HP: Rose Pledge Poem

It's very interesting and feminist-friendly, but the love break in the middle is really uncomfortable to watch. I don't understand why two people with such different views are attracted to each other. After all, Xiaolong has really hurt the heroine and her friends. Even if the heroine has intentions, it shouldn't be so easy. At that time, Xiaolong's ideas have not changed, but they just don't show it on the surface. Every time I see these descriptions, I feel very inconsistent. The heroine seems to have betrayed herself when she escaped from the Collins house. Other than that, everything is very good. The plot is also well written. The supporting characters, especially the female characters, are also well portrayed. The friendship line is very comfortable to watch.

Good-looking, I really like my little sister, woo woo, honest, beautiful and brave little badger My wife's description is great ~ it has a great atmosphere and feeling! Praise the wife! ! ! ! ! Everyone's images are three-dimensional and vivid, and everyone is good (๑> <๑) Each character has his own unique and sparkling personality. Everyone is unique, three-dimensional, real and vivid! Super awesome! Big praise

In fact, I wanted to write about it halfway through, but after thinking about it, I decided to write this short review after reading the entire book including the extras. (Minor spoilers) About OOC: Compared with many extremely exaggerated and cheat-like fan fiction, the OOC part of this game is quite good, including the battle of life experience and changes. The trio of protagonists (including the Gryffindor faction): Those who love and like Gryffindor must be as described in the article. About cp Draco: How to say the sweetness of love? The plot can completely refer to the way Chu Yuxun treated the male protagonist many years ago, but Draco is completely a dog-licker (excluding the fact that the female protagonist has not left the family in the early stage). Personal feelings (although my feelings are not important, I hope it can be a reminder to friends who prefer Slytherin): The Malfoy family will gradually move into various states of grievance after the second grade. When I saw 70% of the movie, I almost felt so internally injured that I was about to give up the book. I couldn't see Draco's pride in coming from the Malfoy family. It was a complete process of transforming the male protagonist (and the male protagonist was also happy with it). Assuming that the personalities were swapped, it would be hard to imagine what would be said, because it is impossible to see a relationship in which both people are evenly matched. But some short clips are indeed quite touching, such as the two of them grabbing the Golden Snitch, and Xiaolong saying "You won Slytherin, and you also won my heart" were very well written! However, in this book, don't expect Xiao Long to be the "young master". Lucius is also completely distorted in the extra story. It gives me the impression that the Malfoy family did not cause any substantial harm to the heroine, right? Aren't all those injuries caused by the heroine's parents? How come she feels like the Malfoy family owes her... Anyway, I feel a little sorry for Draco. In the original book, he was just a miserable and struggling villain (he had to do a lot of work for Voldemort), but now falling in love seems to be an extra struggle. I have been evaluating it from a very objective perspective (if I were to evaluate it from the perspective of a Slytherin Draco fan, I would be furious).

It is true that my wife was too frustrated, but because the writing was so good, she endured it until the end of the third chapter. The growth direction may be slow or slow, but the growth of the heroine in the more than 100 chapters I read is very vague. I feel that apart from gaining friendship at Hogwarts and being able to be herself, I feel no other changes in the heroine. Her character is also very strange. Sometimes she is out of touch, sometimes confused, sometimes assertive, and she feels that she cannot express her true aspirations. There is also a love line. To be honest, I feel that it expresses Draco's heart a little too much. The scenes and the heroine are half and half. But the heroine hasn't really fallen in love with Draco yet. Therefore, in long-term one-dimensional descriptions, I sometimes bring myself into Draco, which makes me feel uncomfortable. It has been going one way without any results. Even when I read the third chapter, I felt a little defensive. It has been so long, and the heroine has not even reached the level of a friend in her heart. So in this situation where the growth direction of the heroine is not obvious and the love line is not yet satisfying to me, I chose to put it in my collection and let it languish for a while. Let's take a look later. After all, there aren't many writing styles that can make me feel so comfortable.

