After I Transmigrated, I Became the White Moonlight of the Abstinent Zhongli

My evaluation language may be more direct and sharp, and it is limited to expressing my personal opinions, so don't read it if you are a blind person. The book is really good-looking and not particularly novel, but it is indeed very imaginative and the plot is very good. However, the writing is not enough and it is lost in the crowd. Some of the characterizations are too blunt. Many emotional turning points feel like they passed in a flash, and the emotions are not expressed delicately. This is a shortcoming. Another very important point is that the grasp of the characters is not clear enough. In other words, his characters are all OOC. I think it is really serious OOC and there are many plot points that directly violate what he said in the plot. Take that as an example, he seems to have said it, right? In order to avoid everyone being the most senior person in Fengdan, he cannot openly show his partiality towards others. (Not the original sentence, I don't remember it very clearly, and I can't completely reproduce it, but that's the meaning anyway) The character portrayal is relatively delicate, but the character is too OOC, which makes it very uncomfortable for me to watch. In the original work, you said that Zhongli was very arrogant when he was young, but his arrogance was not depicted. And the subsequent scenes didn't reflect his composure. It's not that he didn't have it at all, but it wasn't enough. And so on, a lot. It feels like I'm wearing the skin of the original God, because so far, I haven't seen any of the characters that match the size of the original Ooc. But the idea is okay, and so are many of the details. If it's a beginner's work, it's pretty good. All in all, there is a lot of room for improvement. If you ask me, if this article was not a fan, and the plot, characters, background, etc. Were all original, the score would be higher. Overall, it's mid-to-higher, with a lot of room for improvement. Four stars count as encouragement.

It's beautiful, and I love the content. When I first saw the name and cover, I thought it was a single male protagonist, but after reading it, I found that I fell in love with this book! ! ! Really, I like the heroine's temperament, and most of them are my favorite characters (it's just a bit surprising that there is a wild dragon) There is just too little content. I want to watch it every day, but it is not enough. Speaking of which, the last few pictures outside the screen are a bit lacking...[Grievance]

Absolutely, it can stand out among Genshin Impact fanfics, not only for its novel plot, but also for its character creation. Those who haven't seen it will be at a big disadvantage! [Aggrieved] [I'm about to cry] Can you please give me more updates? I love watching them [Please give me more updates]

How should I put it? Although it is similar to the formula of a fairy tale that I read before, the author has a great imagination. Hehe (ºº ), it's good to read.

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Come on, great author

I really love it, and there are so many people. It is estimated that there will be a long time to come. I hope that the updates will not be interrupted. I hope that the subsequent plot development will lessen the abuse of the female protagonist, and abuse the male protagonists if they want to.

It's really nice. Give me an update. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Super recommended [Like] Very beautiful [Send heart] Very sweet [Smirk] No knife at all [You taste it carefully] The author writes very delicately [Cry] Super beautiful [Already planted] It's really good, don't lie to you [Blow a kiss] The ending is also very good [Blow a kiss] [Like]

It's nice to watch, and it will hit you unexpectedly after a slight sweetness. You will almost be numbed by the knife. The ending has a branch line and is sweet but also has a razor edge. Sometimes it will intersperse some stories of small secret realms (almost parallel worlds). There are many regrets that make people sigh. It is systematic but not too abrupt.