The Martial Arts Scholar

It was very confusing to read, and it was very unsmooth. It was in the first person and then in the third person, and the dialogue was also messy. I would give it five stars for a newbie, but after reading four chapters, I was so confused that I slipped away.

The battle force jumps, it looks stupid

Author's first comment 2024.4.21 Come on The first volume briefly introduces the world, which is not very satisfying because there are still few characters. The second volume will slowly build up the world in more detail. I hope readers will like it. Group portraits are difficult to write, so I will write slower in the future, but I will finish the book. And I want to see if anyone is reading this book? Can you give me some hints?