Redemption System: Starting Magic Clip Magic

It's very well written, I just want a harem, not a fake harem [laughing and crying]

The writing is very good, sometimes funny, sometimes very touching. Many parts really fit the fantasy perfectly, the protagonist's character is well-developed, and the supporting characters are very interesting in terms of their roles and personal plots. Worth a look. There are just some highlights that are a bit annoying. The first point is that the male protagonist is too ambiguous with some male characters, which makes straight men feel a little uncomfortable. The second is that the male protagonist is too holy. The Japanese Asashi male protagonist can really stay pregnant even if he takes off his clothes and sleeps together. Even sitting still in the arms cannot describe the hero's determination.

It's a pretty good novel! There just aren't that many exciting moments (the kind that can still be remembered freshly after people turn over them), but at least men have the right outlook on life! He is also a god, and the characteristics of many characters are also very close to reality. No one's life is smooth and smooth. Everyone has selfish motives, their own emotions and thoughts. Sometimes the two of them are on different channels, but they can chat for a strangely long time. This redemption article makes me feel that the endless complaints of many people are very consistent with my views! You have to vent it out so that you don't choke yourself to death! ——Personal thoughts after reading, don't criticize if you don't like it——

The subject matter is very good, and the author has indeed thought about it himself, but the problem is also quite big. It may be the same as when I was writing essays in high school. I first wrote the framework when I saw the title, and then wrote it directly. As a result, I didn't think much about it at all, resulting in poor connection and failure to express the parts that should be expressed well. To be honest, reading the author's novel feels like reading my high school essay. It feels like I thought a lot but could only write 800 words in the end. But I have one thing to say, but in terms of subject matter and core, I think 🍅 this free one is pretty good. The fast pace is acceptable as long as it's not the kind of sudden madness.

Good luck, love health The protagonist's way of speaking is more in line with my real life [laughs]. He uses a few swear words to reduce the frankness of his words. There is no preaching or persuasion tone.

It's very interesting, I will read it until the end. In fact, there are many factors to consider when writing a book. The author can write so well, which is already very impressive. I am actually very satisfied with such a novel. After all, there are very few books in this style and are not common. Speaking of which, Shuangwen looks weird and has an indescribable feeling. This style of book looks more comfortable, right? In short, I read whatever the author writes, and I don't have any requirements. It's good to have books to read, and I don't expect too much. ʚ♡⃛ɞ(ू•ᴗ•ू❁)

I feel like this show is like Cupid Chocolate. The framework of this book and that show is roughly the same, but there are similarities and differences. It's still very good. You can learn from some of the plots of Cupid Chocolate, such as yandere and the like.

It's good-looking, and the humor is different from other harem novels. It's not brainless, and it even has some wits. It's not a pure harem novel, nor a purely daily novel. It has magic and Taoism. Happy book lovers. It looks good, come on, the author [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

It's really good-looking. I came here to recommend the book, but it's a pity that too few people have read it. If I have the chance, I will recommend the book to you. I hope to keep writing it, and it must be a harem novel, don't pretend to be a harem. I don't like the feeling of having a knife in my stomach, and I hope I don't need a knife. Please [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

I must give it a five-star rating, I especially like this plot. It looks really interesting. From the beginning to the end, there was almost no part that made me feel bored. The whole story was interesting. [Shy]

1. The setting of the opening magic fusion magic is simply amazing. I thought it was just an ordinary system cool article, but I didn't expect the core of 'redemption' to be so poignant! Watch the protagonist use cool spells to heal people's hearts step by step. This masterpiece with a novel setting and unconventional plot must be praised with five stars! " 2. "I was attracted by the title of the book, and ended up being completely trapped in this world of magic and magic and couldn't get out. Every skill given by the system is full of imagination. Not only the stage effects are explosive, but the redemption plot also brings tears to the eyes. Tomato now has more and more fairy authors. It is highly recommended! " 3. "This kind of imagination that perfectly combines magic performance and magic system is really amazing! The protagonist is not only performing, but also saving the world in another way. The plot is fast-paced, exciting and tearful at the same time. It is definitely the best redemption story I have read recently! "

The author keeps it up, it's a very nice novel! Believe that gold will always shine! The author is great, you don't have to worry about how other people rate it. Gold always shines. Your plot and content are very good. I will always support you.

