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Urban Daily Life, Strive to Be Realistic and Immersive, and the Writing Style Is Delicate and True.
Don't come here for time-traveling, fantasy, or anything like that. What you want to read is that it's true to every word, close to life, and has sincere and resonant emotions.
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Urban Daily Reality Masterpiece
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Although there are few updates at the moment, this narrative style is really comfortable. Please! In particular, the content is tight and not procrastinating, and the plot goes by very quickly, but this is what worries me. Although I am a teacher, I am not a participant most of the time, so I jump very quickly. Therefore, the teacher is actually a line, and the students who play the game are the male protagonists. But without the teacher personally participating in the advancement of the plot, it is difficult to spend a lot of time to overcome the small difficulties at a certain node? Just like the first twenty chapters, we have already passed very quickly. For what reason did the protagonist grow up and then encountered some setbacks and was almost defeated? The characters explained are flesh and blood and have grown up with reasonable evidence. Even if the explanation of the things encountered is not long, it does not affect our own thinking, because this style is too realistic, and the teacher has his own family and career. Even if we pay attention to this student, he will definitely not be as good as the person they walk together with. So at this time, the concise writing style made me a little worried about the length issue, and I really wanted to ask the author if he had an outline. Finally, the teacher's wife is a bit unpleasant. The plot requires me to understand it, but it does not affect my dislike of her. However, if it were not for the teacher's wife, maybe the protagonist would really be the teacher. But! Give the teacher some time to play games, otherwise it will be suffocating. Unless the teacher wants to divorce and follow the students later? No, I know your article may not be long, but isn't it too short and you haven't read enough? By the way, happy wedding, Jiejie.
Wish Jiejie a safe journey