Pirates: Uchiha of the Straw Hats

The theme is a rare pirate growth stream. The plot is indeed very good, both the creation of the original protagonist and the rewriting of the main characters of the original work are perfect. A protagonist who has goals and trusts his companions is no worse than those iceberg protagonists. On the contrary, he can leave a better impression. At the same time, not touching the love line is worthy of praise. As a Hokage character, the protagonist is not from the same world even if he can blend in. As a companion, he is a good and trustworthy partner, but falling in love is a bit inconsistent. (There are really people who don't know that the Uchiha clan, except for Obito, are all Nando [laughing evilly]) In terms of skill setting, in order to fit the plot, it is understandable that higher performance and settings are necessary, but the mistakes made in other novels must not appear. With the addition of earth life, even Kaguya's ice can be cut. In some novels, it is actually unable to defeat Aoki... It can only be said that skills may not necessarily be of any help to character creation, but poorly written skills are enough to persuade most people. Finally, I hope the author will work hard and update it. I will try my best to help you. After all, this is a rare and good book.

I want to know whether the protagonist will have the Samsara Eye in the end, and if so, how to explain it. The protagonist without blood relatives is destined to be unable to obtain the Eternal Kaleidoscope. Without the Eternal Kaleidoscope, even if he has the cells of Hashirama and Madara at the same time, that is, the power of Asura and Indra, it is impossible to awaken the Six Paths Sage's Eye of Samsara. Hashirama's cells can at best be the protagonist's eyes. It provides replenishable pupil power, just like Obito who has been transplanted with Hashirama cells. It seems that the hope of the reincarnation eye is slim. But if there is no samsara eye, it would be much less meaningful to emphasize that the protagonist has both Hashirama and Madara cells. However, the endless pupil power and the powerful wood escape, Hashirama's own immortal body and his terrifying chakra amount comparable to that of a tailed beast are added together. I hope the author can further improve the protagonist's combat power in terms of powerful ninjutsu, kaleidoscope eye skills, and the protagonist's swordsmanship (it can be seen that the author does not want the protagonist to steal Zoro's limelight in this aspect, but the swordsmanship is good, which means it is not as good as Zoro). However, there is another very important point, which is domineering. When you come to the world of pirates, There is no reason why the protagonist cannot learn Haki, and the positioning of Haki in the pirate world is very high. The influence of fruit ability is ineffective in the face of absolute Haki. At present, chakra does not have this ability. Of course, if you really don't want the protagonist to learn Haki, you can make a fuss about the characteristics of Senjutsu Chakra to make him and Haki the same to a certain extent, similar to Ba Matang? Finally, the Immortal Body comes with Hashirama. This can be written with a little explanation. Wooden Release + Senjutsu + a certain level of swordsmanship + various forbidden ninjutsu + eight gate armor + terrifying amount of chakra + top-level three-color domineering + powerful kaleidoscope ability is really very strong. It's very strong, and it can match the combat power of Joeyboy and Im, so the author can't forcefully change or make up any settings for the purpose of the Samsara Eye. It's really not necessary. The above are some of my opinions. I hope it will be helpful to you [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

The characterization is quite clear, and Luffy's personality charm has not been reduced because of the appearance of the protagonist. However, if you want to open a kaleidoscope, there must be a knife, right? My little heart is no longer strong enough for me to see the knife.

Very nice. The author has not lowered the personality charm of Luffy, the protagonist of the original One Piece anime, because of this current protagonist. Very well written, keep it up

Nice! I haven't watched One Piece, but I like Naruto. I really think the writing is super beautiful. Why are there so few people? And I want to see the kaleidoscope blooming in Ruki! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Is there a female protagonist? If so, who is the heroine?

It's better, okay! [Praise]

Yes, there are quite few poison points. I don't know why the rating is so low.

A good novel, nothing too bad, but the writing style could be improved a bit

I think this book is very well written, especially the scene in the middle where the main character is cut off. I think it's quite interesting, mainly because it is somewhat different from the original work. I hope the author can stick to it and do more [laughs]

The writing is pretty good, keep it up.

Too short and not enough to watch

It's not enough, I feel so itchy that I can't stand it! I have saved 11 of them. Come on, big brother who writes books!

Writing is not easy, four stars encourage points

It must be five stars [you taste carefully]

The needle does not poke, the poison is less, and it can be seen

It looks good and matches the original work.

Don't break it, big

I want to watch the protagonist smell sex while using it

Come on, author, it's just a pity that fewer people are watching.

This book is still good, but there are too few viewers. Maybe the ratings scare people away. . .

Very moody, I quite like it, at least it's interesting

Fantasy linkage, even if there is an extra ninja, it is not out of the ordinary, the captain speaks in big events, and the protagonist is not invincible, it is really good

It feels pretty good, but I feel like the update is too slow. I'm not sure why so few people are watching it. This can be considered a good fanfic, come on, author!

Come on, keep updating me! It's best to update ten times a day! So pretty! [Smile][smile][smile][smile][smile][smile]

The plot is exciting and very enjoyable to watch. The character is not broken either

It's quite interesting, a pretty good fanfic, each has its own opportunities.

It looks good, the story line is complete and the logic is smooth.

It's very enjoyable to watch using Naruto's ability to fight in One Piece, it's very good. There are very few writings about ninjas in One Piece. This one is very good. It shows the abilities of the protagonist without changing the character of the companions.

I like it, very good One Piece fanfic