Another World: Starting with Total War
异世界，从全面战争开始
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 788k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Fantasy High-Concept
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
222Chapters
8Reads
19.6kReads · all time
In booklists 2
Reader comments 24
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Why give three stars? Because the author wrote the protagonist very well earlier. But when we got around chapter 30, why did we suddenly write all the extras? I feel like the author doesn't have an outline. The problem is that it's normal for you to write extras in your novels, but it can't all be extras, right? It would be better to just use it as the main text and write a new protagonist.
I originally thought it was okay, but after reading dozens of chapters, I came across a half-length extra...
Why do you suddenly write so many extras? The normal plot only lasts a few chapters.
Why are you writing such a side story? Why not write the main text?
There are more extras than the main series, so let's just find a new protagonist.
Why do you write so many extras? Affect viewing experience
Overall, it's okay. I can only say that the plot is not mindless and the hooks are not great, but the extra story is simply superfluous. At the same time, without seeing the map, it is difficult to correlate major events with people and countries and regions. Finally, I would like to share my own thoughts. I don't want the author to engage in revolution later. This is simply not feasible in an environment like the Middle Ages. Come on, author, you can still write well [thoughts]
The first chapter is to poison
More main plots and less branch plots. It's a bit overwhelming. If you want to enrich the plot of a supporting character, two to three chapters are enough. You can easily use four or five chapters, plus an extra number of names of people and places, which makes your brain hurt and very tiring. Use official titles or nicknames to simplify the names of people and places.
There are so many extra chapters that it is almost a memory every four or five chapters, and it is said to be a total war, but in the later chapters, we never see the protagonist's war development. They are all kinds of competitions, and scenes where a few people take risks to kill monsters. In the early stage, there is no more than a bandit. It is better to change the name to Adventure King.