New book for newcomers
The author updates from time to time (usually weekly updates
Non-traditional cool writing
Two heroines, group portraits
Fake aloofness, real idiot, reborn, chasing his wife, attacking (?)
Is it really attack/receive? )
As the famous cold iceberg, the brave man who saved the world from fire and water, Mu Wanxing was reborn, before he met that person.
Looking at the little girl in front of her, she smiled and rolled her eyes, and began the long (not) but sweet journey to chase his wife.
She originally thought that in this life, she could only talk about love with A Yuan or something, and if not, she could deal with the devil in the previous life.
But...
Who are these guys who suddenly appear? !
Meng Lingshi, the god of dreams who is in charge of dreams, will sweetly call her and sister A Yuan
The witch who travels through the stars and the commander of cause and effect will talk to them familiarly and help them make wedding dresses.
High in the sky, the cold and ruthless Si Yu will shower her with grace.
Si Yuan, who has been missing for a long time and is said to be dead, will help them host the wedding with a smile. The other couple holding the wedding at the same time is his childhood friend and the Wind Dragon King.
Not to mention that she and A Yuan got a lot of weapon spirits from who knows where...
And...
What does it mean that Miss Demon King is actually a good person or an old friend of A Yuan?
What does it mean that A Yuan is actually Si Chen, the most mysterious time god in the divine world?
What does it mean that everyone around you is reborn?
Ah? Am I Si Yu? Real or fake?
Ah? Is the powerful extraterrestrial demon actually the target of hunting?
Until finally, she pushed open the wooden door in front of her and saw Miss Chuangshishen smiling at her.
She said: Long time no see.
Modern ✧ Magic
Only the previous life! No sword in this life)
Reader comments
I have read all the content that has been updated so far. Generally speaking, except for the plot in the first chapter, which is a bit messy, other aspects are very well written. The subject matter of the article is very novel. I haven't seen such a well-written Eastern fantasy and light fantasy article for a long time. This is the first time I have seen such an article since I came to Tomato. The writing style of the plot can be said to be at a very good level among newcomers to Tomato and even in the field of light novels. The literary talent is very good, but it does not make people feel that they are young writers. The character creation is also good, but there are too many characters and people may only remember the person but not the name (this is the case in group portrait articles). There are so many characters written but there is no setting to swallow the book or collapse. This is already very good for a new author. The world view setting is divorced from the classic Eastern fantasy immortality system, which is a rare feature on Tomato, which has serious content homogeneity. From the current point of view, the whole novel is getting better and better. The plot in the first half of the first volume is very convoluted. It feels like the Riddler is in many places. It is very uncomfortable to watch. I often can't understand it. I am confused about some plot settings. I only understand many things after seeing the author's solutions. But in the second half, this problem began to gradually improve. Starting from the second volume, this poisonous point basically disappeared, and the foreshadowing in the previous article began to be recycled, and some previous doubts were also resolved. Personally, I think that in the current environment, if the previous content is not changed, this book will dissuade many new readers. In short, this book is a promising book for the future. After all, the author is still a senior in high school and does not have much time to write and revise. I believe that after the college entrance examination is over, the author will be able to solve the problems in the article (of course, academics are the most important, and he will first finish the college entrance examination and then study how to write and revise this book). I personally have very high expectations for this book. That's pretty much what I want to say. I wish the author and all readers a happy day (σ≧︎▽︎≦︎)σ.
Meow meow meow? Quietly give yourself a good review.
The update cycle should be very long, but it will not be interrupted.
Chapters 1 to 2 are updated every week, and may be updated during the long holidays.
If you want to give gifts, just read the ads. There is no need to spend money. I just want to write as a personal hobby, not a full-time job.
We didn't add the ancient label!
Very beautiful, very potential work! [Learned]
Haokan meow, I enjoyed watching the interaction between Ruyuan and Guiyi🤤🤤
Come on, I'll wait for you to finish. Of course, you still have to study hard now. This is my sincere advice from someone who has experienced it [face covering]
Yes, I feel that the writing style has surpassed that of most newcomers. However, some parts still feel not smooth, but the flaws do not hide the advantages, it is still quite good [laughing evilly]
Aba Aba, there are many names ()
It looks good, I like it, thank you to the author! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
Colorful, but clumsy, some things can't be handled, Aba Aba
The writing style is very delicate and the writing technique is very vivid. It is a sweet and beautiful lily novel.
Good writing! The characters are vivid! Nice! Tomato is a must-read, but updates are a bit slow.
I have read all the content that has been updated so far. Generally speaking, except for the plot in the first chapter, which is a bit messy, other aspects are very well written. The subject matter of the article is very novel. I haven't seen such a well-written Eastern fantasy and light fantasy article for a long time. This is the first time I have seen such an article since I came to Tomato. The writing style of the plot can be said to be at a very good level among newcomers to Tomato and even in the field of light novels. The literary talent is very good, but it does not make people feel that they are young writers. The character creation is also good, but there are too many characters and people may only remember the person but not the name (this is the case in group portrait articles). There are so many characters written but there is no setting to swallow the book or collapse. This is already very good for a new author. The world view setting is divorced from the classic Eastern fantasy immortality system, which is a rare feature on Tomato, which has serious content homogeneity. From the current point of view, the whole novel is getting better and better. The plot in the first half of the first volume is very convoluted. It feels like the Riddler is in many places. It is very uncomfortable to watch. I often can't understand it. I am confused about some plot settings. I only understand many things after seeing the author's solutions. But in the second half, this problem began to gradually improve. Starting from the second volume, this poisonous point basically disappeared, and the foreshadowing in the previous article began to be recycled, and some previous doubts were also resolved. Personally, I think that in the current environment, if the previous content is not changed, this book will dissuade many new readers. In short, this book is a promising book for the future. After all, the author is still a senior in high school and does not have much time to write and revise. I believe that after the college entrance examination is over, the author will be able to solve the problems in the article (of course, academics are the most important, and he will first finish the college entrance examination and then study how to write and revise this book). I personally have very high expectations for this book. That's pretty much what I want to say. I wish the author and all readers a happy day (σ≧︎▽︎≦︎)σ.
Meow meow meow? Quietly give yourself a good review. The update cycle should be very long, but it will not be interrupted. Chapters 1 to 2 are updated every week, and may be updated during the long holidays. If you want to give gifts, just read the ads. There is no need to spend money. I just want to write as a personal hobby, not a full-time job. We didn't add the ancient label!
Very beautiful, very potential work! [Learned]
Haokan meow, I enjoyed watching the interaction between Ruyuan and Guiyi🤤🤤
Come on, I'll wait for you to finish. Of course, you still have to study hard now. This is my sincere advice from someone who has experienced it [face covering]
Yes, I feel that the writing style has surpassed that of most newcomers. However, some parts still feel not smooth, but the flaws do not hide the advantages, it is still quite good [laughing evilly] Aba Aba, there are many names ()
It looks good, I like it, thank you to the author! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
Colorful, but clumsy, some things can't be handled, Aba Aba
The writing style is very delicate and the writing technique is very vivid. It is a sweet and beautiful lily novel.
Good writing! The characters are vivid! Nice! Tomato is a must-read, but updates are a bit slow.
Rich content, very interesting