My Little Pony: Black Terror

Please give some comments to the sad author, thank you (♡⌂♡) I know that my previous article was not good. My writing ability and description are not enough, so I still need to improve it. Thank you readers for reading this book. Just read everything in this book. If you have any opinions, you can give them. If so, I will adopt them.

I feel very good when I read it. I rarely see pony fanfics related to Luna. I feel good about the writing, but I don't understand it a bit. There seem to be a lot of pitfalls. I hope to fill it out in the future. Second review, a very good little horse novel. ——Approval from a pony lover and old bookworm [Sending Hearts]

It seems that the current viewing experience is still very good. However, at the end of Chapter 23, the memory flashback suddenly burned the CPU a bit. There is not as much daily life as other fanfics, and almost all are original plots. And compared to other works, Luna's role is heavy and rare. It is very interesting to watch. I hope you don't stop updating.

Overall it's ok. Currently seen now. As long as there is no too outrageous plot in the future. Or a plot that is too dark. Should be able to get high ratings Well, after reading the chapters so far, I'm honestly a little confused. There seems to be a grandmother's darkness behind it

To be honest, I still like the author's writing style very much, and the newly added settings are also very interesting. It is my most satisfying My Little Pony fanfic, and I hope the author can keep writing it. Come on [please update]

The knife has more than 100 million points [angry]

Like, hey hey hey, Luna hey hey hey hey hey (silly)

They are all knives, and there is sugar in the knife. Knife, knife, sugar knife, knife. Knife. Knife. Knife. Knife. Knife. Knife. Knife. Knife.

Most of the books about Luna on Tomato are updated too slowly, I hope they won't give up.

The emotional scenes are delicate and the overall quality is good, but... For the sake of my five-star praise, can you please add two more chapters? I'd love to read [adoration][adoration][adoration]

Looks good, no need for too much salt

Holy shit, the author has made great progress and has a special talent in writing about swords. From mediocre at the beginning, to top-notch knife skills later on. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] It's been a month since I've read any books to support myself. It's a pity, but my swordsmanship is getting more and more mature. Don't do this in the next book. It's like separation and reunion, separation and reunion, torture! In the end, it's a semi-free ending that's a bit tragic. In the next book, except for the important points, basically don't write about swords and write more about daily life. Although it may be because of the inspiration given to you by the game of destiny. By the way, can I make a suggestion? In the next round, the protagonist can go back to save time. Every time he is injured, a flower will grow on his body. , When the whole body is covered with flowers, it will dissipate (the physical body), and then rely on the heroine to cooperate with the supporting role, and use various methods to reshape his physical body. In the end, there are no two because the protection is gone, and then the soul is divided. One went to the human world, and the other is sleeping in this world and cannot be found, and then there is memory loss and so on. @ Come and try, come and try, is this okay for me? Usually there is no knife, but at most there is a fighting plot. The protagonist usually wears clothes, so the flowers are usually not visible. Then the number of random scenes increases and is exposed. Then there are misunderstandings and other knives. Then there is reconciliation for various reasons, and then there are daily plots, and then things happen at important plot points or movie plot points.

The writing is good, most of the plots are original, the plot is well laid out, and there are few good writings.

The emotions are delicate, the plot is very good, there are swords and sweets, there are not many swords, you can give it a try

It's very beautiful. I like the author's writing style. To be honest, there shouldn't be so few people reading it. Come on, author. I have finished reading, it is both sharp and sweet. It is really an excellent little pony novel. I will always wait for the continuation of this book. I give the author a big boost [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] (Today is the Mid-Autumn Festival, I wish the author and all ponies who like this book a happy Mid-Autumn Festival)

Very beautiful, recommended alpaca [like]

It's very well written, and the plot between Luna and the protagonist is so interesting.

The plot is compact, the characters are vivid, and every detail foreshadows the subsequent plot, keeping people excited and looking forward to it.

It's not bad, just can we use less knives?

Come on author, don't give up! Try to write a book! Of course, if you have something to do, don't write a book first, do something well first. For example, if you have a cold, you can also take a day off. Not only is it very interesting to watch, but it also has a new storyline and is very sweet, so come on, little author!

Well, overall, although I haven't read them all, I feel that there are quite a few such fandoms, and I would like to support them.

In short, to put it simply, this is also a good book [Like]

It's so good. It's one of my favorite books. It's a pity that it's a bit short [crying]

I have one more star waiting for you to write more sweet articles for you, but I don't understand how this combat power is stacked one on top of another. It's just like the invincible and alien enemies. In your case, the princess of the universe has become a floor tile in combat power [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ] Forget it, the remaining one star is given to you, the ups and downs of this book I saw no bad reviews, why is it 6 or 5 points?

It looks good, but there are hundreds of millions of knives

The plot is mainly sad. There is a dream within a dream, and the protagonist's character is also very deep, but there should be less knives.

Not bad and to my liking

Looks good, just a little knife in the back

There are a lot of knives and sugar

Very sweet, two words, beautiful