Tsing Yi*********

He is a treasured author. In terms of writing style alone, it is very comfortable. Whether it is various dialogues or descriptions of scenes, they are all smooth and will not look weird. The only thing I hope to improve is the description of the heroine's battle scenes. I hope it can be a little more detailed. How can I put it? I feel that no matter what is described, it all gives me the same feeling. I feel that it lacks some outstanding and eye-catching parts, so I think that the description of the heroine's battle scenes can be highlighted, and I feel that the whole article will be more exciting. Overall, it's pretty good, and there's nothing that makes me feel uncomfortable. So far, no flaws. And although it is about cultivating immortals, the system is relatively traditional, but it is not very popular, it is quite fresh and refined! Keep up the great work! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The heroine is steady and steady. It can be said that there is no golden finger. She relies on her own efforts to climb up step by step. The book is relatively slow to read, but it is really interesting.

It looks good, I like the character of the heroine, she is quiet, not noisy, and practices silently

This book by the author Dada has great writing style and a great plot. It will definitely be a hit. Finally, I wish the author Dada and Dada's other books will be prosperous! (Abandoned, I'm very sorry. I only read pure female strong stories. I really don't like the feeling of the heroine being suppressed. Help me, I feel like a super female [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] [face covering])

It's really possible, although at the beginning, it wasn't the kind of macro-writing that I liked. He said that as the plot progresses, the charm of the entire character is revealed. I especially like this kind of heroine with extraordinary perseverance and a firm heart! And I think the heroine is so handsome. This does not describe how handsome she looks, but her temperament is very handsome! It's pretty and suits my taste! I hope the author will continue to work hard and work hard for more updates!

It's so good-looking. I feel like the male protagonist is a senior brother, and he still has unrequited love. But I hope there won't be a love scene too early (I secretly hope it's better to be arranged in the finale or a spin-off), and it can be a little more subtle. Many novels become boring after they confirm their feelings, and it's a bit hard to imagine the heroine being in love. The heroine is super beautiful, super cool, and super strong when she's alone.

It's been a long time since I've seen a heroine who has risen through the ranks with her own perseverance. She's arrogant but not arrogant. It's wonderful [Love] Super pretty! [Sending my heart] I look forward to the update every day, and I really like the relationship between the straight girl Bufan and the senior brother [laughing and crying]

The novel is really well written. I like this kind of beginning and ending, and the plot is also bumpy in the middle. It's very interesting, highly recommended, and the heroine has her own thoughts and opinions. If she doesn't have the Virgin, it would be a pity for the Lord of Sword Peak. Come on, the author, it's really funny sometimes. It's not a loss if you enter the pit [Send your heart][Send your heart][Send your heart]

It's been a long time since I've seen a serious article about cultivating immortals. It's really good, and it's not as clear-cut as other articles.

If I haven't watched many male protagonists, I hope they will appear in the later stage. I hope they are stronger people from the upper world. As for now, I don't think they are worthy of the female protagonists. People who don't watch CP can leave. I really like to see male protagonists. I hope they are two strong people.

This is the real heroine, not watery at all, very realistic

The setting of the heroine is very good. The step-by-step story of cultivating immortals is more in line with the heroine. But I don't like this kind of hard-working heroine with a clear male protagonist. I hope that the heroine will not fall in love with anyone in the future. Keep reading. If it suits my appetite, I will give it a five-star review. The only annoying thing is that the heroine has been chasing a man for thousands of years [awkward laugh] Although they have occasionally crossed paths during their training, there is no need to hang themselves from a tree [awkward laugh] Taoist companions are not necessary [awkward laugh] She blushed with the hero around chapter 50, and kissed her after about a hundred chapters. The next two hundred to three hundred chapters are the best without a hero, and the heroine is only beautiful because the hero says he is doing her good and does not contact the heroine and does not take the initiative to find her. Skip to chapter 500 and read a bit The female protagonist and the male protagonist have already reached the last term, but the female protagonist ran after the male protagonist, caught him, saved him, and then confessed to him. The male protagonist hugged her and responded. Wow, it was so well written. You should write a sweet pet article or a romance article. Really, don't be a big female protagonist. It's really outrageous that you can't live without a man. [Thinking] The biggest failure of this novel is the premature and smelly and long relationship line. Even if the two met in the early stages, they partnered, cooperated, helped each other, grew up, and finally ended up together again. It's better than the inexplicable one at the beginning. Anyway, I have never seen a fairy tale write a love line so early (around chapter 50). I still like the main heroine to be beautiful alone. The rest of the partners, relatives and friends, any relationship is better than the Taoist couple. Farewell!

