Hp Encounter in Another World

It's very good-looking. Although the front part is a bit inconsistent with Severus's character, it is really the Severus we hope for. I dare say that when Severus came into contact with Allen, I felt that he was very happy at that time. The professor went through too much suffering and lost his previous salvation. Now God has taken pity on him and allowed him to gain a new life in the second creation. He was born again with the tip of your pen. This time he may not be the most perfect among all the second creations, but he is happy. I hope you, the author, will continue to work hard and a new Severus will be born from your writing. Also, I just watched Allen change from the top one to the bottom one, and then from the bottom one to the top one, and from the top one to the bottom one again, so who is going up and who is going down? Let me make one more comment. Regrets may not disappear, but fate will always make up for them. The tip of your pen has eliminated some regrets in the book, pulled out an Allen from the river of fate, and let him come into Severus's life. The Severus in this book is a new life, so that he can be loved once again. The regret is still there, but fate has taken pity on him and made him no longer sad in suffering.

Sif hurry up and get together with Allen! (>_<)

A good novel will make people want to read it. I don't comment on the plot or whether it matches the original characters. From the first chapter to more than 40 chapters, my specific impression is good. This is a good book. Even the new author writes it fluently. There are not many mistakes in the article. I just wanted to open a book before going to bed, but I unknowingly read it at about two o'clock in the morning. I flipped through the chapters and found that the author updated it 18 days ago. I haven't read the subsequent plot yet. Is this book discontinued or in some other state? My suggestion is that if the author has the ability, try not to interrupt and give his novel an ending. Even a bad ending is better than no ending at all

Currently in Chapter 131, I feel really distressed and helpless for Kai. Alan is too miserable, right? Kai will die if there is a problem. Has Kai replaced Harry? Similar to a Horcrux? Children are really easily deceived. If it is serious, will Allen die? It seems that Allen is often more serious than Kai. How about dying? It will teach the child a lesson~

It's so good. It's not easy to find new books these days [Thinking]. The author should update it quickly.

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

It's a new construction on the frame, it's quite nice (Liu Ming, Fire Tongs

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Keep up the great work! Well written

Beautiful, sweet and reassuring

I found such a treasure of a book, but no one reads it! I really like it, I really like it, and I look forward to the author's continued updates🥰

The plot is quite novel, with additional settings, it is different from the original work, and the emotional line is also quite interesting.