Kaleidoscope at the Beginning, Leaving Konoha with Madara

I personally think that the desperate situation of reincarnation should be mixed with the dragon collision, because the length of the long tongue whip can easily directly affect the Pythagorean law of the triangle kill. You know, when you split the shadow inside, it will produce a large number of silver snake coins in a short time, commonly known as edge ob, which will seriously affect the development of the economy, and even cause damage to the entire top laner and dog head. It will cause a certain damage overflow, you know, and based on the theory of relativity of the canyon, you can easily infer that the artificially raised Kog'Maw can capture the wild Samira, so regardless of whether the cut surface of the rock protrusion has AOE, whether the nth power of Zeli contains Icathian Rainstorm, it will not affect the meeting of Thresh and Senna on the Shadow Island.

Nice looking girl, The plot is smooth, the combat descriptions are exciting and diverse, and each character is almost consistent with the original work, without any poisonous points. It is said that the author wrote in the article that Hashirama's strength is far above the class, and I think so too, but the formula book says that the two are equal, but Hashirama had murderous intent during the battle in the Valley of the End.

The writing is quite good. I was originally worried that the protagonist would become invincible so quickly that the story would not be long. But later I found out that the young Boruto was capable of defeating Naruto with one hand and I no longer had such worries [face covering] [OK]

If Eight Gate Dungeon had appeared in Konoha so early, Matt Dai would not have been unused, and Konoha Village would have attached great importance to it, and he would not have been a "Ten Thousand Years Genin" until his death (but this book is very creative, I hope you will. [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart])

Generally speaking, the writing style is okay, but the adjectives for female characters, emm, need to be strengthened. I said it two or three times about the light's neck like a white swan, but the writing style is also very amazing, and the plot is compact, and the order of the story is very smooth. It is really comfortable to watch, and I was amazed.

Well written, really interesting After reading around chapter 34, things start to get confusing. The protagonist can swim at 60 times the speed of sound and can adapt to sea water 20,000 miles deep. I really don't know why the protagonist doesn't pull out the Six Paths and play with them. This is not going to destroy the Leaf Village with one punch. [Laughing] Collapse

It's really good. It seems to be the first book to follow Madara Uchiha's defection.

I finally saw a book about following Mr. Madara

Respect the original work. The battle of wits is not mindless, and the plot is not too slow. However, the updates are too slow. The author's avatar has been reincarnated. Can't it be written faster? !

This is a very good Naruto fanfic. I have read many Naruto fanfics. Only this one is better written when Naruto was first started. I would like to give you a five-star review. Come on.

It's really good, the topic is quite novel, and the character creation is quite good. The only drawback is that it clearly gives the protagonist invincible skills, but it is still very difficult to fight the second generation. There is nothing wrong with letting the protagonist grow up, but when fighting the second generation, it can be said that he is being tortured. I don't like it personally, but it does highlight the powerful mind of the second generation. Also, in the future, the plot will have to be compiled. After all, it was during Hashirama's reign, and there was very little description in the original work. The main plot is still for the 10-tail unlimited reading. I don't know how the author plans to write it or not. Does he plan to write the plot of Shippuden as the person behind Akatsuki like in the original work (after all, it has a major premise and framework that is easier to understand), or does he plan to create his own plot but the main character is with Ben and the purpose is Wireless Tsukuyomi (although it is just Black Zetsu's aunt), but pushing the main plot too quickly will easily end. All in all, I'm quite looking forward to it. Yes, the author is very slow to update. I suggest you stock up on some.

This was the first book I read on Tomato, and it changed my view of tomatoes. Let's talk about the advantages first: the rhythm is sharp, the plot is smooth, and the characters are also very distinct. (I personally prefer to point out shortcomings, after all, it is a comment for others to see) 1. The author is obviously Konoha Kuro. It would be fine if it was just an ordinary Kuro Sandai, but the author and Hashirama are both black, which is a bit uncomfortable, but it is acceptable. 2. The protagonist's combat power has increased too quickly. Simply put, the cheating is too harsh, and currently he is purely invincible (I feel that the author did not grasp the strength of the cheating). 3. The emotional line of Heguang was not handled well, and there was too little daily warm interaction (lack ≠ none), which gave people (at least to me) an abrupt feeling. 4. The current plot, whether it's Kagami's son, Orochimaru's plot, or my best friend who's not dead, all give me a very strange feeling. I accept rebuttal, but I don't accept nonsense. That's all.

The inherently evil Senju Tobirama actually wrote our Uchiha book. I will do it myself.