After reading Chapter 89, I haven't even thought about giving up the book. Trust me, it's very interesting. Although there are many Tomato books, you can understand them all. No matter how nice the cover is, if you read ten chapters, you won't be bothered. But after all, it is free. People have worked hard to write, but I read it without spending any money. So you never say it's ugly, but you must say it's beautiful! It's really good to read, especially the first few dozen chapters, which are very smooth to read without a single typo. The author must love his article. In some later chapters, it can be seen that the Taoist heart is unstable because of the rush of progress, and there are some small typos. However, this book is really good! The heroine is terrifyingly strong!

It's really super good. I never follow serialized books. I have dozens of serialized books on my bookshelf and I haven't followed them yet. I'll catch up on the updates the next day after reading them. I'll go to the bathroom after work to catch up on the follow-up. It can be said that this book is in the top three of the hundreds of books I've read on Tomato. I think the score is so low because of the serialization or the lack of people. Don't miss it if you pass by. I plan to read other novels by this author. I feel that the author should be a person with cultural heritage and connotation. Please update more! Otherwise, I'm afraid I'll forget to chase after you [smile][smile]

My wife's writing style is very good. And there are plenty of details. But it would be better if there is no cp. But it doesn't matter. It doesn't matter whether you have CP or not. If my wife can do it, it would be really suitable for her to write exciting stories about heroines.

It's very interesting to read, the plot is very novel, and the rise in cultivation is not sudden. It's a very interesting and refreshing article. Although the plot is a bit vague and simple when I read it quickly, it's overall very interesting. Please update it soon~ The author is great [laughing][laughing][laughing][loving][loving][loving][like][like][like]

Mrs. Mrs. Mrs. Mrs. Mrs. Mrs. Mrs. Mrs. Mrs. Mrs. Mrs. Mrs. So beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! There are just a few updates... I hope the author will make more updates!

Nice! It's just a bit missing, not fun to watch [laughing]

It's a very good story. The heroine has a good character. She has her own persistence and her own bottom line. She never shows mercy when she needs to be cruel. She stands out among all the stories about virgins, wrongdoers, poverty alleviation, and nannies. That's why the rating is so low. It's not like someone deliberately gave a bad review. Well, the author is a bit of a cp killer. Ling Yun has reincarnated, and the geniuses of various forces have basically become enemies. Even the senior brother is gone and has no contact. Hahahahaha

It's not finished, but it's pretty cool. Although the character of the key heroine is cold, she has a slow-paced anti-humor. Sometimes what she says is really funny and very modern. It is said that there is a male protagonist, but the senior brother appeared very early and is a moisturizing type, but there are many and complicated mysteries about him, so he has not made it clear yet. Can only watch the follow-up. . .

Super pretty! From the Beili Realm to the Upper Realm, the heroine Lin Bufan's strength has always been achieved step by step by her own efforts. It is not like the traditional fairy tales where the heroine has a chance to come to her. Oh, fortunately, the heroine has met many noble people and friends on her journey to become an immortal, including Master Yuheng Xianzun, Second Master Jiang Zhiyuan Xiaoyao, Uncle Zhong, Qizhu Immortal Medicine, Senior Brother Jianfeng of Taixuan Sect, Junior Sister Jianfeng, Ling Yun, Brother Agou Death Master, etc. The heroine has never been alone on the road of cultivating immortality. Although there are many difficulties and obstacles, I believe that the heroine will eventually overcome them. In addition, the male protagonist Ye Xunjian's experience was really unfortunate, but fortunately he met the female protagonist Lin Bufan who said "If you don't abandon me, I will never leave you" along the way. The birth of the male protagonist was planned by his tribe and biological parents from the very beginning. The tribe and parents regarded him as a container for training the best Taoist soldiers. Only the days at Taixuanmen in Beilijie are the happiest days in the male protagonist's life, and Daxuanmen is the home that belongs to the male protagonist. The biological parents regard the male protagonist as a container. Only the Taoist master of Taixuanmen Jianfeng Peak, the male protagonist's junior wife, regards him as their own biological son, and his younger junior sister regards him as his biological brother.

