author who listens to advice, and his writing style is pretty good among Tomatoes. Moreover, the protagonist never fails, and he directly crushes the protagonist with his strength. It is very enjoyable to watch [laughing] [like] [like]

There is currently no CP, and I hope there will be no CP in the future. The most important thing is to repair the soul and complete the task [Note][Note] The plot is quick, you don't take the initiative to abuse the scum, you only take action when you are looking for trouble. The system is looking for abuse with its mouth, and it's quick to admit the mistake by kneeling down. It's a funny guy. There will be a world in the future where people get married and have children, so it's not purely without cp, it should be partially with cp [cry][cry][cry]

This novel is currently very well written. I didn't read it at first because of the title. I didn't think it would be what I like. After reading the content, I found out that it was my favorite. I was short of books at first. I read this book several times before clicking in. I thought it was quite interesting. As long as it does not deviate from the tone of the male protagonist's actions, this book is at least 9:4. The 16-year-old bookworm is still worthy of everyone's trust.

The plot is quite novel, and there may be repeated rebirths that may make some people uncomfortable with it, but the overall feeling is pretty good. As for some people complaining that the Immortal King's combat power and character are not high enough, here is a small suggestion to the author. For big scenes and character descriptions, you can refer to the settings of the Shetian Trilogy or Dragon Talisman.

This book is similar to Tu Yufan's book. Yufan's book is finished, and I have found a meal replacement in the book wasteland. The writing is smooth and has no ink stains, so you can follow it.

Is there a heroine, or is there no heroine?

The author is still not active enough. If you update more than ten chapters a day, wouldn't you go far beyond the next door?

She loves love very much, which is a bit similar to the male partner who wants to live forever. But the writing is very good, and they are all beautiful. Hee hee, I support the author. I hope the author will keep writing and not let the world tree grow too fast. And are the scores for this book serious? Such a good-looking book is so valuable. It's unbelievable, I doubt it's a spoof, and I support the author greatly.

The plot is not draggy, the protagonist is decisive, and it is a bit exciting to solve all kinds of weird problems, but it is not draggy at all, and there is a feeling that the story is not finished. The overall story is like running at double speed, and I feel that the author can slow down the accelerated plot a little.

Don't stop updating. It's really beautiful. Have you forgotten your password? I've been waiting for a long time [crying][crying][crying][crying]

It's good-looking, but it's too difficult to follow. I'll try again next year [smile]

Kuai Chuan's novels focus on having fun. Even the fairy king may be driven crazy by the bad guys, so it's okay to feel good. The protagonists suffer and the readers are happy.

It's quite beautiful, especially the splashing world

It's average, but there are a few stories in it that are considered excellent. The two stories about the end of the world and The Overlord's Daddy are quite good. There are also a few good ones. I skipped the one about my uncle. . . I can see it, and I can look like a eunuch.

Thank you all for your comments. Here, in Chapter 55, the author has something to say and gives some simple explanations and introductions. Those who have time can check it out.

After seeing too many female protagonists' perspectives, let's look at the male protagonists' perspectives.

Ahhhhhhh why the update was discontinued again, I think this movie is quite good, Samsara Mirror has such a mean mouth, he is still yelling after being punished every day, Chen Xiao started to be cold and became more and more humane, and then the update was discontinued, speechless

Very exciting, good luck to the author

The third chapter is very interesting, the logic is online, and the police will be called. I vomited when I read novels that didn't call the police. Your nephew is not good-looking because his uncle drags him down. The prototype Chinatown Detective is not good to watch. If you change it, it will still follow the plot.

Good, good, good, I like it. Enter the pit, enter the pit, enter the pit.

Some have cp and some don't. I prefer novels like this. I won't force no cp. Come on, author.

It's okay. It's pretty good-looking. You can use it to kill time when you're bored.

The prince. This episode is quite funny. Try your best to keep this style.

Good-looking, good-looking, very good-looking! [Adoration]

It's okay now, I don't know later Now I'm pretty good at Chapter 86. I'm pretty good at washing. I just did one sentence and couldn't help it and it ended? You won't think that the decoction you drink has no vitamins and that there is no garbage when you take it out, right?