Zhang Yiyi's First Book

Give positive comments and support for good articles! The story of the male protagonist Xiao Yuan is quite good, resisting school violence

It's very interesting. The protagonist fought back and formed a club of his own.

Pretty good. More attention needs to be paid to language expression and it needs to be more organized to give people a sense of integrity. It's well written and can be read. There is still some room for improvement though. I've been reading some slowly over the past few days and thinking about how to analyze this work for you.

The book is very interesting. It would be better if everyone in the club could fight. In the face of different things, sometimes more extreme methods can be adopted. The protagonist is still a bit too rule-abiding. After all, most people who abide by the rules will be bound by the rules, as long as the bottom line is still there. Tooth for tooth, eye for eye. Come on😊