Metropolis: the Soul Has Penetrated the Seventy-Year-Old Man, I Am Invincible

It's okay, at least the protagonist doesn't get younger, and he doesn't fall in love with a young girl. The system rewards are not too exaggerated, and the system does not reward money, physical objects, etc. It only rewards skills and experience.

The following plot is too deliberate, and the rewards from the system will definitely come in handy. It is too deliberate, which makes the plot unrealistic. Too fictitious and unreal, as if everything was arranged

Although I know that the author will stop updating, it would be better for you, author, not to stop updating. Otherwise, I will send you a box of specialties [angry]

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It's a good old man story, quite interesting, at least it's not the kind of story about picking up girls under the banner of being an old man and doing tasks to make him younger. But there are two points. The first is that he has a son and a daughter who are both married (I have not seen any grandchildren); the second is that the author emphasizes the system a little too much, so he often mentions how to do it for the task, which is reasonable but may be a bit different in terms of perception. If it is not pretentious, it will not affect the reading.

Later on, being caught at a concert was considered a poisonous point. There is really no need to write it like this.

All I can say is that it's okay.

It sounds pretty good to me, but it's really a bit unbearable. The physique of the special forces is not particularly toxic to me. Well, they may think that special forces are a bit like that, but I feel a little better. Hey, that's not the main problem. The main problem I gave these four stars is because of you. Well, did something happen? Why so slow? I was thinking about it. I started listening to your book a few days ago, and the book I listened to two days ago has more than 200 chapters. You... Um... How should I put it? You can take one card a day, that is, if it gets stuck, why don't you tell us? Let's look for other books first

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Very good, well written, perfect

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Haha, it's extremely poisonous, and it also has the physique of a special soldier! ! !

Author, if you don't update it, you will let down my five-star rating [crying][crying][crying]

The table tennis part was pretty rubbish.

Good hahahahaha good

The plot is coherent, the subject matter is novel, and there are not many ups and downs. I suggest you watch it if you are bored.

The author will update his work quickly! We have waited until the flowers have withered. Without your new works, I feel that my life has lost a lot of fun.

The author has fallen into disgrace. He only updates every few days. How can the score be improved? More and more!

One is missing. This guy is too lazy. He writes one chapter a day and now it is discontinued. Abandoned.

As long as the novel is brought to the live broadcast, it will be full of nonsense

The first part is okay, but the chorus in the middle sucks more than 20 chapters.