A newbie author, writing a novel for the first time.
The introduction is too dry and not enough to introduce! Go directly to the content.
Please comment if the writing is not good! ! !
Thank you all gentlemen.
Reader comments
It used to be three golden chapters, but now it's one golden chapter, even shortened to a certain paragraph.
After I read four chapters I felt like I had read four chapters.
After reading Chapter 17, the title of the article is I Live Broadcast in Another World, but the live broadcast only appears twice, and it is still very short-lived, like a bubble. The first chapter starts with the male protagonist having a "successful career." After talking about Chapter 17, where is your live broadcast? It bubbled twice
A title that sells dog meat at the expense of others. . .
It used to be three golden chapters, but now it's one golden chapter, even shortened to a certain paragraph. After I read four chapters I felt like I had read four chapters.
After reading Chapter 17, the title of the article is I Live Broadcast in Another World, but the live broadcast only appears twice, and it is still very short-lived, like a bubble. The first chapter starts with the male protagonist having a "successful career." After talking about Chapter 17, where is your live broadcast? It bubbled twice
A title that sells dog meat at the expense of others. . .