Be Sure to Let the Sword Sect Saint Wear a Bunny Girl Costume

I haven't calmed down to read a book for a long time. Maybe I've read too many fast-food novels on Tomato. Now I don't read as hard as I did when I first started. I've read quite a lot of books, whether online or offline. I think this book is one of the best among online books. Of course, various I have different opinions, but this book is very consistent with my thoughts on Xinyi's online articles, so please update the author soon, otherwise I'm afraid that I will wait for you to update for a long time, and then inexplicably forget this book later. I don't want to forget this book. It is very exciting, and the description of the supporting characters is also very good.

Author, you must be able to write three million words, right? [Smile][smile][smile] The author is in good health, and there will definitely be no situation like asking for leave, cutting off updates, or unfinished work, right? [Smile][smile][smile] The author is in such good health, and the update speed must not be slower than five chapters a day, right? [Smile][smile][smile] Author, you definitely don't want my five stars to become installments, right? [Smile][smile][smile]

Normal online articles are like a glass of strong wine, spicy and spicy, but this book made me feel like tasting a cup of bitter tea. Maybe there is a little more vision that everything can be achieved, but everything in the vision is real. People will cry, laugh, grow old, and die. The scenery at the top of the mountain is certainly fascinating, but who doesn't admit that the gentle breeze in the mountains is also unique?

I don't understand why people who really think about and write books well. But what they got was this score. Those illogical and shoddy industrial saccharins were easily rated at 9 points. I think the author's ideas and writing style are not bad, which is as good as what I've seen in Tomato.

Not bad. The author is so good at writing emotional dramas, he must have had many relationships.

Invincible, the ending is a bit anxious, but the pacing in the beginning is really awesome. The whole story is a good background, and the group portraits are also remarkable. You can tell what kind of character it is by just saying its name. I suggest the author go back and remake this novel. The front part does not need to be changed, and the end You don't need to be so hasty, change the title and cover, and use this time-travel background to make it a hit. I've finished watching both Ex-Girlfriend and Teacher, and Bunny Girl is my favorite. Many people died and I burst into tears. Even the supporting characters are rich in flesh and blood [crying]

It's said to be time travel, but it's more like daily life, and it's said to be about cultivating immortals, it's more like martial arts, but the love aspect is well written. The author is like a female video author, and is really good at writing about love. Basically, this book has nothing to do with cultivating immortals. If it's fun, just eat some candy. Other cool authors really need to be developed.

In the next ten years, bookworms will read nearly a thousand books. After reading this article, I was very happy and commented: How awesome😀 —————— The characters are all well drawn, and they are not just posts.

It's very interesting and very good at writing. The things written are not novel, but the author's descriptions can easily penetrate into people's hearts. It's amazing.

The author's delicate emotions and details under the grand narrative are really unique. I came from "Living Together After Breaking Up", and I am very happy to see that the author has maintained this kind of delicacy and sensitivity. The promotion of grand narratives in this book is still remarkable, but I always feel that something is missing. I hope to continue to work hard [code hold] [code hold]

Wisdom Teeth Author! It's a very interesting time-travel theme. Normal time-travel is originally poorly written, but this one with time-travel is quite novel. Come on, author! Expect

This novel is really fascinating, with ups and downs of the plot, which makes people unable to put it down. The characters are well-drawn and the writing is smooth, making it feel like you're actually there. The author's imagination is amazing, presenting a rich and colorful world to readers. Undoubtedly, this is a masterpiece worth reading.

It's really beautiful, don't be fooled by the cover.

It's okay. In fact, what is mostly described is not the relationship between the male and female protagonists, but a series of things done by a group of people to save another world. In the later stage, it is basically all about strategies and fighting. However, the author is obviously not very familiar with this area, so in my opinion, there is still something wrong. But overall it's okay, but as expected, the author is still more suitable for writing sweet love [Thoughts]

Compared with the author's other book "Living with My Ex-Girlfriend After Breaking Up", I feel that this book is free and full of firepower. Unfortunately, it was finished hastily due to data reasons. First of all, the setting of this book is very interesting, and it can lead people through group travel. The emotional collision between the male protagonist with a modern worldview and the female protagonist with a fairy worldview is very chemical. At the same time, the construction of the world view is also very attractive. The author's nicknames for the Jianghu people are very high-quality, and they are not homogenized with some common martial arts or fairy works, such as this fairy king, that demon king, etc. This work still maintains the author's excellent character creation level, and it can be seen that the author went for group portraits and was very ambitious. However, the ending is indeed very sloppy. Even the creation of the seven stars of the protagonist group was hastily completed before it was fully developed, let alone the contemporary disciples of the sect. It is really a pity. Then there is a small personal complaint. The Seventh Star Pojun feels more suitable for my sister. The concept of breaking and then establishing clearly suits my sister perfectly, and the shaping of my sister is obviously more focused than Pei Yuqiu. I can only imagine that the author may have set my sister as the Seventh Star Pojun from the beginning, but the completion has been put on the schedule in advance. The large amount of ink required for the story of my sister has no choice but to be abandoned. The author's writing has a light sense of lightness, which is quite unique in Tomato. Although I like this work very much, the sloppy ending is indeed an indisputable fact. I will deduct one point and look forward to producing more exciting novels in the future!

