The Story of the Growth of the Second Generation of Immortals

It is very attractive from the beginning. I read the latest chapter in one breath. There is no poisonous point so far. The plot is vivid and the story is novel. The heroine has a clear character and decisive killing. It can be seen that she is a growing heroine. If she keeps it up, it will definitely be a good tomato novel! Come on, author, you must write at least 1 million words, otherwise it won't be enough~

It's very interesting. The heroine is self-reliant and self-reliant. The heroine's path to becoming an immortal is just like us in life. There is a little bit of luck and a little helpless setback. In short, everything will pass. I hope the heroine can find her mother and Yunxi will not die~

It's a good-looking and serious story about cultivating immortals. It's not the kind of story that makes a breakthrough all of a sudden. The heroine's experience is simply called "Looking for Mom" ​​[laughs]. The words are crude but not crude. I hope the heroine can find her mother soon. It's best if her mother is still alive and her parents have backgrounds. It's okay if you don't have it. The author wife wrote [Blowing Kiss] Golden Retriever according to your plan. Sisi and Xiaoduo are both very good, but it's a pity that the little black bird Minnie at the beginning was a pity. By the way, will there be any cp behind the heroine? [Face covering] I like to read stories with cp. It's okay if you don't have it. Having friendship and family companionship is another kind of cp.

It's good-looking, the plot is reasonable, and the plot is rich. It's not the kind of mindless novel.

Finished reading. Although I felt that the heroine was a little too kind-hearted in the middle, she slowly grew up and became a wealthy woman later on. All in all, the writing is good and the plot is very realistic. It deserves five stars. The low score may be because I was too frustrated in the early stage.

Baby, you must update it. The writing is really good. It will definitely become popular.

The description of the characters is very good. They are not blindly good or blindly evil. The description of the sinister human heart is very good. It tells about the jungle of the jungle and the intrigues in the world of cultivation. It is very real. It is not a brainless novel. It can be seen that the author's writing style is very delicate.

This book is well written. The writing is good. The female lead Xiu Zhen also doesn't have any big golden fingers. The story is also told happily. I am looking forward to the development of the subsequent story. Thank you to the author for writing! The rating is too low. It's really pretty!

The writing style is fresh and refined, the plot is detailed and compact, and the characters have distinct personalities!

The heroine of this book has worked her way from the bottom of society to the top of the world of immortality. Be strong and brave, not the Holy Mother. But what I feel most sorry for is the heroine's mother-in-law. In order to allow the heroine to survive, all the efforts were put into planning and disemboweling. The injury improved, and he dragged his damaged body to look for the girl again. All of these reflect a mother's deep love for her daughter. No matter life or death, let the heroine's mother meet the heroine. Just know that the heroine is doing well.

Super nice. It gives people the feeling that it has stopped abruptly and the story is still unfinished, which is quite good. This is the author's way of cultivating immortality, which is excellent. At the beginning, the girl had a very hard life, but later she did not dare to practice immortality, which was all reasonable and not very imaginative. Ding Xiang's cultivation of immortality is like our work and life. There are no shortcuts, we just have to be down-to-earth and follow our own path.

I think this plot is very well arranged and I like it very much. I like the process of the heroine's firmness and continuous growth. I think the author describes everyone very well, with both good and bad sides. This is human nature. It's too short. It's just too short. I also want to know how the heroine's first apprentice is? I want to know the scene where the heroine advances to the stage of becoming a god and advancing to the void refining stage! I also want to see the domineering scene of the real dragon Sisi! The only thing I don't like is the relationship between Zhao Qingquan and Ding Xiang, because I like Wu Neng! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I think Zhao Qingquan's insight and humorous personality are not as good as Wu Neng! ! ! ! ! !

It's okay. The heroine is very determined and everything she does is in line with human nature. Everything goes as it should. However, some book reviews are very malicious towards the heroine. In the male channel, it is very natural for mortals to cultivate immortals and seize opportunities in the harem, and no one objects to it. In the female channel, the heroine is scolded for being more natural. I say some people should not be so malicious towards the heroine. The heroine will even complain when she sleeps with a man.

