He Failed to Start a Business in the World of Immortality and Was Forced to Work for a Great God

So far, the plot is okay, nothing bad about it It looks good in the front, but when you go back to Xuantian Domain and encounter gold particles, they start to look a little bit poisonous and watery.

It's well written and unique. I'll be happy to read your book. I hope to finish it in this style. 5 Stars.

It was very funny in the early stages, but I haven't read the later stages yet, but it was well written and managed to make me laugh.

It's good to watch, it's funny in the early stage, and it's funny and funny in the later stage. I hope it's better not to become the heroine in the future, but to become brothers. I even thought it would be better if the golden particle was a boy in the beginning.

A rare good book, I read it without saying a word

The comedy is quite funny and you can see a lot of shadows on the board, but I felt that the later part was very confusing and the pace was too fast. The content was suddenly very compact and I felt dizzy when I saw the later part. Moreover, I felt that the main character had no goals or anything, and it felt like the author just wrote it as he thought of it. (No malicious intent, just personal feelings)

For those of you who listen to books, I clicked on it yesterday and finished it. I finished reading it. The early part was very exciting, but it started to feel weak in the middle and late stages. After the release of Heavenly Court, it started to get boring, so I picked it up. The shortcoming is the handling of the triangle relationship. Although it is very crazy in line with the tone of the novel, it is still a bit disgusting to have the male and female protagonists together, which is equivalent to infertility. Although I don't like some of the plots, they are exciting enough. After all, I started following Taoist Daoist Zhenwen when I first met him.

It's really good. It's one of the few serious novels about cultivating immortals. The protagonist is inspiring, the story is exciting, and the logic is clear. In this impetuous world, there are not many people who can calm down and write stories. Come on! Author.

Cool! Extremely cool! This small book actually gave me the same feeling of pleasure as reading "Anti-Routine" before the Internet was purged. Although there is still a gap,,,,,, after purging the Internet, I can still read such pure online articles. It's worth it. It's really worth it.

The epic abstract masterpiece [Laughter and Crying] is so joyful, refreshing and exhilarating. It has successfully refreshed the upper and lower limits of abstraction. Some scenes are so abstract that they are like sleepwalking. It is different from traditional immortal cultivation. It is not violent and stressful, and it is more joyful. Such a nonsensical style, but the logic is more reasonable. Highly recommended.

The author's writing is very free and easy, and I enjoyed reading it. The writing is online and the story line is clear. I've seen the first half, and I think it's pretty good so far. It has foreshadowing and foreshadowing, the characters are very fleshed out, there are no stupid supporting characters, and there's no stupid plot. It's considered a top-notch product on Tomato. There are also shortcomings. In the early stage, the peeing and peeing were a bit random. Later, the character of some protagonists was a bit uncertain, but it was not broken. Fortunately, they were pulled back in time. In addition, the background world view was not explained clearly and needs to be unlocked slowly (this is not a shortcoming, at most it is a small flaw) Personal evaluation is excellent, average, 9 to 9.5 Points for this work. The shape of this book is scattered but the spirit is not scattered. If compared to food, it can be regarded as a kind of stinky tofu and eggs. It smells stinky, looks strange and tastes delicious.

Very good👍🏻It smells like Dean Xu

The writing of this book is very good, and the plot is very interesting. The author often digs holes and fills them in later. Unfortunately, it only scored 8:8 on the Tomato Poison List. It was on the Tomato New Book List, and I have never seen it score more than 9 points.

As expected of Ban Mian's rebel, he has some things and is very exciting. I also recommend his master's book to everyone. My magic weapon is the rule system [I learned it]

It's quite interesting, with a lot of jokes, but the protagonist's role in gold later is a bit distasteful to me. Jin kills, poisons, and turns on the protagonist again. When Jin was about to be solved, he was directly saved by the protagonist.

It's a really good book. I highly recommend it. I hope the author can keep reading. Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on! ! ! ! Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on.

