A Mage’s Journey in Another World

The writing is good, there is no heroine, but sometimes the description of women is too much and too deliberate. I hope there will be less in the future. Two stars off. I've read Chapter 65. No wonder this book doesn't get a high rating. The writing is okay, but it's just frustrating. The protagonist is always threatened, and this time he is inexplicably being used as a backing to die by a stranger who is disgusting and malicious. As a result, the protagonist feels that there is no problem at all, and he agrees, thinking that it is good to let others owe a favor... It is disgusting, such a holy mother, always likes to repay evil with kindness, and she is the protagonist who really repays evil with kindness. Regardless of being used as a weapon or all kinds of disgusting and malicious ridicule, she doesn't even dare to resist. She is so naive to help. This is not a novel written more than ten years ago, how could it be so popular. One more minus point. If you want to read this novel, you'd better read chapters 84 and 85 in advance. These two dramas are very poisonous. If you can resist it, just read it. Especially the Aaron, it is so poisonous that it is inexplicable. It is really not a plot that normal people can write. And the pendant he made was obviously a disaster. The teacher had told him to hide it and use it, but when he went to the Archmage's gathering, he deliberately brought it out and let the whole world know about it. There was obviously room for storage, but he just took it with him. And that Aaron, just because they are both men, he targets the protagonist in various ways. The intensity of the targeting is so disgusting, so violent and poisonous. I was wrong. There is no poison, only more poison. Chapters 86 and 87 are simply inexplicably poisonous. I really don't understand what the author has in mind. Chapters are poisonous. Why don't you blame the lack of readers? Don't you know the reason? If the poison points were slightly reduced, or if the protagonist had a little more brains, not so many people would give up. I really can't bear it anymore, so I'm deducting 1 star. See you again.

Comment after watching the first fifty chapters Top grade grain and grass The author has the ability to structure the worldview and a passable plot structure, and relies on the complete "Wizard World", a mature Western fantasy system. If he persists in completing this work, it will undoubtedly be a good Western fantasy work. The slow pace of the plot is a common practice in Western fantasy, but slowness does not mean that procrastination is reasonable. When it is time to push forward, the author lacks decisiveness, and there are some small bugs that do not affect the viewing experience (the Western fantasy convention/.) I hope that in the future, the origin of the green bottle, the plane war, and a series of important turning points in this worldview can be maintained to maintain a good content structure and filling. My personal rating is three stars. If you can write Western fantasy in a down-to-earth manner, I will give you one more star. I hope the author will continue to write more [Blow kiss] Follow the entry-level bookworm to guide you to read online articles

I feel that the plot and writing are already very good. It is the traditional Western fantasy style that I expected. I hope the author will spend more time on character creation. The only character creation moments that I can remember are the comradeship between the protagonist and the Paladin after defending the city. Although the current demon swordsman looks like the author wants to portray it, it is a bit too superficial. I hope the character arc can be further explored. In addition, there are too few outstanding female characters. I hope the author can create more cute and respectable female characters. I feel that the previous pastor lady can be further shaped. The other thing is the protagonist's ability system or cheats, which are a bit too scattered. The little green bottle is the topic and must be the core of the ability. In addition, the scroll talent and space talent are only mentioned when needed. I hope that the protagonist's abilities and talents can cooperate with each other and be more perfect, in line with the setting of the protagonist with high "intelligence" points (superior mental power) [laughing]. Come on, author!

Tomato is a relatively rare orthodox western fantasy novel. The author wants to tell a story witnessed by the protagonist. It feels like playing a game like Baldur's Gate. The protagonist is a bystander and participant in the world, doing his best to make things around him develop in the direction he wants. In terms of character portrayal, the protagonist's personality is pretty good, neither dark nor virginal. He has his own ideas and sometimes goes with the general trend, just because the plot requires that he sometimes seems to be nosy. Some of the supporting characters are too redundant, but there are still a few that are well written, which is good for a storytelling novel. As for the progression of the plot, compared to Western fantasy novels, the pace is actually not that difficult. This type of novel can easily be written in the form of millions of words. But here is Tomato. Readers do prefer fast-paced stories. The author can consider adding a few more small branches to each chapter of the plot, which can alleviate the problem of difficult pacing for some readers to a certain extent. Readers who are used to fast-paced novels that require reading the entire chapter to get a story are indeed less interested. On the whole, it is a qualified Western fantasy novel, and it is even more valuable to be able to read it on Tomato.

This novel really suits my taste. It is pure Western fantasy, without any modern jokes or oriental elements, and the world view is very clean. The protagonist travels back in time to learn magic from scratch, and the whole process is very solid. My favorite is the setting of "Magic Core" - magicians are divided into beginners and archmages, corresponding to one-pointed stars and four-pointed stars. Each time you upgrade to a higher level, the core will light up one more star. It is very intuitive and has a sense of growth. The fight scenes all rely on magic to fight head-on, with spells fighting and predicting counterattacks. The rhythm is tight and it is very enjoyable to watch. The protagonist is an upright dharma master who does not engage in fancy side tactics and relies on his strength to fight his way up. The overall plot is also solid, and there are no watery chapters. It is the kind of Western fantasy novel that can be read in one go and still not feel like it is enough. [Smile][laugh][laugh]

Although it is a bit jerky, it is a very pure mage novel. This kind of novel is rare now. It is a bit slow and does not fit in with the current fast food culture [laughing]

A rare masterpiece from The Wizard, worth looking forward to!

The beginning is well written! ! The writing style of the setting is very good. Although the plot later tends to be like most mage stories, the writing style allows you to continue reading. PS Is there any novel with a setting similar to the author's earlier plot, Northern Border Army Mage?

The writing is really great, and I am always amazed by the exquisite descriptions. The author is very good at sensationalism, and the gradual progress of the story always makes me cry. Unlike most interesting Tomato novels, the protagonist is not invincible and will seek revenge. There are many concerns in decision-making, which adds to the sense of being alive. There is no one who can write a good book. I would like to thank the author for letting me be moved by the delicate writing time and time again in Fast-paced Tomato.

Not bad, at a level above strength. It's my preferred type. I would like to give the author a suggestion: write slowly according to what you are currently thinking in your heart. It is already very good. There are no serious logical errors, and the character description is more obvious. In this regard, it cannot surpass most novels. As for the golden finger, it seems useless, and the Holy Mother's heart. These are all trivial things, and some people like them and some don't, so there's no need to change them over and over again. Write slowly according to your writing ideas, what kind of protagonist you want to portray, and what kind of world view you want to portray. Don't change the context of the novel casually. In the end, this book didn't have that transparent feeling that you knew the ending after reading the beginning. After seeing about 60 chapters, I think this book is much more than an 8.6.