One Person: the Immortal Cultivator Mixed with Strangers Flies into the Air

It's pretty good, although there are some minor flaws, but it's okay. The main point is that since the protagonist is Quan Xing, don't change it. After all, since you are the villain, you should always be the villain. Don't be good and evil for a while, which will easily ruin the book. I think the plot is good. Don't say that it's bad or bad to cheat Zhang Yuling. Remember that the protagonist of this book is Quan Xing, no She's a nanny, how can she be a villain and defend the side of justice? This is a fanfic, not the original work. If you want to read the original work, which fanfic or novel should you read? For me, anything is fine as long as it's fun and comfortable. Don't think I have bad intentions. The main thing is that you all think on the side of justice. If you are on the evil side, you can think about it.

The writing is good, why do you keep writing so much? Keep going, come on, don't be unfinished, don't be a eunuch.

What's going on? It's gone?

He is good at cultivating immortals. When converted into immortal cultivation, Lao Tianshi's strength should be at the peak of Foundation Establishment. After all, it is said that if a golden elixir is swallowed, my fate is up to me. Lao Tianshi belongs to the concept of a golden elixir stuck at the peak of Foundation Establishment.

I want to take you to eat roasted purple sweet potato, and then whisper in your ear "I am purple sweet potato and you"

It's really good

Average, but can you please not overwhelm your combat power? He is so good at cultivating immortals.

It's very beautiful, but the scene where Feng Baobao becomes the wife made me feel like the protagonist is cheating a fool [face covering]

It's very good and in line with my taste, but I'm still a little worried that this book will be eunuch, because 90% of the fanfics written under one person are eunuchs, and 9% are unfinished. I hope the author can stick to it

Are they siblings, or lovers? Why do I get less and less understanding the more I look at it? D(ŐдŐ๑)Are Xia He and Xia Qingzhu biological siblings?

It's so frustrating to practice immortality

Where is my Lingyan Ji? ? ?

It's pretty good, although it's another time to collect the Eight Miracles. Please describe more about the abilities of immortal cultivators, thank you.

I like it very much, it's my favorite type, but can the system be different? Zhang Lingyu said that the value is less than 30w, and it will be 18000 when it is used later.

The author is too short, there may be no more

Each book is an unsolved mystery, waiting for discerning travelers. May you be the one who discovers it, let reading become a treasure in your soul, and gain joy every time you turn a page.

I think it's very good. Xia He is a new car. Personally speaking, Xia He is my favorite character. Of course there is another character named Fenmao.

It looks good but the author is a bit short

Come on! Well written

Come on, come on, come on

Come on, author, come on Come on, author, come on

A pretty good book! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

When will he be able to ask gods to ask for his magic?

It's pretty good to watch, a little unreasonable, but except for the plot with the heroine, which is a little unreasonable, everything else is okay.

Why is it gone? I feel like there are ants crawling all over my body. Please give me another chapter! Just one chapter! ! !

It's very pretty, I don't think it's as watery as it sounds.

This is beautiful and very refreshing😁

Something to say, come on

I think it's pretty good-looking

The writing is okay, keep up the good work.