Hahaha, it's exactly what the comments said. The first part is really funny and has a serious style. I haven't read the second part yet, so I'll rate it first [I learned it]

It looks good, the author's writing is good, the protagonist is crazy, and the CP can also be bumped into. But now we are bumping into each other, and we are like brothers. I don't know if there will be changes in the future. There is also a grown-up child. The protagonist is raising a child to become an immortal [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]. The creativity is quite good [laughing evilly] without a system, but those weird settings can be brought back.

It's really good-looking, but it feels a bit boring at the end. From the time when the protagonist became a god or when Jin was born. But it is true that the writing style is beautiful and the same as reading classical Chinese. The fighting descriptions are also very good.

I personally think this novel is very good. The only thing that makes me feel problematic is Huang Liang's murder logic. I haven't understood his murder logic after reading it several times. I feel like it's a little bit like a dog trying to confuse a mouse. Other than this, everything else is pretty good. I especially like Jin Suisui. Finished spreading flowers!

It's a very good book. The protagonist is a bit eccentric. It should be considered a single female protagonist, right? Although the plot is a bit messy in the later stages, it doesn't seem to affect the reading very much. It's just enjoyable to watch. The ending is okay. I recommend it. (｡･ω･｡)

Why does my book, which is so beautiful, have such a low score? The writing is really good, super funny, super humorous, and the writing style is also very smooth. I hope the author can keep writing and continue to finish it in this style. Come on, come on, come on! Has this book not been recommended yet? I feel like it will become popular after being recommended, because many books have been written well with this pen. Those other books are really boring to read, but it actually feels really good to read this once in a while.

It's quite fun. There's still a little plot in the early stage, but in the later stage, I don't know what the world is at all. It's all flaws (points to complain about) Personally, the male protagonist and the two women don't feel so stuck (it's just that in some articles, the men and women feel like they are forced to get along), but this book seems to be like that, but it doesn't feel so stuck, and it's mainly fun. After reading it in one go, I felt that it was okay. There were not a lot of unknown people or clichéd plots. The main thing was that the author was really funny. There was nothing funny about the book, but it was very entertaining. Personally, it was quite enjoyable.

Very good, I haven't seen this kind of purely entertaining article on Tomato for a long time. The front is a bit messy, but what do you care about in this kind of fun article? The author also made some adjustments to the settings later on. This is the perfect thing to watch when you are bored. If you care about the plot setting, don't embarrass yourself [laughs] Wrong score. .

I rarely rate, and this score is low. This book should be about a 9.4. The advantage is that it is fun to read, the logic is closed, and the characters are also open. The disadvantage is that everyone is crazy in the end, but it is a bit homogeneous. Regardless of the level of strength, it is not a matter of destiny. Anyway, it is a rare good book in Tomato.

The book is not bad, it is just a pure comedy, with obvious traces of imitating blackboard writing. The plot has no logic and is very confusing, but it is really funny [crying with laughter]

This book... I have mixed reviews To put it bluntly, the logic is surprisingly solid, the characters and personalities are reasonable, and the supporting characters are all natural. It's okay, I can't read it often and it's not catchy enough, but there's nothing wrong with the writing style... Strange book… It has the potential to become a god. The four stars are because I haven't finished the book yet. If I finish the book and don't abandon it, I will come back and change the review...

It's very beautiful, hilarious and hilarious. But I want to ask, does the author have a female protagonist? Looking forward to it

Nice. The characters of all the characters in the article have not collapsed. Personally, I think the relationship between the triangle and the triangle was handled well. Although I felt a little uncomfortable and confused when Sui Sui first appeared, the author quickly made me fall in love with this character.

The writing is very good, but there are some problems with the shaping of Bai Meng, especially the protagonist and Bai Meng's sexual desire. Although it gets better later, there was really a bit of estrangement at the beginning. Let me ask you recently, you don't really want the protagonist's daughter to be regarded as Bai Wuchang, do you? Also, the pace of this book is too fast, especially the chessboard part, but it doesn't hurt.