Although the title says "Second Generation Immortal", it doesn't have any powerful cheat cheats. It's a good female porn novel.

It is a coming-of-age novel about immortality. There is no protection from elders or golden fingers. The heroine slowly becomes stronger.

It's good-looking, and it's a grassroots heroine who is self-reliant. Except for the love line, some people think it's too abrupt and the character is broken, but I can accept it. It's not particularly shocking to me. After all, the heroine is not a love-minded one, and the love line accounts for a small proportion. Anyway, I think it's still worth a look. Come on, author [learn it] [learn it] [eat melon] The more you look at the back, the better it looks. It's like a sense of reality. After experiencing so many times, the heroine's character has improved in all aspects and matured a lot. I'm very satisfied. Golden Retriever and Sisi are really cute. It's such a blessing to have pets to accompany you on your way to immortality. Editor 3: After reading the book, I looked at the comments in the comments. I was very sad. After all, who doesn't make mistakes? And the heroine also made some stupid mistakes. They were all small personal mistakes. And how old is the heroine in the book? Why is she so strict with the heroine? The heroine is as tenacious as Xiaocao, and most of the plots make people feel warm in their hearts. There is no male protagonist in this book, and the ending is a bit hasty. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

The author is a real book writer, very attentive. This book is one of the few good books in Tomato. I'm almost out of the female channel for cultivating immortals. It's a casual book and I can't read it as soon as I listen to it. It's really super good-looking, the logic is clear, not brainless, the characters are vivid, not a virgin, the killing is decisive, the plot is rising step by step, not verbose, and there is currently no cp, so the story frame is in line with my views on cultivating immortals. All in all highly recommended

It's good-looking, very realistic, the plot is compact, the characters are vivid and engaging. The author's writing style is smooth and his emotions are sincere, making people have endless aftertaste. [Shy] Two chapters are simply not enough. I hope there will be more updates!

It's a nice book, but the rating is low, it should be 9 or above. The author wrote the work with great care, and the characters are not made of flesh and blood, which is in line with my values. It's just that the ending is so fast that it leaves people unfinished.

I feel that this book is very suitable to be made into a role-playing game similar to the Legend of Sword and Fairy series. In addition, it prefers the ancient writing style, which makes it feel like playing Swordsman Four. Especially when the heroine escapes from Ding Village, it is like the end of Novice Village and the official start of the game. It feels like a very fun game!

Good looking. When I saw the title of the book, I thought it was about a dandy at first, but I didn't expect it to be a fairy tale about the second generation of immortals living in the mortal world and growing up step by step. In the story, the heroine's sudden relationship with senior brother Qingquan broke out because she was in jail. I personally think it is reasonable. After all, the heroine is neither reborn nor time-traveled. As a little girl with a blank slate in love, it is understandable that at that special moment she would have a different affection for a handsome guy who is devoted to her and willing to help in times of crisis. But don't worry, the heroine still chooses Dumei in the end. The only small regret is that the story ends a bit hastily, but perhaps leaving readers with room for imagination for subsequent stories is also a beauty of reading.

The interesting and literary nature is very exciting. I keep following it and ask the author to update more. It took me a long time to listen to it. I really can't get enough of it. Please hurry up and write. It's a rare good book, and it's definitely worth a listen to those who are looking for a book.

A book worth recommending, very interesting. I just want to know what happened to Dani.

Not bad 👍 Come on author, I hope the author will come up with more new storylines!

The author's writing is very good, not exaggerated, and has the shadow of those classic immortal writings. Come on, I hope to write more than a million words.

A good book, better than some 9.5-Rated books📖. It is a very real and non-exaggerated cultivation process. There are many regrets in the process, but this is the helplessness of life.

The structure is compact and the writing is smooth. It is a good book!

This book is wonderful, especially its description of human nature, its hidden psychology, and its grudges and grudges. It can be said to be a textbook for life growth.

It's very beautiful. This feeling of slowly practicing cultivation has a strong sense of immersion. It's very beautiful.

Living in both the immortal and mortal worlds, the heroine's active efforts, sense of boundaries and caution are all boosts. I'm still reading. The women in the book basically have no love brain. It's great! [Thinking][Laughing evilly][Laughing]