It's Over, I've Turned into White Moonlight

Hello everyone, this is a newbie Xiaopoujie. After thinking about it again and again, I decided to post a long comment to talk about something: 1. This is a child's first book in the true sense, so the arrangement and processing of the plot in the early stage may not be so smooth, or even dragging. Friends who really mind can skip reading. If you have time and energy, it will be changed later... We also welcome your opinions. In the early stages of the campus chapter, there was relatively little physical contact between the male and female protagonists. At this time, the male protagonist had no intention of accepting the female protagonist, and was even deliberately alienating her. So I can only rely on some very zz villains to promote the plot, well... There is no way, the author is too bad. It will be better later on when the male and female protagonists start to interact with each other. 2. My heroine is silly and sweet. If I wanted to write about strong women, I would write about female videos. I just like cute girls who are stupid and easy to fool. O(｀ω´*)o And the introduction also said that she has no common sense and would mind if the heroine is occasionally stupid in some trivial things... I'm sorry, I can't change this. I can only go out and turn left. 3. Children like digging holes and boomerangs, but theoretically speaking, they will be filled in later. Whenever they see something that is very abrupt and unreasonable at first glance (such as the Yang difference and no salary, or the male protagonist is willing to work for nothing without being paid), those are the holes dug by the author, which will be filled in later! So please don't blame me for my foreshadowing! Anyway, writing is not a process of constantly digging holes and filling them in... Ahem (more below)

As an idealist, I had some opinions on some of the plots, but I saw one of them: People who truly appreciate you will fall in love with you again and again, regardless of a memory. I finally felt relieved... This book by the author can be regarded as the end of my regrets. I give it five-star praise with both hands [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

The plot is good, at least I like it. If the introduction can be improved, it may be more attractive to readers. For example, it can be shown that it has extraordinary powers at the beginning, so it will not be so disconnected. After all, I almost didn't read the book at the beginning because the first half of the introduction sounded like a romance novel, and the second half sounded like a fantasy. Personal opinion, for reference only[smile][smile][smile]

It's very well written, why doesn't anyone read it? How about the author recommend the book?

Very good! The author has his own style, and he listens to advice and immediately corrects the problems and poisonous points pointed out by others. The writing style is relaxed and natural, and the emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists are also well written. Give it a five-star support. Finally, please update, it's not enough!

It feels like a fire will pierce your eyes [note]

The author's writing is pretty good, but I don't know why it's not popular.

It's very sweet, super sweet. Based on my 3 years of reading experience with single female protagonists, this is considered good food. Then I don't want the following plot to be cliche, with the heroine being kidnapped and the heroine having a mysterious background. I just want to watch daily sweet love, and everything else can be put aside

Not buddy [what][what][what][what][what] I was watching enthusiastically [rolled eyes][rolled eyes][rolled eyes][rolled eyes][rolled eyes] You can't tell me anymore [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

Personally, I feel that from a macro perspective, the plot theme is very good, but from a micro perspective, the details of the plot need to be improved. Come on [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

Real love combined with fantasy (or urban imagination), the subject matter is very interesting and there are no messy other emotional lines. The men and women are a good match. The reading is smooth, and the description of the details of the relationship between the male and female protagonists is very poignant. I really like this book, good luck to the author!

It's very well written. The author's writing is good. Come on.

The current rating is 7.1, And the expected rating is 9.2. This humble little author is really to my liking [Adoration][Admiration][Admiration]

The author writes very well. As a bookworm for five years, in most novels, I can guess what the follow-up and the protagonist will do, but this one is really unguessable (›´ω`‹), which proves that the author's writing is very novel. Come on, update, and generate electricity for love.

No updates in the early morning, what do you think Li wants to do? Also, I want to read the "warm little story" between the protagonist and his ex!

It's very interesting, good luck to the author.

The female protagonist is very cute, the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is also very interesting, the writing style is not bad, it is very interesting, but the author can do it faster [please update]

Can you not be so kind? After all, you are also a person with superpowers. Wouldn't it be better to secretly destroy those people?

It looks good, I love reading it, please support the author.

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Looks good, call me if it becomes popular

It's a very good novel that makes Xiao Xia's tail spin, but too few people read it.

Xia Ji's silly portrayal of Baitian is so good

Looking at it now, the characters are good, the plot is very attractive, and the quality is very good. So, when can the author get together? How many chapters are expected?

Some places are a bit alienating and a bit poisonous.

Author, how are you going to compensate me for the fact that I read your book until 5 a. M., Causing me to feel depressed and unable to sleep? [Pout]

I think it's pretty good. The interaction between the young couple is quite sweet, a bit toxic, but still acceptable.

It's well written, and the heroine is very cute. I think it's pretty good. I just don't have much time to catch up now. I will read it all at once when I have time (I will come back to watch it every two days at most) [face covering] Very good, it's 7 minutes already The score is 7.2, Come on [laughing evilly] It's 7.3 Points. You don't want to feel cold, do you? ? 7.8, Don't stop updating. I misjudged it, it was 7.3 [Face covering] I dropped it, 7.2, No, didn't it just touch it a few times? Is mental mysophobia so serious? Then there are fights in martial arts novels. As for giving low scores? [Cover face] 7.5, What's wrong with you if you're not the author? ? ? Live a little bit

Brother who has a good bag [got it]

It's a great day, it looks great