Get Down to Business, Mr. Butler.

It's really slow to build up, no wonder it can't get up to 9 points. When I watched it before, I kept watching and stopping for a while. The idea is very good, the system is very comprehensive, there are no bugs, but the plot is very difficult to stretch, and there is no plot to drag it down. It is about 9.2 Add a follow-up comment, don't always think about using the character's suffering to describe the character. On the one hand, the aesthetics is tired, on the other hand, everyone is already suffering enough in reality, there is no need to suffer again in the novel, and there is no strength to sympathize with others.

I was pleasantly surprised. Don't have high expectations after reading the book review before reading it. The result is that the more you read, the more exciting it becomes. At first, it was a bit, not a bit, too ridiculous, which made people a little surprised. Later, I got used to it and got better. The front of the big world is a bit brain-burning. Some people may say that they can't understand it, but in fact I like it very much. I like this way of writing, there are many wonderful reasonings, and the details are very good. The characters may make people a little uncomfortable at first, such as the Duke's daughter, but as you go on, the characters will become more and more plump, and they often give out sweets. In short, it is a super good-looking book. I hope the author can keep writing [Congratulations]

Quite a classic villain and protagonist. Villain: 1. Have lofty ideals and ambitions. 2. Never be lazy to achieve your goals. 3. Work hard every day and do whatever it takes to realize your dreams. 4. Frequent teamwork. Protagonist: 1. No clear goals for the future. 2. The value of life is to prevent others from realizing their dreams. 3. Act alone or with a small number of people. 4. Act only after something happens. The protagonist basically relies on luck to solve the incident. He is the kind of person who snaps his fingers countless times and is the last one to survive.

Come on, come on, although the writing in the front is confusing and inexplicable, you have done a good job in recycling the pasting brush in the back, which makes it very beautiful to read. I can't wait for Shura Field.

The writing is very good, with a western fantasy feel. This article is a bit darker and more serious. It has a light-hearted plot, but it's not too light-hearted. Then, it is also a book that requires some mental effort, and you cannot directly skip some passages, because there are various foreshadowings, and it will feel baffling if you don't read the foreshadowing. The first volume is okay, but what about the second volume? It's a bit too depressing. The main character is weak, and as the main character's senior sister, the main character's first friend, and a contemporary hero, he is treated like a slave by the higher-ups, rejected by the Holy Sword, and deprived of his status as a hero. Humans also train the hero's sister as a slave, use it as a backup hero, and even sell the hero as a slave. It's a bit too dark and depressing. The most important thing is that in these things, the protagonist is too weak and can only become a pawn. Without any sense of relaxation, he directly prefers dark literature. The book is a good book, but the positioning is a bit confusing. The introduction is too light-hearted, which makes people think it is a relaxing book. I read it with a relaxed mood, but when I came in and took a look, I was like, oh, haha.

This book is very good. It cannot be said to be at the level of Fengshen. It can even be said to be average. However, when reading this book, it is still very good to read when relaxing. The pace is slightly faster. At the end of the first chapter, the daily feeling may be better if there is one more chapter. I confess, I underestimated this book, this book is God, @empty zero bacteria teacher sprint, please update more, other readers will do everything.

It's very interesting. It feels like that anime. Come on, the author. The animation is also very good. [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love] [Love]

Subject: Western fantasy light novel Keywords: Western fantasy, light novel, harem, battle of wits Scoring criteria: 10 points out of 10 "Plot": 8.5, Overall very good, using a light novel-style unit volume plot, and the connection between them is relatively smooth. It's a little rushed in some places, but it's nothing serious. Overall, it's excellent. "Characterization": 9 points. The main characters and even the supporting characters are well portrayed with good details. Most people's IQs are online. They will fight for their own clear goals and make full use of their own means to ensure that the confrontation between the characters will not be boring. "Easy to step into pitfalls" score of 9, almost none. The author is very clear about his writing goals and chapter goals. He rarely steps into pitfalls. There is no entangled relationship between characters. The pits he digs are well buried to ensure a good reading experience. The "overall score" is 9 points, which is excellent. Recommended reading

Immortal product! This book has been digging and burying pits, and not a single pit has been missed. Moreover, it is not the kind of forced explanation. You can also make a general idea by yourself. The last medicine to fill the pits to increase the probability of demons shocked me. I recommend reading one volume at a time. Come on, the author, don't be a eunuch!

Five-star praise! This is a rare fine chaff in tomatoes! The author's writing is very, very, very good. It ranks among the top three light novels I have read on Tomato. The number of words is still too few. After reading the first volume, I am going to keep it for a while. The author must not cut it! [Sending Hearts]

The writing style of the novel is relatively young. The elements of this novel are: Holy Sword on the Bus (there is a cow), Artificial floating ball for mentally retarded people, Lao Deng (the male protagonist). Chimera male protagonist (not) Shura field (not many) There are also dry racks, dry racks, explosive species dry racks, daily, daily dry racks. Also, when will my sister appear? I want to see her.