It's pretty good. I rarely watch female videos. The fairy tales can write less emotional scenes. It doesn't matter who the male protagonist is. The protagonist must be strong in the end. The male protagonist can be strong, but he can't be as strong as the protagonist.

The plot is compact and the characters are complete

In fact, I feel that it is really good. It is a novel with a relatively grand world view and a very tight connection that I have read on Tomato. It is very novel and does not make people feel bored. Moreover, the author's description is also very vivid, and I feel that I can't help but get involved in it. I think there are a few better points: 1. The heroine novels don't have much emotional content, but the emotional scenes can promote the development of the plot (in fact, many people think that the heroine novels should not have CP, but I don't think so. The heroine is independent in thought, firm and powerful in action, and some personal emotions can actually promote the development of the heroine) 2. The plots are connected more vividly, without any sense of toughness, and the settings of this world are introduced to you step by step. 3. The emotional scenes are particularly poignant, well described, ordinary but powerful. At the beginning, Xiaofan's grandfather, master, Emperor Huangquan and the ghost master, I really cried when I saw Agou was the ghost master. I was lucky and happy, Xiaofan had another friend. 4. Some of the heroine's moves and personal insights are quite real, and some of the descriptions are quite real. The heroine is a swordsman, and she is not particularly in-depth about other practices. In fact, I think this is normal. In other articles, all skills are full, but I find it a bit strange. I have seen some of the author's feelings. In fact, I really don't often comment in it, but I really think the author's writing is really good. You are really great. You have shaped a new world. I really admire you. I also hope that the author can continue to persevere. I really hope that this book will be published. I really think this book is very, very good. I am waiting for updates every day! I will always support you, come on duck

Indescribably good-looking, Lin Bufan, just the name alone is already extraordinary! It can be considered a strong female character in the true sense. The female protagonist is about the same strength as the male protagonist, but she should be stronger in the later stages! The emotional lines are not too outrageous and make people feel quite comfortable! The whole text doesn't involve too many misunderstandings around feelings, which I think is pretty good! It mainly writes about cultivating immortals, with less romance. The only shortcoming is that it is updated! ! !

The author's capital letters ✍🏻 are really good, but I still think it's better for the female protagonist to be beautiful alone. If there is a male protagonist, I don't really want it to be the senior brother, I don't like the senior brother 😏 It is easy to hold the female protagonist back, I hope there is a strong male protagonist 😎[face covering] Really true

I didn't read many chapters, but I retreated when I saw a male protagonist. I like big heroines who focus on their own careers and can be ambiguous, but I can't directly decide who she is. The stories with heroines without CP are the most interesting. That's not to say that there are no emotional dramas, there are, but the heroines focus on their careers and have ambiguous partners, maybe two or three. But it doesn't affect the heroine's focus on herself. My cp seems to have no emotional drama, but in fact it is just a matter of frustration among various cp readers. If it's decided directly like this, well, forget it.

It's good, I can't tell you more, but if you don't see it at the beginning, it's not the end. The heroine has a tough character.

It's nice to watch. Actually, I'm not opposed to having a male protagonist, but I don't need to have his scenes all the time. Haha, a few emotional lines are good.

This is a book that describes the power of Tao and rules in great detail. When I read it, I felt that the big picture is very big. At the same time, the heroine's IQ is online, not a saint, and it is not a brainless and cool article, but it could be updated more.