Star Dome Railway: Protecting the Wandering Path

I was about to review the YaYa book, but I found out that I wrote a new one [crying] or the heroine Silver Wolf and Duck [crying] [crying] [crying] I absolutely support it [please update]

The products produced by Lao Luo must be high-quality, just watch it and it's over

As long as this book becomes popular, I will be a long-time fan.

It's not bad, but the original characters in it are not very consistent with the original work. It's just a cover story. The writing is still good. The author's setting here should be: the weakness of the protector is exactly the person he wants to protect. It's a bit like a contract. If the person to whom the contract is harmed, the power of the guardian will be lost. It should be like this. Looking at the beginning, the protagonist was hit by Silver Wolf's car (the author also secretly pointed out in the article that the reason for being hit was because the protagonist was unprepared for the attack from Silver Wolf), and was injured by Silver Wolf's bombing of the honeycomb. This should be the reason. Those who said that the combat power was broken probably didn't pay attention to this. There is also the chapter where he confesses his love to Kafka. From the beginning when the protagonist prepares to meet the silver wolf, I feel that the twist is a bit too fast. I originally prepared 999 roses, but in an instant the enemies behind appeared. Then the silver wolf unknowingly controlled the fleet and pulse-blasted the protagonist. The twist was a bit too fast, which made me as a reader feel a little uncomfortable. It was only after reading that chapter that I understood the development of the story. But to be honest, I still feel that this kind of knife is not very good. It can be clearly stated that it must be hidden from Silver Wolf, which leads to a series of more abusive plots. But the author's quality is still good, but the development of the whole story made me feel a little unnecessary. (But it seems that if it doesn't develop like this, I can't think of anything to write about [face covering] The protagonist is already a diamond, and there is no need to write about getting stronger and fighting monsters. Apart from getting stronger, the only things I can write about are daily life or sadistic things.) But no matter what, the author should work hard, I still hope to write better and better [Love]

Lao Luo's emotional line is as delicate as ever, narrating the psychological changes and relationship progress of the characters, laughing without losing sadness, and having a realistic idealistic romance, which is gripping and fascinating. The data for Lao Luo's books will not be very good at the beginning. People who like it will like it very much, and people who hate it will really not be able to stand it. I hope the author will not be affected by the bad reviews and can persist as always. We will all support you.

I feel that "Dance of Sinners" has exhausted Lao Luo's talent in writing female leads. Ps. Is that pillow supposed to be a eunuch? Pps. I already feel Lao Luo's obsession with Sky Rita and Silver Wolf.

I have read the previous books by Lao Luo. The quality is very good, so I will give this book 5 stars.

Hee hee hee hee, Lao Luo hehe hehe hehe hehe...[Adoration][Admiration][Admiration]

That iron-breaking book was sealed, and I didn't even read it.

Since it is Lao Luo's new book, let me support it with five stars first, and then there is the character issue, Kafka and Silver Wolf are all broken (don't take me to read it), and the warm and healing introduction of your introduction... It is recommended to bring your own pacemaker when reading. In the end, Lao Luo's writing is still as good as ever (Lao Deng, a few novels)

Lao Luo's schoolbag is beautiful

It's right to give 5 stars first (｡>ㅿ<｡)

So why is the label dual heroine?

Lao Luo's premium products plus one

Looking forward to what it will look like when the identities of both parties are revealed Please update more, I can do anything [cry][cry][cry]

Lao Luo performed steadily. Compared with the previous books, the emotional scenes in this one may be a little more delicate. After reading the current one, there may be more knives. In the first few books, Honkai Impact 3 can probably be guessed. Genshin Impact is quite comfortable to read. This one is a bit more painful when pressing the knife, but Lao Luo can still read it with confidence. Come on, Lao Luo. :::::::

Lao Luo, we're here to bother you again. If you have some good food, I'll bring it over [laughs]

The third story is very good, but the relationship line is a bit rushed and the sibling relationship is a bit toxic. However, considering the characters of Yin Lang and Lao Luo, it can only be like this. Compared with the previous stories, the relationship this time is too close at the beginning.

Why do I feel that Silver Wolf is not the heroine?

Looking at the current situation, who is the heroine of this book?

The quality of Lao Luo's books deserves to be guaranteed

Update quickly, otherwise who can help me make up for the love I lack😭

The new book is very good-looking.

This book is very good

Author, I thought you had forgotten this book.

It must be because Lao Luo is so powerful.

The characters are OOC, but the writing is good Brother, please, I don't want Silver Wolf to become a defeated dog.

It's so beautiful, there are very few books like this

I love watching it. Although it's a bit ooc, it's not a big problem.

The author writes very well, and the emotions are also very delicate. It makes people want to continue reading after reading it. Please keep updating!