I personally think it's very good. I like this style very much. I call it Chinese Western Fantasy. The second volume is not bad, the setting of the good-for-nothing lolita hero is very attractive, and the warm-hearted principal in the new chapter is also good. The characterization of the principal is quite important, and it will not go wrong to give the principal more scenes to make the principal's character fuller! Some personal advice about the principal: The principal can be unreliable in daily life, but he must not be vague in the main plot! Come on, the author, I hope to maintain the image of the principal as a "sloppy wise man"! Finally, I like you, the author who updates twice a day

Please give me a rating. In terms of characterization, the author's writing is really good. It's obvious that he put a lot of thought into it. It can be said to be top-notch, but the plot is too loose. In this case, there is a lack of rigorous story framework, which leads to the lack of exciting points. It lacks the exciting points of most online novels to cover up this part of the shortcomings, causing you to read it very awkwardly [Thinking][Thinking] In my opinion, this is a serious deduction. After all, if you don't pay attention to the plot, then how meaningful is the novel you wrote [rolls eyes] [rolls eyes] To sum up, if you can endure the dragging and sluggishness at the same time, then this book can definitely be said to be one of the top harem books on Tomato. Otherwise, I suggest you not to read it, you will be very uncomfortable reading it [smile][smile] Overall, my rating is 8.7-8.9, Which is a pity. If you pay more attention to the rigor of the plot, I feel that I can give you a 9.4-9.6 Level. All it really takes is to deal with the obvious problems on the surface. Let's look forward to the author's second book, and see if the author can redeem this book a little more [Note][Note] By the way, let me add a follow-up review. It is obvious that the author wants to make the plot more complicated. It feels like the plot has been established in advance, but I don't know how to get around it, strengthen my ability in this aspect, or not make the plot too complicated and beyond my control.

It looks good, but the plot is a bit tight. I now see the time when the Magical Duke enters the palace and the first battle on the battlefield is over. First of all, the story of the harem hero Luna after she failed on the front line and returned. The author portrays a caring hero who lost his self-confidence because of the holy sword. After being stabbed in the back by a human, he still wants to protect the human beings he needs to protect. But I personally think that we need to retaliate against the initiator later, otherwise Luna in the harem will look like a holy mother. She was stabbed in the back and was not blackened, so she can at least take revenge. The author skipped the entry of the Magic Duke into the palace in that plot. Then there is the fact that the protagonist has been powerless for a long time and has no strength to overthrow the old king. Then the harem is all the daughters of dukes under the old king, which makes him feel a little aggrieved. For example, in the case of Aina, the daughter of the Duke of Swords, in the harem, because the protagonist has no power and strength, and the two have a relationship, the Duke wants the protagonist to be a "guardian knight", which is actually a lover, not a marriage. It feels like the author wants to wait for an opportunity to make the protagonist get married together. The actual performance is that Aina just goes to whoring and leaves like a foster lover. The protagonist is not active, refuses, or understands, which makes the protagonist seem a bit dull. Maybe I read too many cool novels, but the magical world described by the author is still very fascinating. Overall, this harem magic novel is still worth reading.

The plot is compact, but is it a little too compact? Full marks for the harem

In the past, I always felt that there should be no meaty scenes, so I didn't want to watch it. There is a shortage of books now. I picked up this book. The emotional drama is really awesome, and it is a Western fantasy theme that is rare at the moment. It has the characteristics of lords. As long as it can be written to 2 million words, this book will be a hit, and it will be a big hit. As long as the author keeps writing, he will definitely become popular, and he may even change careers and go to Qidian.

... Indeed, for a Nikkei-style novel, it is well written. However, I feel that the Duke's daughter in the opening scene is not very likable. However, it may be because we have read too many online articles in China, and it is really hard to read Nikkei-style novels. Friends who like Nikkei can come and read [Chigua]

It's a good read. The book is very interesting. The suspense in the first chapter is quite good. However, in the end, it seems that the author couldn't continue writing and the story unfolded too hastily. However, regardless of the details, it is still very good-looking. The story is compact and narrative, and the most important thing is that there are lolita characters! ! ! Suddenly I found that the first chapter of this book and the newly released "The Duke's Daughter's Tutor" are very familiar to each other.

It's in the style of a light novel. After reading the first chapter of the story, it was hard for me to imagine that this was a book I could read on Tomato. Overall, it's great. The story unfolds at a much faster pace than ordinary light novels, and lacks some daily characterization, but it can be understood on this platform. I hope it can be adapted into comics or even animation [Sending Hearts]

The author's writing style is obviously very green, but it can be seen that he really wants to work hard to write well. The shortcomings are that many plots are very stiff, the characters are not full of characters, and the sentences in some places are weird. For example, sometimes the dialogues in written language do not feel like talking. Generally speaking, it is okay. The author felt conflicted when writing it. He wanted to portray a very mediocre image of the protagonist. Later in the writing, he seemed to be a genius but neither fish nor fowl. He felt that he wanted to show that the protagonist was smart, but he was always being pushed along in the plot, as if he was completely unprepared. It felt like a person who had just traveled through time and was familiar with the new world. He wanted to write that the protagonist was a butler, but he did not write what a butler looked like. I wanted to write that Aina is a tsundere, but like many articles in Tomato, there is only arrogance and no coquettishness (personally, I think arrogance is the external manifestation of this kind of person, and coquettishness is the core). Luna's explanations in various aspects are also very unclear. She clearly wrote an image of someone who is ignorant of the world, but it seems like she was forced to fall in love with the male protagonist. Moreover, the rhythm of the plot feels uncoordinated. There are many irrelevant things and a lot of writing is spent. When it comes to the really important parts, sometimes they pass quickly (the protagonist says he wants to investigate, but a lot of the subsequent stories are about other things). It feels like writing a diary, telling what I have done that day, rather than what I want to do.