The plot is very good, and the author is very good at comedy. I am really amused by the author and I laugh out loud from time to time [laughing and crying]. The heroine's parents are not good people, but the heroine has a brother who gives her all his love. The heroine works as Draco's follower for her brother. The heroine has been being healed by her brother and good friends from the trauma of her original family. She has never She has enough self to love herself. After her brother was taken away by Dumbledore, the heroine had no worries. Then Draco was miserable and started chasing his wife in the crematorium. She deserved it. Who told you to bully the heroine before? [Laughing] When Draco fought and snatched while other men who admired the heroine would only secretly fall in love with her, the heroine finally She fell in love with Draco. Draco's good days have come, but unfortunately Voldemort has been resurrected. The heroine firmly believes that she and Voldemort are enemies. Although she can't bear to leave Draco, she still proposes to separate from Draco. Draco's good days are over [laughing and crying] I won't say what happened after that, but the ending is, I recommend the female protagonist to read it [laughing] In fact, I think the torture of Draco is not harsh enough. Draco's good life in other authors' writings is called a carefree life. It is rare to see a story about Draco being tortured. I really want to see Draco being tortured severely [laughing] Unfortunately, I haven't found a story that meets my requirements so far.

The writing is very beautiful, and the little dragon is so cute before he gets his wits about him. Those who want to fall into the trap can rest assured, I hope you can do more [flying kisses] [flying kisses] [flying kisses]

My wife's writing is really good, but I personally don't like the heroine's character very much. It makes me feel really frustrated [I'm about to cry]

Miracle! Personally, I think this is a zero-ooc HP fanfic. The climax of the battle in the later stage really makes people want to pee when they read it. The correct way to open the group portrait, every character is very three-dimensional and cute! ! At the same time, I would like to thank the author for giving everyone a good ending. Cedric and Qiu had a lovely daughter, Xiaoduo did not die alone, the Weasley twins continued to do good things happily, Dumbledore secretly visited Austria while traveling around the world, Snape presided over the wedding of Ellie and Xiaolong and was about to get a child with the unrelated name but Snape [Eat Melon] Love and courage can overcome all difficulties! To quote a short paragraph: Alicia didn't expect that her words could trigger so many people's reactions. She cleared her throat and continued: "But, from a certain day, I discovered your change, and gradually fell in love with you——" Alicia ignored Draco's "tell me" look and squeezed his hand, "Thank you for giving me the humility of an arrogant person, the generosity of a selfish person, and the frankness and restraint of a reckless person." "I swear that I will cherish this rare transformation until the last second of my life." "I love you, Draco."

It is indeed a slow-burning type, and it is not a cool article. The heroine gradually grows from timid to sincere, brave and reliable, and the character creation is very successful. The beginning will filter out a large number of people, leaving only readers who like this style. It writes a HP fanfic from the perspective of Hufflepuff, and enriches the protagonist's own plot. It does not just focus on the main line, but has a very strong flavor of Hogwarts and authentic campus life. The writing style is very humorous and funny. I kept laughing (it never stopped). I love British bad jokes. It's not nonsense and humorous, but a joyful daily life, which is very suitable for Hufflepuff! The other characters are also well written. Draco's transformation from a brat to a real Malfoy (of course I also like the sticky part with the heroine); Cedric, a sincere and cheerful gentleman; Zhang Qiu, the courage and will of women, and the friendship between girls... And many, many more! When I judge how good a HP fanfic is, first of all, it depends on how the author writes about Snape. If he is still venomous, awkward, and tooth-itching but still makes people laugh out loud because of the ironic metaphors, then this article is 90% successful in restoring the character. Obviously, the author has great skills hhhh What I like even more is that the plots between girls have more female friendships and progress, and describe more beautiful scenes of mutual support and helping to solve problems. Not all conflicts between female characters have to be intensified through female competition and then defeat the other party. Every female character is an independent individual. Even female characters like Pansy, who are often portrayed as victims of pure-blood marriages, have their own thoughts and paths. This is my favorite thing. Every character is alive. It is a treasure for me to see this book in 🍅. I wish the rating will reach 9.5 Soon, and I wish the author will get better and better.

The character of the heroine is different from most books. Some people say it's cowardly, but I think it's okay. I originally thought that the heroine would be perfect with everyone except Draco, but then I saw that Draco and the heroine really hit each other hard. It's super sweet. Although it's a bit OOC, it really doesn't stop this book from being super good. Please update it soon!