This is my dream novel. It is well-conceived, delicately written, and the language seems to have magic power. The only flaw is the title, which almost made me miss such a good novel... It seems a bit like a promise... In short, the author must continue to write.

It is a masterpiece in every sense. The regret is that the later data is not good. The author deleted a lot and did not write it. But it is really great to insist on finishing it without unfinishing it. It feels like the whole book is like a beautiful phoenix with a bald patch of hair on its hindquarters and tail. Although there are some things missing, at least it is a mythical beast as a whole, and it does not become like a phoenix head with a chicken tail. The author is really great.

From "Ex-Girlfriend Living Together" to "Vampire Lolita" and "Swordsman Saint", the author's writing is really delicate and the emotional scenes are well written (the male protagonists all have an inexplicable perversion, but they don't feel bad). And the most important thing is that the male protagonists of the three books will give a full chapter confession in the middle, which is so cool! ! ! !

I have read Chapter 160 so far, and I feel that the latter part is indeed not as good as the first one. There are a lot more scenes for the brothers. Most of the scenes on Earth are good brother chapters (without the heroine), and the heroine's scenes on Earth have also been greatly reduced.

It's useless to say more, because I came late. This is a good book. Although it does not fully realize the author's ideas, this does not prevent it from being a good book and a very comfortable group portrait. I didn't write, but I had a story in my mind, so I was half an author. It was precisely because of this that I could better feel the idea in the author's mind, and also see the effort the author had put into it. In the era of serious classical literature, the great Confucians wrote about the world and changes; in the era of modern literature, writers wrote about people and connections. In the era of online writing, authors write about their thoughts and desires. So what should we write in the post-Internet era? Who will write it? Humans, in order to speak, have spent hundreds of thousands of years evolving language. It took nearly a thousand years to pick up the pen. What can I say? So the story begins in the universe. From myths to online articles, the pen has been placed in front of everyone. People have spent hundreds of thousands of years preparing this pen. What are you going to write? The author has given his answer and that's what I got from this book. It has nothing to do with thoughts or desires, this is just a story.

It seems that the rating is quite low, but the content is surprisingly to my liking [Blow kiss]

An extremely excellent novel. This is a power that should not belong to tomatoes at all. The narrative is grand and interlocking. Even the names of the characters are carefully considered. The author has a very clear outline when writing. It is not the same species as the common shoddy stuff.

It's a very good book, and it's already among the best among the novels I've read in Tomato, but I don't know why the rating is so low. Although the pace becomes faster in the later stages, it's understandable considering the actual situation. The whole book contains a lot of content, with good details and a lot of foreshadowing. It is also coherent, the characters have distinct personalities, and the various artistic conceptions are well created. If you are tired of mindless and cool writing, this book is a good choice.

In view of time issues, I won't say much, but this is definitely the best time-travel novel I have ever read. There is no other one. You can see the author's care for this novel. The details of each character in the novel are set very carefully. You can also see the author's helplessness because the popularity of this novel is not good. But I have to say that this novel is very successful. Come on, author.

Why is this book rated so low? It's not enough. It's not enough at all. Please add a few more chapters. The author is great.

In fact, this book is indeed poorly written in many places. Although I like this book very much, I still can't help it because of the too fast pace in the middle and later stages (I feel a little ashamed of myself for raising a book [face covering]) But let's talk about the advantages. In fact, the group portraits of the book are well written. I can feel that the author is very serious in writing and has the ability to write. Several characters (especially Wang Kexin) have been well portrayed. According to the author, Wang Kexin is even a little out of the author's control [face covering]. I believe that if the length is longer, the author will write everyone well. Secondly, the author's setting is actually good. People outside the world are people outside the world after all. They are here to help the heroine and provide golden fingers. In fact, the male protagonist and his classmates are not very strong in the end and can only reach the second line. But in the end, when it was said that they were all golden fingers for the female protagonist, I really felt that it was quite interesting. The overall setting is actually quite ordinary, with free travel, but group travel is indeed relatively rare, and it doesn't really spoil my perception. Bonus points, I thought about the group travel I've seen before, and maybe it's only Zhetian (I didn't even think of Zhetian having such a problem at first [face covering]) I look forward to the author's new works in the future and hope that the author's next book will achieve better results [Note]

First of all, there are a total of twelve forces in the three sects, four floors and five pavilions. There are too many representative figures appearing in the Tiandao Society, and many characters have no roles, such as Bai Changqing, Jin Juechen, Zou Zheng, and Junzi Lingxiao. Secondly, there are some forces that have almost never appeared, such as the Changsheng Sect. Sun Cheng and Zhao Xueyi also didn't have much description. But overall, it was touching and tearful, and it also had a story, and the writing was good. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is fun. Worth a look. But it's a pity that it ended too soon.

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good The jokes are just right but not vulgar Emotions are richly expressed through language Reasonable plot and well-rounded characters Sugar content meets the standard

The character of the heroine is really exciting to me. I love it. I love it.

Keep up the good work, it's not like I haven't seen group wear before, but I really don't see this kind of thing, otherwise I just don't have a good grasp of it, and the backend will be messy. Come on, author