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I just finished commenting in the chapter review and after reading a few pages, I found that book friends were asking this question, so I came out to write a long review [Thinking] First of all, most book friends came to read it because of Bentetsu's name, but after entering, I found that it was using Naruto's Sharingan. Then I continued to read a few chapters and found that everyone was commenting on one issue, combat power. Yes, this is a topic that all fan writers cannot avoid, especially cross-world combat power comparisons. It is too difficult to control. No matter how you write, some people will disagree. I won't express my opinion on the combat power of Naruto and Bentie here. This is one of them. Second point, the author, you wrote in Chapter 7 about the fate of not entering the local area. There are a lot of problems with this point. First of all, you are writing about a Bengtie fan. Bengtie's world view and plot are written around the fate. This sentence of yours directly eliminated the main point of Bengtie. At present, Looking at the game, it is a story that revolves around destiny, but what you have written now is a bit over-the-top. You use the power of other worlds to kill in this world. The writing does not look like a Bengtie fan, but more like a comprehensive comic wrapped in Bengtie. Looking at the plot, I feel that it is not surprising that the next chapter will go to other worlds. Finally, I wish the author to improve his writing skills.

I would like to ask whether there will be no heroine, single heroine or multiple heroines? This is really important to me. Please, the author please reply [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

The writing is very good, but I like relaxed and happy things. The author's writing is more realistic and does not suit my taste (not that the author's writing is not good, the author's writing is very good, but I don't like this kind of subject matter). For example, the charity in the lower district of Yaliluo No. 6 And what happened to Xi'er. If it were written in a relaxed and fast way, the protagonist would hand over the materials to the earth fire, and use the method written by the author similar to the work-for-relief method to improve the livelihood of the lower district. Living environment, but the author writes about human nature (again, it's not that the writing is bad, it's just that I don't like this kind of subject matter), and the Xi'er written by the author is different from the Xi'er I understand. The Xi'er I understand is a sharp-tongued person, and the Xi'er written by the author is too paranoid and hates the upper-class area too much. I feel that Xi'er in the plot is more wary of the upper-class area (the above are my personal opinions)

I have a friend who was so angry that the author was too slow to update. He cried and fussed, so pitiful, so the author should update quickly!

Dear readers, the author's design alone must have some shortcomings, so as long as I see the various questions raised by everyone, I will revise them in a timely manner if they are reasonable. [Note] There are also various suitable suggestions, and I have listened to them all. [Full] For example, artificial intelligence, and some designs with some loopholes. [Crying] So please be merciful and spare your life, thank you all [attention] [send heartfelt] Also, add some patches and explanations that quick readers may have missed: My humble opinion: The Doomsday Beast's anti-star weapon is at a normal level (the combat effectiveness of Beloberg's is increased by more than ten times, without the mass-produced Fate Walker), and the anti-star weapon can annihilate a planet's civilization. Invincible against others, useless against enemies (otherwise the Anti-Material Legion would just keep mass-producing this thing) Finally, thank you for your support and tolerance, thank you! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Hello author, I am the parent of this account. Recently, my child has been refusing to eat or speak, nor is he angry at all, with no expression on his face. However, I found that he only smiled and appeared angry when he was reading Tomato novels. Later, I opened his mobile phone when he went to the toilet and found that he has been reading your book recently, and I also found a critical illness notice under his pillow. His time is running out, and I can't do anything for him. The only thing that can be done is to pray that the author will update dozens of chapters a day, right? I hope you can spend his last days with him and not let him die regretfully, please.

When will the author make double updates? It's not enough to watch at all [thinking] [pouting]

It's very interesting. It would be better if it could be updated soon. All in all, it's a very good book.

I was just thinking about why there are so few updates and so few people are reading it together. The book is quite interesting, but the exposure isn't very good. How can I put it, there are so many people jumping on the street, but there will always be people who like to read your articles. Please don't give up. Even if there are two or three of us readers, we will stand behind you. To be honest, I didn't read it for a while because I was trying to support the book. There are many books that just become useless. If I don't support them, at least I think your subject matter is still very interesting. Come on, author!

It looks good. There are some other elements mixed into the Star Dome Railway. It's great to follow your heart. It's not good enough at all.

Very interesting, good luck to the author

I'll give you a good review first, and I'll read the book later.

It looks good, I love watching it, please update more [please update more] I hope it will be a single heroine (very hopeful)

I hope there will be a mecha! ! After all, Jing Jia is romantic! ! !

Give it a thumbs up, it's pretty good [laughs]

Okay, it depends on your own grasp of various world views. There will definitely be conflicts anyway.

Ten points or even nine points of good health. My rating is that it looks good. I like to read the author's updates soon.

Okay, very nice

Good luck, good luck, come on, the author is great

Come on, author, I didn't read much, they raised all the questions, try to correct them as much as possible, and then improve the writing style and conception [Like]

Good reviews, not rigid. I really like reading this kind of novel that combines multiple worlds. Although the beginning is a bit bland, keep it up.

How to say it? This book is pretty good,

The writing is pretty good, keep up the good work, author

Alas, why are there so few people? It's quite interesting, and there are many wise words [even though I can't understand it]. It's undeniable that this novel suits my taste.

Wow, but who is the heroine?