The gods are high above, casting down many souls from other worlds. The powers they possess come in many forms, and one of them happened to arrive on the Pulos Peninsula to bring changes to the long-divided land!
Reader comments
Why give three stars? Because the author wrote the protagonist very well earlier. But when we got around chapter 30, why did we suddenly write all the extras? I feel like the author doesn't have an outline. The problem is that it's normal for you to write extras in your novels, but it can't all be extras, right? It would be better to just use it as the main text and write a new protagonist.
I originally thought it was okay, but after reading dozens of chapters, I came across a half-length extra...
Why do you suddenly write so many extras? The normal plot only lasts a few chapters.
Why are you writing such a side story? Why not write the main text?
There are more extras than the main series, so let's just find a new protagonist.
Why do you write so many extras? Affect viewing experience
Overall, it's okay. I can only say that the plot is not mindless and the hooks are not great, but the extra story is simply superfluous. At the same time, without seeing the map, it is difficult to correlate major events with people and countries and regions. Finally, I would like to share my own thoughts. I don't want the author to engage in revolution later. This is simply not feasible in an environment like the Middle Ages. Come on, author, you can still write well [thoughts]
The first chapter is to poison
There are so many extra chapters that it is almost a memory every four or five chapters, and it is said to be a total war, but in the later chapters, we never see the protagonist's war development. They are all kinds of competitions, and scenes where a few people take risks to kill monsters. In the early stage, there is no more than a bandit. It is better to change the name to Adventure King.
More main plots and less branch plots. It's a bit overwhelming. If you want to enrich the plot of a supporting character, two to three chapters are enough. You can easily use four or five chapters, plus an extra number of names of people and places, which makes your brain hurt and very tiring. Use official titles or nicknames to simplify the names of people and places.
Shi Xiao is bored (=_=)
I can only say that you need to be patient when reading, because starting from chapter 24, the author is writing a memoir, and he wrote another 30 chapters, and it didn't end until around chapter 55. After reading the memoir, all I can think about is who is the protagonist? What are you doing? Where is the plot? This sense of confusion. . . All I can say is to be patient. . .
Good or bad, but this is a novel, not a movie
I haven't read the extra episode at all, and it would be of no use if I wrote about it.
I can't figure out the priority. I want to have a full-scale war but stick to competitive and individual battles. I want to enrich the background and semi-group portraits but I have no ability and no navy to play them. I'm not talking about the pure love power generation block.
The historical background inserted in the middle is too outrageous. One chapter is enough. No need for so many chapters. Readers will want to run away after seeing this.
I haven't finished watching the extra yet and I've already forgotten the name of the main character.
Old bookstore certification is better
Medieval Warhammer Hahaha Good Knight Sir
Total war warhammer chicken thief lord knight text
Okay
I have a role!
I saw the epic victory and I can't stand it any longer. You signed a war contract, what are you doing now? Running business. Your writing is too detailed, making it hard to read. When buying an apple, how to place it on the shelves, how to transport it, where it goes, where it is produced, etc., Etc., Are too fine and broken. Total war, war accounts for the most part. The way it is written now, ten million words will not be enough to unify the peninsula. The plot is 1 point ~ the outline, the background is 99 points, and I am tired of reading it. The novel requires reading and reading.
Why are there so few troops stationed in that place in front?
A good noble lord war novel
Can you give me a map? I don't know where it is.
The writing is very good, both the battle details and the campaign details are well described.
Why give three stars? Because the author wrote the protagonist very well earlier. But when we got around chapter 30, why did we suddenly write all the extras? I feel like the author doesn't have an outline. The problem is that it's normal for you to write extras in your novels, but it can't all be extras, right? It would be better to just use it as the main text and write a new protagonist.
I originally thought it was okay, but after reading dozens of chapters, I came across a half-length extra...
Why do you suddenly write so many extras? The normal plot only lasts a few chapters.
Why are you writing such a side story? Why not write the main text?
There are more extras than the main series, so let's just find a new protagonist.
Why do you write so many extras? Affect viewing experience
Overall, it's okay. I can only say that the plot is not mindless and the hooks are not great, but the extra story is simply superfluous. At the same time, without seeing the map, it is difficult to correlate major events with people and countries and regions. Finally, I would like to share my own thoughts. I don't want the author to engage in revolution later. This is simply not feasible in an environment like the Middle Ages. Come on, author, you can still write well [thoughts]
The first chapter is to poison
There are so many extra chapters that it is almost a memory every four or five chapters, and it is said to be a total war, but in the later chapters, we never see the protagonist's war development. They are all kinds of competitions, and scenes where a few people take risks to kill monsters. In the early stage, there is no more than a bandit. It is better to change the name to Adventure King.
More main plots and less branch plots. It's a bit overwhelming. If you want to enrich the plot of a supporting character, two to three chapters are enough. You can easily use four or five chapters, plus an extra number of names of people and places, which makes your brain hurt and very tiring. Use official titles or nicknames to simplify the names of people and places.
Shi Xiao is bored (=_=)
I can only say that you need to be patient when reading, because starting from chapter 24, the author is writing a memoir, and he wrote another 30 chapters, and it didn't end until around chapter 55. After reading the memoir, all I can think about is who is the protagonist? What are you doing? Where is the plot? This sense of confusion. . . All I can say is to be patient. . .
Good or bad, but this is a novel, not a movie I haven't read the extra episode at all, and it would be of no use if I wrote about it.
I can't figure out the priority. I want to have a full-scale war but stick to competitive and individual battles. I want to enrich the background and semi-group portraits but I have no ability and no navy to play them. I'm not talking about the pure love power generation block.
The historical background inserted in the middle is too outrageous. One chapter is enough. No need for so many chapters. Readers will want to run away after seeing this.
I haven't finished watching the extra yet and I've already forgotten the name of the main character.
Old bookstore certification is better
Medieval Warhammer Hahaha Good Knight Sir Total war warhammer chicken thief lord knight text Okay
I have a role!
I saw the epic victory and I can't stand it any longer. You signed a war contract, what are you doing now? Running business. Your writing is too detailed, making it hard to read. When buying an apple, how to place it on the shelves, how to transport it, where it goes, where it is produced, etc., Etc., Are too fine and broken. Total war, war accounts for the most part. The way it is written now, ten million words will not be enough to unify the peninsula. The plot is 1 point ~ the outline, the background is 99 points, and I am tired of reading it. The novel requires reading and reading.
Why are there so few troops stationed in that place in front?
A good noble lord war novel
Can you give me a map? I don't know where it is.
The writing is very good, both the battle details and the campaign details are well described.