Redemption System: Punishing School Bullies from the Start

It's a pretty good novel, why doesn't anyone read it? Personally, I feel that the character of the protagonist is very well developed, maybe because it is more similar to my own personality, so I feel very immersed in it.

It's very well written, I just want a harem, not a fake harem 😂

The writing is very good, sometimes funny, sometimes very touching. Many parts really fit the fantasy perfectly, the protagonist's character is well-developed, and the supporting characters are very interesting in terms of their roles and personal plots. Worth a look. There are just some highlights that are a bit annoying. The first point is that the male protagonist is too ambiguous with some male characters, which makes straight men feel a little uncomfortable. The second is that the male protagonist is too holy. The Japanese Asashi male protagonist can really stay pregnant even if he takes off his clothes and sleeps together. Even sitting still in the arms cannot describe the hero's determination.

It's a pretty good novel! There just aren't that many exciting moments (the kind that can still be remembered freshly after people turn over them), but at least men have the right outlook on life! He is also a god, and the characteristics of many characters are also very close to reality. No one's life is smooth and smooth. Everyone has selfish motives, their own emotions and thoughts. Sometimes the two of them are on different channels, but they can chat for a strangely long time. This redemption article makes me feel that the endless complaints of many people are very consistent with my views! You have to vent it out so that you don't choke yourself to death! ——Personal thoughts after reading, don't criticize if you don't like it——

The subject matter is very good, and the author has indeed thought about it himself, but the problem is also quite big. It may be the same as when I was writing essays in high school. I first wrote the framework when I saw the title, and then wrote it directly. As a result, I didn't think much about it at all, resulting in poor connection and failure to express the parts that should be expressed well. To be honest, reading the author's novel feels like reading my high school essay. It feels like I thought a lot but could only write 800 words in the end. But I have one thing to say, but in terms of subject matter and core, I think 🍅 this free one is pretty good. The fast pace is acceptable as long as it's not the kind of sudden madness.

Good luck, love health The protagonist's way of speaking is more in line with my real life [laughs]. He uses a few swear words to reduce the frankness of his words. There is no preaching or persuasion tone.

It's good-looking, and the humor is different from other harem novels. It's not brainless, and it even has some wits. It's not a pure harem novel, nor a purely daily novel. It has magic and Taoism. Happy book lovers. It looks good, come on, the author [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

It's very interesting, I will read it until the end. In fact, there are many factors to consider when writing a book. The author can write so well, which is already very impressive. I am actually very satisfied with such a novel. After all, there are very few books in this style and are not common. Speaking of which, Shuangwen looks weird and has an indescribable feeling. This style of book looks more comfortable, right? In short, I read whatever the author writes, and I don't have any requirements. It's good to have books to read, and I don't expect too much. ʚ♡⃛ɞ(ू•ᴗ•ू❁)

I feel like this show is like Cupid Chocolate. The framework of this book and that show is roughly the same, but there are similarities and differences. It's still very good. You can learn from some of the plots of Cupid Chocolate, such as yandere and the like.

1. The setting of the opening magic fusion magic is simply amazing. I thought it was just an ordinary system cool article, but I didn't expect the core of 'redemption' to be so poignant! Watch the protagonist use cool spells to heal people's hearts step by step. This masterpiece with a novel setting and unconventional plot must be praised with five stars! " 2. "I was attracted by the title of the book, and ended up being completely trapped in this world of magic and magic and couldn't get out. Every skill given by the system is full of imagination. Not only the stage effects are explosive, but the redemption plot also brings tears to the eyes. Tomato now has more and more fairy authors. It is highly recommended! " 3. "This kind of imagination that perfectly combines magic performance and magic system is really amazing! The protagonist is not only performing, but also saving the world in another way. The plot is fast-paced, exciting and tearful at the same time. It is definitely the best redemption story I have read recently! "