Joy, positive energy, and the salvation of all kinds of people in the world from the book Let's start with the author's autobiography in the last three chapters. He was complaining about all kinds of weird people he met around him, some good and some bad. He wrote all these into his novels. Maybe this is why the characters in his novels are full of reality, so that everything bad will have a perfect ending in the book. The plot is smooth and does not have the same routines of assembly line production as most novels nowadays. The male protagonist has a funny character and only has two dimensions in his heart. Although it is a harem novel, there is nothing like the love between one person and another in the stallion novel. It can only be said that he is still in love. This is a model of a Sigma man. After reading it, I could only regret that so few people were interested in this book, which resulted in poor grades. However, the author insisted on finishing the high school chapter. But I still recommend everyone to take a look. It really caught your eye and you read it in one breath [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

A very good protagonist, a very interesting character, and an interesting story. I am glad that I have followed it from the first chapter until now. I was afraid that you would not read it anymore, so I gave up on ending the book. Since I am too lazy to post a book review, I wanted to post a comment to ask you. All I can say is that I will wait until the next time I meet you again. I hope you are lucky.

The protagonist has a good character. Although it is a bit idealistic, it is really good. It can also portray emotional scenes. It is fun to watch.

Therefore, the quality of this novel on Tomato is good enough. If it is for entertainment, you can read it properly. However, it still has the defects of relatively immature writing and too stereotyped conflicts. In any case, this novel is no longer a novel for others to enjoy. It contains a person's small reflection of what he has experienced in this society. Finally, I hope the author lives a good life

It is a very interesting innovation. I have never seen a novel of this type on the market. The right plot, the setting of the redemption object, and the character setting of the protagonist are all very interesting. I wish the author can write it to the end without any pressure. (Don't be in a hurry to finish it. The subject matter of the first book is quite good. If you plan to write a second book, it is best to use the first book to increase your fan base and popularity.)

Why does this book only have so few points? Why does it only get read by so many people? It's obviously very well written!

In fact, I think the harem is better, and it's quite uncomfortable for the redemption to turn into a regret story in the end. The bond between each redemption target is too deep, and there is really no way to criticize the plot. I won't complain about the part where Shiyu's mother changes. After all, this is the only fault in the plot. It's too ugly to criticize. I prefer a perfect ending rather than a regretful ending. I really like this book. Come on, author, don't give up. Ignore Qiu Ba's bad words. It's hard to reconcile with others.

I am a boy, not a girl, and I was hooked from the first moment I watched it. The protagonist has a very distinct character, the plot is dense and funny, but the timing is good so I won't get bored. The plot is quite good and reasonable, and the other characters are also very individual. It feels like every character is alive. Overall, it's a very interesting, funny, not brainless, but not too exciting harem novel. The subject matter is very novel. I loved it, but it just wasn't popular [facepalm]

It stands to reason that good writing is not true and true writing is not good. Shuang's article adds many real fragments, giving people a sense of intimacy and novelty. The male protagonist who is not a stallion is really sigma, and the problems he deals with are real and not absurd. It is really fun to read this refreshing novel with brains. Why isn't it popular?

It's very good, it feels very real. Anyway, I have read so many books on Tomato, and this is the one I can always read (personally I feel the quality is very high). I just can only read more than 200 chapters and don't want to read them, let alone read the latest chapters every day.

The writing is very good, the relationship between the characters is clear, the image is vivid, the development of the story is fascinating, the plot is novel and unique, I highly recommend it to all book lovers! ! !

It's really beautiful. I hope the author will not give up [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

It looks good, I hope it will continue to be updated, and I also hope that the male protagonist will wake up soon

The plot is very interesting and engaging in every aspect, and the characters are well portrayed and very interesting to watch.

Very beautiful, the plot is reasonable, and the characters are not bad

The writing is quite good, and each story is very interesting and full of redemption. I hope the author will speed up the update.

The author writes tragic cases one after another with plain, funny and humorous plots. Many of the plots are microcosms of life. Our lives cannot be as lucky as in novels. Pain cannot be saved and regrets will always become regrets. I hope everyone can still have hope after reading the various complaints in their lives. Perhaps this is the meaning of redemption.

Except for the first time, I felt that there were too few emotional lines and my daily life was too bland, and there is a system that can be a little bolder, but it's still good anyway.