More than 80% of Tomato books and more than 90% of similar books The plot is generally a little better, the writing is acceptable, the worldview framework is excellent, the most outstanding point is the characterization, many characters are really flesh and blood, which is really rare in Tomato, and there are contrasts throughout the whole process. The plot and writing are not tacky. It is a rare Western fantasy book on Tomato. Then a more detailed review: The narrative angle may not be very good. The plot rhythm of the first few volumes is a bit disastrous. The middle part of each previous volume is uncomfortable to read. The battle is a disaster among disasters. The portrayal of the protagonist is not as good as the heroines and even the supporting characters. The growth pace is also very average or even poor. The villains are 50/50, some of which can be explored deeply are a bit thin. After that, the ending of each volume is quite good. Basically, it is the highlight of the book. However, as the world perspective advances, the latest plot becomes less attractive.

The writing is very good, but I've read a lot of Western fantasy novels that mostly contain eunuchs. I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs. Also, I'm currently investing in sister stocks, although they haven't appeared yet, but I like to read orthopedics [laughs evilly]. This orthopedics department may be banned [smile]. This doesn't count as orthopedics, does it? Having half the blood of my sister doesn't count as orthopedics either [laughs evilly]

After leaving the beginning, the pace is pretty good. The second chapter is considered a highlight of the brave. The foreshadowing and revelations are pretty good, but there is a problem: What happened to us Ina? How long has it been since you posted?

It has reached the upper level of this type of Western fantasy, the content is meaningful, and the female characters are not just flat characters with set settings, which suits my taste. The control of the rhythm is very good. The author quickly taught me how to do it. But it would be interesting to describe the living conditions of ordinary civilians.

No? Is this book so beautiful that it's not even popular? The subject matter, content, and writing are very good, so why is it only rated 8.9?

It's very beautiful. I really like the feeling of peeling an onion, unfolding it layer by layer. I have already seen my sister appear on the stage. I am looking forward to the fifth volume of Fixed Star Shepherd. Whispering in a low voice: Shouldn't the later volumes be very long? Why do I feel that there are obviously fewer chapters after the fifth volume? The author will update soon. The author's soul is back...[Laughing evilly] 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 When the soul comes back... When the soul comes back, the flaw will be revealed, and the ridicule will be like a tide; At the second watch, the expression of anger faded slightly, and the spectators began to turn their ears; At the third watch, a slight reputation sprouts, and an alliance is formed in the future; At the fifth watch, righteous men and women gather together and argue; At the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars and the nobles are revitalized, and the sound of praise fills the thoroughfare; At the twenty-first watch, the name of the green slip will remain fragrant for thousands of years. Sigh! Nine times out of a hundred, the disadvantage lies in the delay; only by waving the keys like rain can the crowd's beaks be stopped. May your ink be like a long river, so that the starry night will have no regrets, and readers will forget I beg the author to reply to me ૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎ა

This book is different from other Western fantasy genres I have seen before. It tells the story of Ryder and the eldest ladies in a light and humorous yet passionate and dark tone. In the first volume, the plot is relatively compact, but it introduces the world view and some settings very well. The second volume is a really exciting volume. Luna's growth enriches Ryder's character and story background. My favorite episode The third volume feels more daily, and the last part is about Aina's inner growth and the story between brother and sister. I haven't read the fourth volume yet I am also looking forward to the author's subsequent performance and telling a better story! ! !

This novel is very interesting and the content is very interesting. For example, I haven't really wanted to read novels these days, but I can still get more into it after reading this novel. Some of the comments in it are very impatient or just for the sake of trolling (many of the comments in there just don't want to think at all and just feel too boring or disgusting because of a certain small clip. For example, the regent said he felt disgusted when he stroked the hair of the non-biological sister. That country was originally a slave country, and people used the non-biological sister as a weapon or a tool. What's this?

It's a great Western fantasy novel. I read it casually after reading the two hundred chapters and introduction. I stayed up late to read the first volume without realizing it. The plot details, foreshadowing, and characterization were far beyond my expectations. It was really wonderfully written. I couldn't sleep until I finished the first volume. After reading it, all the foreshadowings and details were intertwined, and I was very satisfied. Ps: I still don't understand why vampires have to fight demons to increase the risk.

In terms of the quality of the first volume, it is very well written, can be read easily, and has thought-provoking foreshadowing. The character portrayal is also remarkable, not worse than those Japanese light novels on the Internet. The only thing you need to worry about is whether the author can persist and perform stably.