New works are released. Welcome to Tomato Novel to read my works. I hope you all like them. Your attention is the motivation for my writing. I will try my best to tell every story!
Reader comments
Many of the names are confused.
It's not that you messed up your name so much
The names are all wrong, but that's not a big problem! The main problem is that the plot doesn't feel complete enough! The three views are still normal, but a simple summary of the plot will suffice, it's not necessary! But the question is, does the female protagonist in the first world have a male protagonist? It still feels a bit reverie. It feels like it's not perfect, so keep working hard!
Many of the names are confused.
It's not that you messed up your name so much
The names are all wrong, but that's not a big problem! The main problem is that the plot doesn't feel complete enough! The three views are still normal, but a simple summary of the plot will suffice, it's not necessary! But the question is, does the female protagonist in the first world have a male protagonist? It still feels a bit reverie. It feels like it's not perfect, so keep working hard!