This is my favorite of all the HP books I have read. The full text of the relationship between Ellie and Xiaolong is handled very delicately, my God! It almost made me dream of falling in love on campus (although I have never been in love). I laughed out loud throughout the book, but there were many sad parts. But the finale is perfect and makes up for many of the regrets of the original work. , My God, I declare this is the real ending! ! ! ! ! ! Everyone's image and character fit the original work very well. Oh my god, I can't believe it. Such a long article is simply the treasure I cherish the most these days! ! ! I don't understand why the score is so low! ! ! ! ! I'm going to pull out all my spares and give you a high score, ma'am! ! ! ! ! ! ! Love this book so much! ! ! ! ! Well, there was a lot I wanted to express while watching it, but after watching the ending, I felt warm inside! ! I really like the little dragon written by the author! ! ! ! I wish I could meet a Boyfriend like this in real life! ! ! ! Love it so much! When I read the last section, I was very grateful to the author for bringing us such an excellent work! ! ! ! ! By the way, will Baobao's other works be developed in Xiaolujiang? [Thinking] Ok, I would like to use my book review to pay tribute to the joy that the author brought me! [Blowing kiss]

This book is really good, complete, without any surprises (for me), the writing is smooth, the thinking is clear, and it has its own conscious thinking and firm heart. CP Xiaolong really hated it at the beginning, how could he be the male protagonist like this, but as the story progressed and gradually entered the dark period of the magic world, I felt that the camp stance and tolerance and restraint between him and her could really win a ray of light for the future. Although every favorite male protagonist in the extra chapter has a place, I still feel that every moment of heartbeat, miss and regret in the main text are more like the original appearance of love. Our love is in the present, and true happiness does not stop in the future.

The writing is so beautiful, I can't get enough of it.

The character of Xiaolong created by the author is very plump and three-dimensional, with just the right description of growth. From the tsundere at the beginning, I only play with you because I like you, to the time when I am willing to let go of myself and play with you, to the time when I am willing to play with you, to the end, please play with me, there are every stage, and the growth line is very complete.

The author's writing style is really good! The ambiguous pull and the conflicting and youthful psychological activities between young men and women are very vividly depicted! And we Ced survived! Survived very successfully! ! !

So happy, so happy, I can see that Xiaosheng is also wandering around. Md, written so nb (Yu Hua tone). The characters written by the author are very vital, no longer like personal computers, which only run according to a single setting. And it's really funny. I always laugh after watching it for a while [laughing and crying], and even a professional teacher discovered it [smiling]

The writing style is real and delicate, and it is one of the rare fan stories with excellent group portraits. In addition, I think it is still a bit cool, at least I bumped into it... And I am not unhappy at all. The heroine has a very clear growth line. How could a kind and tolerant little badger make such an earth-shattering resistance in the first or second grade? That's what little lions do. I think the heroine fits my definition of a little badger. She's upright, kind, and loves food. She's very tolerant and friendly to her friends, and she's clear-minded and rude to her enemies. I really like the character who respects and supports hard work equally! But then again, I can't watch the Twins episode ah ah ah ah 3 is really interesting ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah

I finished reading this book in two days. Overall, it is really interesting. The heroine is a bit charming. Many people get along with the heroine very naturally. She doesn't feel too tough to fall in love with the heroine. The brother's line is also very well written. Xiaolong is very innocent. He finally fell in love with his younger sister in the fifth grade. Xiaolong really respects the heroine, including not using her husband's surname after getting married. I also thought it was very interesting when the heroine didn't resist in the past. I also liked the short breakup of dozens of chapters in the later period, although I wanted to cry every time I saw them break up and meet each other😢Two poor eggs, I didn't like it that much after everything came to an end. It was only at the wedding that I discovered that the love Xiaolong actually received was the most and best love from his parents. He had no real friends at all. He and the heroine also loved each other for many years before they got what they wanted. They even abused each other for a while, which made me feel a little sorry for Xiaolong.

