The Heartthrob NPC Always Wants to Go Berserkinfinite

Everyone is welcome to comment. I like this type of infinite flow very much, but the writing style is limited, the logic is weak, and some lines are also problematic. I hope everyone can tolerate it. Moma [blowing kiss] Sorry! Because this is my first time writing, the wording, transitions, and plot are messy. Thank you for your understanding and support. I will continue to work hard. Thank you for your tolerance [send heartfelt]

I haven't finished watching the first world, but the first world is really messy and hard to understand. I don't even know how Gu Ming appeared. Suddenly there was an iron door, and then there was Gu Ming inside the iron door. It seemed like a large part of it was deleted in the middle.

Now I'm reading the first copy: many people say it's not coherent. It may be that the author uses multiple perspectives to write, which makes it confusing. Some supporting characters were also given names. To be honest, except for the protagonist and the people in the protagonist group, the supporting characters rarely remember their names. And I can't even remember it. Simply use red hair for short hair and long hair. Generalizations are fine too. Every supporting character has a name. Can't remember. There is another one that is not a problem. I just looked at the first copy, and now there are three people named Gu. The three of them should be attacking in slices. But appear in the same perspective. Some people say they can't tell which one is which. After all, they all have the surname Gu. Looking dizzy. I can't stand it either. Finished reading the first copy. There are many incorrect sentences that cannot be connected. It reads weird. I didn't understand the first copy either. It's so baffling. It just gave me the feeling that I had had a weird dream. I am very silent. Okay, I give up. I hope the author will change it again.

I haven't finished reading the rest. Actually, the first plane is quite confusing, but the emotional line is nice [face covering] I've read it all, come on! It can be seen that the author's writing style is getting better and better, it is very beautiful [blowing kiss]

The plot setting is beautiful! The author can use less third person pronouns when writing, and can use character names appropriately to make it smoother, because every time I read it I can't tell who is who and who is doing what [face covering], I hope it can be improved.

It's pretty good to watch, but the story line is incomplete. I wish I could tell it all. It's so hard to catch my appetite. The story can only be generalized, and some can't be generalized. But I really want to know the story of each copy. I cried without a big boss to analyze it. TT, and there are many bugs. After reading the book review, I can accept it and read it again. This article is really a small problem, and it is very interesting. [Congratulations] It's really good. I love this super gentle beauty who is also smarter than she is. The protagonist NPC helps the player with tasks. Her heartthrob attribute is quite obvious so far. It looks good. Five stars⭐

Everyone is fascinated, but the protagonist is not stupid, he is intelligent, calm, and has some nagging about the system. The storyline should be faster. I hope it will be updated.

Although the front is a bit messy, I can't help but it looks so good, hahahaha, the writing is getting better and better, the plot is also very good, the wife is also very beautiful, and the slices are very lickable hahaha. The smart and charming wife is looking forward to seeing the player recognize her identity as a player and prompting for more updates. She is so awesome! !

I think overall it's very interesting [Congratulations], but don't be like me, feeling that the first chapter and the second chapter are not connected, thinking that they were deleted (I believed other comments), so I found a bunch of pirated articles and played around to find the differences [Thinking] It's a bit confusing, I recommend reading more comments

There is no pretense, the plot content is very compact, the author's writing style is very good, and the image of Chu Chu is really highlighted. Chu Chu is a gentle and strong person, and it is really easy to get involved! ! ! And some of the details portrayed by the author are really good (//∇//) Ah, I don't allow any of you to not have seen it! !

Nice! If the protagonist is not a virgin, he will not feel aggrieved! The copy of I Have a Kitten at Home is really great! Hahahahaha my wife stepped on the dogs under the cat's claws! Now I see it's almost finished, I recommend it ~ The dungeons are advancing layer by layer. It can be seen that each dungeon is making progress. The Shura Field is very fragrant.

Come on, I'm optimistic about you. I don't ask for anything else at the moment, I just ask you to keep updating [Shy] I like Chu Shi's wife very much. The setting is very exciting to my xp, hey hey hey hey hey hey hey [love] [please update]

It's good-looking, the main character is intelligent and not stupid. I just don't know if it's np or 1v1. In every copy, there are players who like the protagonist [face covering] [top post] [begging for more updates] [begging for attention] [admiration] [laughing]

Oh dear, please, although a man is a boy until he dies, he is still thirty years old. Please change your age. I am so estranged [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

I like the overall story line very much. The story has a certain rhythm and the characters are very delicately drawn, making it easy to feel immersed in the story. Maybe there will be some typos due to the length of the article, but the flaws are not outweighed. Personally I like the whole story👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻.

It's good, but not enough. I originally wanted to read more, but I finished reading it all at once [face covering]. I was a little bit reluctant to read the tenth volume. I hope I can open another one after finishing this one [crying] I really liked it. I was really cute and handsome when I was young. My favorite is the copy of the Shen family. It's so appetizing to me. [Blow your heart] [Send your heart] [Send your heart] I will always support you behind your back [Blow a kiss] [Send my heart]

Why isn't it popular? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! It's so pretty (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Hui Chang likes it!

Nice! The hour is so cute!

Looks great, cheers! ! ! ! ! The writing is very delicate [blowing kiss] I like it

I like it very much! This book really touched me

It looks good, it looks good, I like it, I like it, it's written in big letters and it's very good

Come on (ง •̀_•́)งI like this book very much

I like this dark underbelly setting It's so funny when I'm complaining inside~

It's so beautiful, so exciting [laughing], good reviews ~ The author will update soon, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh-money-buying-buying-buying-buying-buying-buying-swearing-swearing [shy][shy][shy]

It looks good. I like it. My childhood wife's acting skills are very good. Oh my, my childhood wife is coming into my arms.

Can you update a thousand chapters a day? Woohoo, it feels so uncomfortable, I'm stuck here (p_q)

It's really beautiful, I really like Chu Shi's baby~

It's very beautiful, although it's a bit messy in some places, but it doesn't affect the whole book [Sending my heart to you]

It's pretty, very sweet, and it's also sweet if you like the [Adoration] extra chapter. It's been a long time since I've read a slicing story. Some time ago, I always saw the slicing story about my beloved wife's silly and useless shou, which really shocked me. This story is not stupid at all. My childhood wife is super smart and very strong. It's a double-strength story, and the slicing crematorium is also very fragrant. Like.

It's really good-looking, I like heartthrobs and the writing is pretty good. If the male protagonist is not weak, who doesn't like Shura Field [Chigua]