This book is really good. The only thing that will make this book popular is that it is updated too slowly. I have to say that the author has done a better job of shaping the characters in the book. This is a higher quality book. After reading so many chapters, there is not a single part that makes me feel uncomfortable. I hope the author can maintain this quality and keep updating [Like]

After reading Chapter 88, give me an objective review of this book. Advantages: The details of the fighting are described very clearly. The characters are decisive and decisive. The writing is very good. The plot is coherent. It looks relatively smooth. The image created by the NPC is vivid. The protagonist's mind is well described. Disadvantages: The number of words is too watery. The details of the fights are really exciting, but there are too many fighting scenes. The dialogue between the characters in the early stage is relatively stiff. Later, this awkward dialogue is gradually eased. The skills are too cumbersome and difficult to understand. It may also be my personal problem. Summary: Even though I have never watched the Naruto anime, I can still watch it. If you like the fighting scenes, you can give it a try. It's quite exciting. I'll just read Chapter 88 of this book for the time being. I personally don't like too many fighting scenes, and I prefer the kind that fits daily life.

After reading Chapter 12, here's a summary: [1]: The protagonist at the beginning is 7 years old, and goes to the battlefield at the age of 3, and has the title of "Speed Ghost" (at least the strength of a Jonin). At the age of 4, he opens the Mangekyō Sharingan. His left eye ability: he will adapt to and be immune to any attack after being turned on. His right eye ability: after being turned on, he will return to any state within 5 minutes. There is no consumption of pupil power and chakra, and the cooldown is 1 second. [2]: The protagonist kills decisively at the beginning, with a bit of a cold image of Sasuke. Later, when he meets Hikari Uchiha, he immediately turns into a funny and funny image. The sudden change in the painting style catches people off guard. [3]: After being unblocked, Uchiha Hikari intermittently launches two Amaterasu attacks on the protagonist, and suffers a lot. After the reconciliation, she does not apologize to the protagonist, and has no apology at all. She also asks the protagonist to teach her how to practice, and threatens the protagonist with Amaterasu. It is unspeakably miserable. In the eyes of the protagonist, although Uchiha Hikari is a few years older than the protagonist, she is still a poor child who has experienced hardships, and then he spoils her, dotes on her, and finally lives together happily.

This book can be said to be very successful. Tobirama perfectly describes the kind of fighting IQ against the enemy, and the original eye-jutsu of the protagonist is also very good. The plot is also very coherent, and the description of the battle is also good, but don't adapt the protagonist to a monster in the deep sea. Can't you adapt to senjutsu?

The imagination is very powerful. In fact, when I first saw the title of the book, I thought that the protagonist would only be Madara's subordinate and not have too many shining points. But now, I am greatly impressed by the author. It is completely different from my initial thoughts. The protagonist is very charming. Not only is he not a Ponyboy, but he is very powerful. In terms of resourcefulness, emotional intelligence, and strength, he is very outstanding, and for me, the plot design The design is quite reasonable (I like Naruto, but I don't know much about the plot). What I like most is the relationship between the protagonist and Madara in the book. It can be regarded as mutual success. The images of both people are well depicted. It is definitely a treasure book for Naruto fans. The only shortcoming may be that the updates are slow. You can keep reading. I highly recommend [Like][Like][Like]

Systemless fetal penetration, super cool article, my favorite type

I give you five stars. It's very well written. Can you please add a few more chapters? Two chapters are not enough [laughing]

The characters are all well drawn. Especially Senju Tobirama.

It's worth looking at, this is the measure, not the so-called measure that was brainwashed by Itachi.

A masterpiece of Naruto, especially worth buying

This is the Naruto novel with the richest emotional lines I have ever read. Whether it is family or love, it is very good, especially when the protagonist's brother dies.

This book has clear logic and is one of the best Naruto books I have read. I highly recommend it❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️It is worth reading❤️❤️

It's really beautiful, and the world view of Naruto is also very good. It follows the original work. I won't say much. I can only say that it is invincible. It is really beautiful. I highly recommend people in the village to come and see it. Okay, but if you think I am a navy soldier, then boy, you are really invincible. In short, it is super invincible and beautiful [Like][Like][Like][Like]

It looks good, but not the front. I feel like 50 photos, but the back is very good.

It's very good. I've been following it, but the author never updates it. Has he forgotten his roots?

It's nice, but different. I hope it's longer at the back, maybe about five or six hundred w [laughs][laughs]

Is the protagonist ready? His personal growth rate is faster than his own. He looks invincible and gets blasted time and time again.