I think it's very interesting. The emotional line between the male and female protagonists is very slow... But I think this is normal. Xiaolong is indeed very arrogant in the early stage and loves to bully others, so the female protagonist cannot like him, so the speed is just right. He makes changes for the sake of love. Xiaolong is great. I have read these books (although it is not 10). HP This is the only female protagonist I have read who plays Quidditch. It is very good. It is really different. The previous female protagonist was very timid and also because of Being poor and embarrassed, very real, but growing up, really good, very good. When I felt sorry for the heroine the most, it was when she made a choice in friendship, choosing Xiaolong or the savior. I really felt sorry for her there, because she was afraid of returning to Corinth Manor, afraid that her brother would be imprisoned, and she had to earn gold Galleons to support her brother, God... But she didn't want to hurt her friends and reported them. At that time, Xiaolong was only used to weigh her parents. I felt so sorry for the heroine! Fortunately, the relationship is not deep, and the ending is very happy. Of course, I must mention Qing Shuiwen [sending my heart] (actually, I eat meat) I watched it for the second time, hey, it's still good looking, it's so clear and elegant [crying]

A good work is enough for readers to settle down and savor it carefully. I am very grateful to the author for giving a happy ending. It does not mean the protagonist's happy love, but the joy after the war. Here I can find a little solace. The characters I love are alive and well, which makes up for the regret. The heroine has her own personality. Even though she loves Draco, she remains firm. Her courage and determination are what I admire the most. She is not a flawless girl, but she has a pure heart and a noble personality. Of course, the author's handling of emotions is very clever, delicate and beautiful. Of course, the tragic color still exists. I think this is an indispensable part of a relationship. Only emotions that experience frustration can arouse the readers' hearts. Every character is lifelike, and the portrayal of speech and behavior makes people feel that there is no sense of violation. Believe me, this is a rare and excellent work. Thank you very much, author happy new year

It's a good read. I recommend it. If you want to see Draco bow his head for love, the author should write it quickly. Be sure to read it. Can Cedric survive? Please give the author a good ending [crying]🙏🏻

It's so beautiful. It's the best HP I've ever read. I feel like it's the least OOC book. The character design of Mei Bao is super full and comfortable to look at. It's not the kind of book that is specially made for a certain person.

It's really good-looking and super awesome. I feel aggrieved and it's okay ヾ(๑╹ヮ╹๑)ﾉ". And my wife updates it twice a day, which is really great◝(⑅•ᴗ•⑅)◜..°♡ Ahhh, Delaco is really good at it! ! ! ψ(｀∇´)ψ!

The character of the heroine has changed better in the early and middle stages, but I don't really like Draco's plot in the later period. Although I can understand that the tension in the war era can quickly eliminate the barriers between broken lovers, I still feel that I can torture Xiao Long more [awkward laugh] The plot of the campus is quite interesting. After watching it, I really fell in love with Badger Yard. Everyone is a good baby! Moreover, the author is very professional, and there were many reasons why he couldn't pick up the pen in the middle. For example, even though he knew he would be criticized, he finally completed this long and high-quality novel [crying]

It's super good-looking, and I really like the well-drawn image of the heroine. Watching Alicia grow up little by little really feels like a sense of accomplishment, and everyone's image is very distinct and feels like they have flesh and blood. Really highly recommended [send heart][send heart][send heart]

I haven't finished reading it yet, but I think it's really well written! Each character fits their own personality, the arrogant Xiaolong, the sincere Ellie. I really look forward to seeing the sweet love between the two in the future ~ This is also the first time I have seen a fanfic with so many scenes of Hannah hahaha I've seen 266. Ellie already likes Xiao Long a little bit. Watching Xiao Long teasing her has a lot of fun, hahahaha, it's like a young couple in an ambiguous period yyds [laughing] [laughing]

It's very interesting. Among HP's derivative works, this book is very well written. I have rewritten the original meaning and it is not so exaggerated. I like the look and feel of this work very much. It looks like watching a movie. The description of each person's character is very detailed and fits the look and feel of the movie. The author is great! Thank you author.

It is particularly beautiful. Whether it is about friendship or family, the heroine has gone from being unconfident to finding herself with the encouragement of her friends. It is really not just about love. It is really beautiful and the writing is very smooth. I don't know why the score is not high. It must be at least 9 points [Adoration] and it is not OOC. After I just read a Draco OOC article, this article is like a fairy tale.

I like it very much, I hope the author can do more [Adoration]

The character has no OOC. Even if I know the plot later, it is very fresh to watch. I feel like I am also a member of Hogwarts and grew up with the pig trotters. I especially like the heroine, who is as cute as a quick little cake 🍰